~Angel~

Good Idea! Please update soon Nicole

That was fabulously written! You should write more stories. You're very good.

Great chapter! I loved the bit where Tony goes 'Matilda's her-'. Please make Martha and Jack more than just friends. Update soon!

I wonder where they're really going to end up sleeping... Great chapter. Update soon

Go Harry! Go Harry! Go! Go! Go Harry! I thought he was going to kill Laila. I take back what I said yesterday. Please update soon!

That was my Favourite line! This was one of the best ending I've ever read. Please write another fic. Just as brilliant.

OMG! Harry's not going to kill Laila like Jack (accidently) killed Harry's daughter is he? OMG OMG OMG! Please update soon.

They were so close to kissing... I loved the bit where Colleen's like..." Come back here, Madge will be here any minute!" Please update soon...

That chapter was great and it made me laugh! keep up the great work!

Aw! Jack and Lucas are so cute together! You can just imagine Lucas being all worried about his big brother like when jack hurt his ear and Lucas was all worried about him Please update soon and add some Martha bits too !

Aw! Martha and Jack are so cute! I'd love it if this was happening in the show! Keep up the good work!

Yay! a girl! Hope she's a daddy's girl. Update soon!

Run Jack! Run as fast as you can? please don't keep me waiting... please update ASAP!

The proposal was great! And she said Yes!!!!! (Well who wouldn't say no to Jack? ) Update soon!

please don't kill Martha! Hope your next chapter gets proof-read quickly!

please don't kill Martha! update now soon!

I love this fic already. Please, chapter 2 soon!

Yes he will fall in love with his getting-married best friend. Too bad i'm not writing this fic it's all up to you to make him fall in love now. Update soon, please...

That was so emotional and beautifully written. Why did Martha have to die I hope you can update soon

I love this fanfic already! I hope Martha and Jack get back together... Update soon!

Why doesn't Martha want to move in with Jack? I would probably be jumping up and down before he even finishes the question... Update soon!

HA HA! That was so funny, loved the end song! Can't stop laughing now!

That was such an emotional chapter... i'm addicted to this fic and it's only up to chapter 2. Update soon!

Great new fic! more soon please... I love it. Martha and Jack are so cute!