whispered_envy

Poor Belle! And poor Aden- he always seems to get blamed for stuff he didn't do! Dramatic but good stuff...keep it going!

Aww! I started reading the sequel before I had commented on the ending of this! It's really perfect- I love how they helped each other so much, you write Adelle perfectly! Thankyou for writing this!

Aww, great chapter- loved Belle sticking up for Aden! I like this secrecy with Geoff and Annie's past, even though I want to know what going on!

Great chapter! I wonder if any of them will read it...thought Nicole's reaction was perfect.

Aww, that was a good chapter! So cute...I loved Belle and Geoff in this! Great work!

This is a great start! I love how you've introduced all their painful pasts...I get the feeling they're going to come together somehow...I like it!

Great start! I wonder what he wants with her...Aden is so cute!

I love these two! And that article was so slashy! They balance each other so well, and their sense of humour really fit with one another. Even though they play very different charcters in All Saints to what they play in HAA, their relationship still feels really strong. Aww, imagine if they got together...all their little real and adopted children running around with one another...it'd be like a strange but perfect version of The Brady Bunch.

I'm a Ruby fan too. I can really understand the maturity they've given to her- her mother died and she's spent much of her time in boarding school, so she's probably always felt that she had to look after herself. She's a nice fresh change from Annie and Melody.

Those are awesome! You are awesome! Love the eyesex one!

Saw it yesterday...really liked it!

Gaden...it's the love that's meant to be! It's a storyline that lots of us would love to see, but probably never will. Many people believe that with Geoff's religion and Aden's past that such a thing could never happen, but there are also people who believe that this would make the storyline all the more compelling! What do you think of this pair?

^ That was like me. I signed up to BttB a couple of years ago, forgot about it for awhile, and came back this year all because of Aden! I think the way Aden has been written in the abuse storyline is near to faultless. Unlike the Cassie storyline, this one hasn't been forgotten, and it explains why the character Aden is the way he is. I also like he hasn't turned into a 'good guy' instantly- even though he is nicer than he used to be, he still retains the Aden edge that he had in the beginning. He really is quite a complex character- you still don't know how he will react in any given situation, which makes his character all the more intriguing. As Frogg said, I loved his relationship with his father- they were both so broken, which made them closer than they ever really knew. Todd is fantastic- he does it with such conviction, that during those highly emotional/intense scenes, sometimes you forget that you're watching an actor portraying a character- a sign of a truly amazing actor.

Spanglish- pretty cute movie!

I go away from the internet for the weekend and you finish this fic! It was so, so perfect! Those last few chapters were so emotional and powerful and wonderful. I love how you ended it, and I too, cannot wait for a sequel! You've let so many questions unanswered, but also answered many at the same time! I loved reading this fic- thankyou for writing such a fabulous piece of work!

Aww, that was wonderful. I always wanted him and Sally to bond...but then she left. That was very emotional...poor Aden! Loved Sally's reaction...it was spot on! I can't believe this is only a one-shot! Loved it.

How about something like... "She heard Irene in the kitchen and, though she felt like crying at the mere thought of it, hoisted herself into a sitting position. If Irene was to find her in bed, she knew it would cause a pity stare, and she preferred not to receive one of them today." I hope that helps...

Aww...I had a grin on my face the entire time while reading that! So cute...love reading a bit of Adelle fluff!

73- Oh. My. God. That was such a powerful chapter...so emotional and so heartbreaking and so everything. The way you wrote it, was perfect. I'm so glad that Belle was there for him. 74- Oh wow, poor Kirsty. I hope she doesn't continue to blame herself...poor thing.

Wow...that was good...I could really feel all the hate and anger coming out of the computer screen, and the determined nature of Aden to tell his grandad he can get past it! Great work!

Gaden! Aww, that was so cute and perfect. Going swimming in the middle of the night- very crazy indeed! But that heart to heart was just perfect...it was so well written! Loved every moment.

^I was grinning too! I loved seeing Annie sort of protective over Aden...Geoff had every right to be confused about why Aden was sleeping there...I loved seeing Aden do the cheeky 'i know you want me' thing with Belle...so cute! As for the chapter before...the father/daughter dynamic was perfect! Poor Nicole, feeling like her father likes Aden more than her...quite heartbreaking! I hope they sort themselves out soon.

Yeah, I won't post it till I've either finished it or finished the others first- the problem though, is that I've lost the inspiration for the others again. I suxors.

at Adenabs! You have some of the best captions on your icons!