sarahandkatie

Would I do this to you Zetti he he he he he he he!

i've read your zetti going to update asap.

finally read all the updates super duper as always he he! I have a solution to your problem instead of killing off martha or leo can you not kill off ash?

thanks zetti and amz will b updating when i fnish my roast beef sunday lunch with all the trimmings. hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm

That was super duper. I wish it wasn't a short story I want it to continue to see if her hopes are correct.

Thankyou zetti and amz. More will be up soon. Can I ask who you think the women is?

The only thing I will say is just because jonah had written the letter doesn't mean he will be alone. YOU ARE ALL IN FOR A SHOCK!

I will be updating later on this evening keep your eyes peeled people!!!!!!!!!!!! p.s another hint: This shock could blow a family apart and see a villain of the past come back to haunt them!!!!!!!!!!

Yes hon I put on about now irenes engaged to barry, all will be revealed in a few chapters time!!! he he he he he. I think the next chapter will have you all gasping for breath. And it could shock you all. Lets just say ????,????? and ??? are going to get a real shock which could lead to a blast from the past

Um yes,like the diet coke man. Hot, sweaty and pumped up. sounds like my cup of tea. UPDATE VERY SOON! can you please please please tease martha with a diet coke moment. He drinking from a can very sexily tee hee. Just watchedd the advert with the lift and diet coke!

Hurry up zetti he he he he! I thought you said you were doing it!!!!! Zetti I'm devastated it's not up yet!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Thankyou for the wonderful comment. Will update soon I promise!!!!!!!!!

That was brilliant chapter six. I'm really into this fanfic. Update soon!

Hurry up zetti he he he he!

No, I've got them in my head about 15/16 yrs old. As its only a story I've done a bit of changing he he. Perhaps I should have mentioned that at the beginning sorry!

As always super brill. update again soon.

Ok I will update tonight or tomorrow. pormise,

Yes they were married and split like at the minute, but they just never got divorced!

If i continue will you not mention my bad spellin? It's only a story aftre all notan important letter or anyhing

Nice comment Zetti. Thankyou. I don't really know yet!!!!! I'll take your comments for hart and brain and seee!

Thank you Beckyboo, I'm glad you liked it. I'm sorry but i don't think i'll be updating for a couple of days. Going to have to have a think about the whole trying it myself thingy. Sorrry agian. If i decide to continue I will do:-) Not too sure I wanr to contineu.

I would also like to add that apology to everybody else! I am trying to do this whole thing mysef, the typing, the reading and the posting. If i upset anyone with not typing a word right. Sorry. A friend suggested I try and write something on a forum to see if i could do it. Obviously still got a long way to go. And I thought i was doinng good. Sorry once again. I'm not to sure how long until the next chapter.

Ok Natasha. As I have only just passed a writing test and only just learnt to write! I'll take that into thought. I hpoe you like the story anyway :-) this is my first try at writing anything more than a page!

Next (hint). I mean CHAPTER willl be up tomorrow. Zetti I am waiting for an update!

oh my golly gosh, what a super delightful fan fic! I hope Mattie's going to be ok. it's about time someone did a fan fic with tony promenently in it. I love him. Can't believe you killed Beth off oh well we all live in hope. I know you only posted chapter 5 today but please please please update soon. Can you pm when you have so i don't miss it please!