mrsbrody

Step Brothers, so funny.

I absoulutely loved that oneshot it was great and I think it was totally Jack and Martha. Also I especially loved the messages thought they were hilarious and incredibly sweet. I loved it I hope you'll do more in the near future. Oh and one more thing I had to put in my favourite line "Not that he'd checked" so funny again well done!

Shawshank Redemption such a good movie and not at all predictable.

Depends what its about i'll give a few sorry if their bad. IN THE KNOW if it is a gossip magazine GIRLS LIFE or GIRL TALK if its a girl magazine GLAM if it fashion hope I helped once again sorry if they are bad.

Great Chapter I'm so happy she moved back in. This is turning out to be a very funny fiction well done!

Great chapter if Martha doesn't want him I'll have him and never leave him poor Jack its so sad. Keep up the good work.

Belle said it to Matilda?

^^ yeah you should definately write more fics you have pure talent.

That was such a sweet chapter little Jack has his own little Martha. This is seriously the best fiction I've read and I'm not just being nice.

That was wonderful I'd never thought I'd say that I want jack to die but I die he's where he belongs now that was so well written. I like the name Emily Martha but that probebly a bit bias seeing my name's Emily he he.

Another great chapter you manage to capture the emotions so well it was so believable.

This is so sad I've never cried in a fic before but this is the first one. That was so sweet of Martha to do that she knows him so well. Excellent writing.

Another great chapter that was so sweet.

I had tears in my eyes after reading that I agree with everyone who said that it was beautifully written because it truly was. I can't believe Martha's gone.

So far this fiction is so cute i'm loving it Martha and Jack are so adorable.