whispered_envy

Libby Tanner is guest starring on Rush next week...I realise this clashes with All Saints, but I thought I should at least give you all the heads up if you're interested.

What more can I say that hasn't already been said by everyone else? How you write Nicole feels very true to the character...I hope Aden doesn't stay away from Roman thinking he would want more space to be with Niolce now shes turned up...it's obvious Aden needs Roman! Anyway...can't wait for the next part!

That was beautifully written. The descriptions of Belle's pain was perfect. It was so sad- I really felt the grief emanate out of the page. ETA: I like how you don't find out exactly how he died. You don't need to- the pain through Belle's words is enough.

I wish you weren't in a different timezone monkeysmoke...you always update when I'm asleep! Geoff was so cute wanting to find Annie like that- you can tell he loves her so much. I'm glad Irene believes Aden is innocent- I wonder if Belle will talk to Aden about Annie? Good Annie/Jai interaction...love the hysterical laughing part...it's what I would do too! Can't wait for more!

Ahh, I love how you write Nicole- it's perfect! Had to catch up on a fair few chapters...it's still as awesome as ever. I never want this fanfic to end!

Love that first Annie icon! The facial expression is great!

Whenever I read this fic, I'm always left wanting more! I really hope they do not blame Aden...that would be awful if they did. I can't wait for the next part!

I got chills reading that last chapter...not good chills either! It was well written, you hadf the right amount of everything without it being too graphic. Poor Annie, I wonder if her and Aden will now connect, or if Aden will tell her about his abuse?

Aww, that is too sad! But nicely written...great premise for what could have happened to Aden's mum and Ruby/Charlie's mum on the show. I really would like to read more...if you want to turn it into more than a one-shot.

I absolutely love the colouring on the ones of Nicole and Aden talking at the beach! Mind if I save a few?

I love the colouring on these ones! Fantastic work!

It is a great chapter! You're allowed to say that if you liked it! Love the Belle/Aden interaction!

Just caught up with all the chapters I've missed! It's still wonderful! I agree with other people when they said the Kirsty thing might be about Aden's mother...but then again, it could be something completely different!

Over this long weekend, I have watched: - Wall-E - The Wog Boy - In Bruges - The Mummy 3 - Finding Nemo All of which I'd recommend, except The Mummy. I found it painful to watch.

As everyone else has already said, I love how you write Aden's change of moods. They are very true to the character. Well done!

Dingoes! That's the one I was trying to think of! Totally don't believe that giant panther thing...it's just a huge black cat!

We don't really have many 'beasty' animals...a fox maybe? We have heaps of evil snakes, but they aren't beasts...oh! there's always crocodiles, but they're not common everywhere. Umm...a territorial kangaroo? lol...I don't know...this doesn't really help but there you go!

^ I'm seeing Wall-E tomorrow. Glad to hear it's good!

Wonderful! Hope there's going to be some Roman/Miles interaction...they both are comparing themselves to Irene! Can't wait for more!

That was hilarious! trust Nicole to give birth in a shoe shop! Why did Nicole buy new jeans when she was so heavily pregnant, that what I want to know...I suppose it's Nicole...sounds like something she would do! Great work! I love your comedy!

You are amazing. I love this. You put so much emotion into the characters, without it seeming cliche or over the top. It's perfect.

Funny story: Our mower needed a new battery, so the grass was getting super long, and when we finally got one Mike (my boyfriend) thought it would be fun to mow his name in huge letters into it- I encouraged him. XD But, he ended up moving it too short, so when I actually went to mow the rest of the grass today, the grass had died a little where he mowed it, and now we have 'MIKE' written across our backyard. XD Good thing is- mum doesn't even care- she found it funny. XD I love my boyfriend. XD

monkeysmoke, you have to stop doubting yourself! Your writing is amazing, and the way you're writing the characters is brilliant. I'm really loving this fic, and so are many other poeple, so keep it going!

I agree with lucylinda. The writings rings true for the characters...you know how to write them, and you do it well! Great first two chapters.