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Fantastic stuff! I am on the edge of my seat! Glued to this story, it's brilliant! Can't wait to find out just what happens, please update soon!

Brilliant! I have found another Jack and Martha fic to get hooked on! Your writing is excellent, really makes you imagine it happening. Jack is very understanding to sit through all that shopping, I know girls that wouldn't do that for me!

Yet another brilliant chapter! Can see why Martha didn't want to move in with Jack and why she's upset now! You write it so brilliantly, really feel like I'm watching it on screen! This is the best fan fic I've ever read, never been so hooked! It's fantastic, please update soon!

Another brilliant chapter! Can't wait to see what her decision is and find out why she's upset! Hope everything's alright! Please update soon!

Loved it, absolutely loved it! This fic is fantastic, never miss a chapter! Please update soon!

Brilliant chapter, fantastically written! What more can I say but update soon please?!

Fantastic start, can't believe it, I am hooked already! Am loving all this lovey-doveyness! Cannot get enough of it, especially if it's Jack and Martha! Please update soon.

I'm sorry! All will be explained in the coming chapters, promise! Hope you don't all hate me! Sorry!

Yay! You have no idea how happy that chapter has made me! They're finally back together! Woohoo! This fic is absolutely brilliant Baygirl, you have me well and truly hooked! Your writing is amazing!

No need to worry at all 'Jack4Martha'. Baby Mia is absolutely and completely Jack's!

No it wasn't for Bec Cartwright's baby girl 'Home&AwayGal', didn't actually enter my head! Could've been though I guess! Was just a name I liked and thought it suited their little family. Didn't imagine they'd go for something wacky or way-out so thought Mia was pretty safe!

Fantastic! I love this fic! Your writing style is brilliant, so easy to read and understand. I always feel like I'm actually watching the scene on the tv! Brilliant! Please let the picnic go well!

Woohoo! *jumps for joy* I am so glad, just kiss him already Martha! What are you waiting for?!

Finally! I am able to post! My stupid computer has never let me before but now I can! I have read all your fic so far and it is absolutely fantastic! It has me completely and utterly hooked! Your writing is superb! Please update soon! Can't get enough of it!