rachael_87

Another awesome update! Jack's definitely got some sucking up to do know that he knows how much of an idiot he's been.

I hope Macca's OK. I like him so much more in your fic than I do on the show. And I really hope Jack stops being an idiot some time soon

Great update. I can't believe how much I hate Mason. he just gets more and more evil in each chapter.

Awesome chapter. I've gotta say you got me with that secret, I was expecting another pregnancy or sickness but nope- she's married!

Oh my god I hate Mason!!!! I can't believe Jack even considered believing him!

I'm just gonna go ahead and assume that that ending was a dream... if not I might have to hurt somebody But anyways another awesome chapter, keep em coming

Yay! More Jack and Martha cuteness. Please update soon that was a great start. And by the way Jacksthehottest I really, really, really like your avatar

That was an awesome chapter but it made me soooo angry. I just want to deck Mason. grrrr! I hope Jack figures out what really happened before Martha ends up consumed with guilt

This story is so so good. I'm completely hooked. And thanks heaps for the quick updates theres a new chapter almost everytime I log on

That was great. You could really feel their emotions. Please continue soon

That was great Considering we just got two chapters so close together I'm assuming were gonna have to wait a bit for the next one but I'm so excited for it! So keep writing hard and I'll be super happy

Thanks for updating, that was a great chapter. I agree with baygirl please please don't let her be pregnant, then Jack and Martha will never happen. Tho he is locked in jail so it doesn't seem that likely anyway. I'm assuming (hoping) the blood test is just something to do with what matt was giving her

It sounds really good so far. Thabks for the update. Please continue I want to know whats bothering Martha

Thanks for updating. Your doing a great job of describing everyones emotions and what they're going through. I really hope she tells Jack.

Hey thats a really good start. I'm excited to read more