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Awww! I love it, it was absolutely beautiful. You must write another one! You are a fantastic writer, that story really was beautiful. I got quite teary!

Yay! Laila's home! Loved this story, can't say it enough! It is absolutely brilliant, can't wait for the next installment! Please update soon!

Awww! Harry's a good guy! I take back all the mean things I said about him! Just get that baby back to her parents, as Nicole says it's about time that baby had a good feed!

WHAT?! Harry Chambers?! So did not see that one coming! That girl is beyond evil! I cannot believe her! Your writing is fantastic as always, can almost see it all happening on screen! Please update soon and please, please, please don't let anything happen to beautiful baby Laila!

No, no, no! That Megan is such a piece of work! Horrible! How are they going to get Laila back if Megan makes it to the city?! I just hope Jack and Martha don't blame each other. Please don't make them, bad enough we've lost Laila! Please update soon, this is great! Love it!

No! You can't just leave it there! It worries me that Megan's back, she can only have come back to cause trouble! Love all the Jack and Laila sweetness, he makes a great dad bless him! Great writing as always, please update soon and put us all out of our suspense!

I love it! Need all the Jack and Martha happiness I can get when the show is letting me down so much! Please keep it up, it's keeping me sane! Little melodramatic I know but your story is so good! Please update soon, I'm loving their happy little family!

I love this story! No chapter is ever dull, I love all this happiness and talk of family life as much as all the drama. It's beautifully written, please update soon, can't get enough of it!

Brilliant! I love this fic! Please update soon, no chapter of this is ever dull! Love it all! Nice to see them so happy what with all this marriage break-up on screen!

Absolutely brilliant! I wanted it to be a little girl, a proper Daddy's girl! You wrote it brilliantly, I know how hard labour is to describe when you haven't been through it yourself! You did a great job! Please update soon!

Fantastic chapter! Jack needs to get there on time though, please don't let him miss the birth of his first baby! My bet is a baby boy I think! Never know where you're going to take a story though! Brilliant writing as per usual! Please update soon!

Woohoo! Baby Holden is on the way! Just need to make sure that Daddy Jack is there to see it happen! Please let it all be ok, I have a horrible feeling that these last two chapters of happiness are going to be cruelly undone! Please update soon!

Ok?! It was fantastic! Think you're writing is absolutely brilliant, definitely one of the best on this forum, if not the best. Love all your stories, just discovered the one with Corey and that was fantastic too! Please update soon!

*Mouth open in shock* Did not see that one coming! Can't believe you ended it like that! Cannot wait for the next chapter, brilliant writing as usual! Real edge of your seat stuff!

Nicole has scared me into thinking that an unhappy ending is on the cards, please don't let this baby die! The whole dressed in white thing seems just a little like angels and heaven for my liking! Please don't do this to us and please update soon! Fantastic writing as ever!

You are very, very sweet 'andiyt'! I haven't written any other fan fics before, this is my first one. I've loved writing it though, think maybe I'll start another one soon! Have to start thinking of some new ideas!

Awwwww! There is nothing else to say! Bless Jack, he needs to get his act together! And Martha needs to open her eyes! Can't you see that the man is totally and utterly in love with you! Brilliant story, brilliant writing! Please update soon!

All will be revealed! Just have to wait until the next chapter I'm afraid! Sorry!

Love it! Absolutely brilliant! Hope Martha deosn't get too cranky with him and pack her bags. I'm struggling to cope with watching it on the screen. couldn't bear it if it happens in my favourite fan fic too! Please update soon!

This is fantastic! I love this story! Love the fact that even though Jack and Martha aren't together it makes me want it more! You write brilliantly, so just want to give Jack a big cuddle! Bless him! Please update soon! Can't get enough of it!