-Annie-

Okie dokie, thanks. It is good that the story is unusual, because it means that there are not other copycat fics out there, and while people might find the couple a bit odd at first, they get used to it and, basically it just suits the writing and the fic. Also, I think having unconvential pairing sort of frees the boundaries, because there is a lot more storylines to write about with a new couple. Another reason why the latest Challenge is going to be great!

I'm really sorry if my comment came across offensive. I was trying to make a joke, so that is why I put a line through the 'vomitworthy' bit. Although, obviously, it wasn't very funny. I'm really sorry, and as you can see, after that rude statement from me, I also wrote that I was really enjoying the fic and loved the writing. Which I definitely do! Furrylogic, you are definitely very brave to use this unconvential pairing, and it is a good thing! I'm loving the writing and all the explanations are excellent! Again, I am sorry that my comment came out rudely, because it definitely wasn't meant to be. I look forward to reading more! That last chapter was brilliant by the way!

Yay! I'm so excited now! Sounds great.

*grumbles* Oh ok. Don't worry, I'll get over it. But I like sevenpudd's idea, a M/L fic!? *helps nudge* Lol, just joking!

^Yes, yes, I agree Nicole! I"lll help nag...*rubs hands together*

That was lovely. Oh well, the writing was lovely, the story was sad! Don't apologise! Shocks and twists in a story, always make it more interesting.

Yes! That's right Nicole! Now leave them happy. *glares* Rightio then, update now! Oh, great writing! Everything just fitted perfectly!

I wonder who's life will be in risk....hmmm....Jack?! Lol. Great chapter! Keep up the fantabulouso writing.

^Umm, she's dead...unfortunately!

Yay! You made the right decision getting them back together baygirl, *pats on back*

What?! What?!

^Ah...okie dokie. ;)

Call me clueless, but what exactly is 'sixth form'. Like, what's the equivalent for Australia...Lol, I've just always wondered...

Lovely chapter!

Wow! That was brilliant Jackie. I just want to say that I think you have some amazing writing talent, and your stories never fail to amaze me. I'm soooo excited to read the sequel! I'm off to read it now!

Despite the vomit-worthy odd pairing, the story is really good. I'm a bit curious to see Martha's reaction to her husband's affair. I really loved what you wrote in the Challenge, so I definitely look forward to seeing more writing. I definitely think the story can rise to it's full potential now that you have no word limit!

Awww...I *heart* Jack! Lol! Great writing. More soon please!

Wow! I'm scared now! Beautiful chapter, the writing is really good. The descriptive phrases are working well to set the atmosphere. Keep up the nice work.

Beautiful Jackie! I think that scene fitted just right. Excellent work!

Lovely work Kat. The emotions fit well, and the description is just perfect.

Wow! When I first read this fic, it was during the Challenge, so my mind was set on judging according to the rules and guidelines. But, reading it now with no limitations, the story is amazing and ten times better! There we go, an honest opinion. ;) This is definitely one of your best fics jackandmartha!!! Nice work. *Pats on back*

So adorable! Oh, I could read JM fluff all day! Lovely chapter, all we need is a pash now.

Perfect chapter Jackie! Loved the emotions and suspense!

Lol, no worries!

Awww, so cute! Loved it. Update now!