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wow this is really good please update soon

awwww poor everyone especially Martha and Jack loved the part with Orlando Bloom, but why do you have to write all of this stuff trying to brake them up even if it is very well written - i'll only be happy again if Martha and Jack dont brake up cause they are ment to be and live happily ever after is marthas secret that she is pregnant? if it is what a georgeus baby that would be

awww that was soooo sweet. glad that there happy for the moment loved the part where jack decided against cutlery and chose pillows - always the better chose :-)

yeh good luck with exams, have them to so know what your going through... my birthday was last wednesday, happy birthday its so good so far update when you can thanks xxx

please let jack be ok its really good so far

oh no what has happened here Jessica is just plain evil and so is corey so combined they are triple evil martha - dont ask for a divorse ... jack help now great writing by the way - please update soon oh i forgot - martha please dont die

gripping stuff fantastic

poor poor jack silly martha silly why would you do that you silly girl? why would you believe Jessica? now martha listen to me dont do anything stupid - do you understand dont do ANY thing stupid please update soon and DONT let martha do any thing stupid

yeh it is good but jack have you forgotton about Martha? how could you you bad bad boy. please update soon

NOOOOOOOOOO Martha what is wrong will you - sillly girl why would you do such a thing you cant get anyone cuter then jack - how will he ever be able to forgive you? ;-( ;-( anyway please update soon and let them live happily ever after

yay you updated but why did they have to fight *sad face* oh well now they can make up - please? xxx

thats what i thought to - jack save her

wow i was almost crying to but now i am happy again cause they are going to have children you are a great writer, please write lots lots more xxxx

thankyou great so far...