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  1. Love the Pete/Belle one and the second Rob/Tasha one; the second Cass/Maddie one and the last Maddie one. Great job, Jen.
  2. Lol, a baby boy called Jack?
  3. ^ Tasha, Shannon can be mean sometimes. I reckon she might do like a note at the end or something saying that Jodi and Paulie had a baby... No idea boy or girl but something like that. Like what they do in the movies, sometimes.
  4. That was seriously wow. It was fantastic. Not really a Lete fan but wow... It was so believeable that I actually really saw it happening. I agree with Shannon. That whole scene played in my head and somehow, I could just hear the music in the background as well. Must also agree with Eli in that I loved how the scene changes between the point of view of Peter and Leah. The whole fic flowed very well. It was really fantastic. Maybe you should try a career change, Alli.
  5. Aaron, is that all you ever think about? Love triangle and cat fights? The teaser is really cute but I have to say that you're just as bad as Lil and Alli coz none of you tend to tell me when you've updated or posted a teaser. Lol, for some reason, Holly cracked me up in that teaser.... Update soon. Eventho, I'm not happy that it'll be 2 more chapters til the end when you do so.... I am curious about Jodi/Paul/Baby O' Brien as well....
  6. Lol, the Cassie one is a tad bit too orange for my liking. Love the J/M and the Kim/Kit one. Really great, Sarah.
  7. Love the second and last ones, Jen. Great work.
  8. Aw, the Sarah/Emily scenes were so sweet. Maybe I'm just biased but they're so good for each other. And it's really nice, Em wanting to share the sunrise with her. I personally prefer the sunset but sunrise is cool too. Oh, and Nickerz having a birthday party? That's so cool. Definitely can't wait for that to happen. Chris S and Kate are equally cute. I love their chemistry and lol at naming the dog "Angelina." That bit just cracked me up. Definitely am going to love their encounter with DB considering how he's such a punctuality freak. Tim/Ada... They both need help. Seriously. But I love their betting. It's brilliant. They tend to make a serious scene funny and that's really great. You write them exceptionally well, Shannon. Poor Holly. She's so hung up about Bobby's rejection that she can't even concentrate on her scene. Sigh, don't make DB more PMS than he already is, woman. I must say, Isaac is adorable. Typical kid. Enough said. Poor Jon. You think that they'd be fed well. Love this line best of all: The poor actors. DB needs to hire new cooks. And, I really wanna hit Chris H. and Amy Mizzi. How typical. Not going to go on about them. That was a really brilliant chapter, Shannon. You put in some sweet stuff as well as some funny stuff all integrated really nicely. Good job. Update soon. I can't believe that it's 3 more chapters til the end.
  9. Adore the 1st and last Lelle one. [i got it right this time ]
  10. When I see a teaser, I get this feeling that I'm meant to post my comment before I get hit. I love the Becca/Averyl scene. I'm glad that they each got their friend back. And, awww, Ava is so adorable. So cute.... And, Bobby/Averyl have a date? That's so cute.... I can't wait to see what happens. Hopefully it'll turn out good. Aw, Becca/Rhys.... That's so sad.... They need to get together... They're so cute for each other. I mean, they have this bond and stuff. I can't wait for them to get together. It'll be really cute. Paul & Jodi scenes are very cute. He's so caring. Bet you they'll have one heck of a beautiful baby. As much as the Sarah/Emily scene cracked me up, my heart goes out to poor Sarah. But, I could definitely imagine Em doing that tho. It's definitely in her nature considering she's so hyper most of the time. Brilliant chapter, Shan. Update soon. And, the teaser is really funny. P/S: I kept it short.
  11. Wow, they're really nice.... I love the 1st, 4th and 6th ones. Really awesome, Jen.
  12. Shan.... The lynch mob are scary..... :S

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  13. I know... It's nuts.... And, Ali, as to running away with the proofie, I already bagged the first flight out to Antartica with said proofie and Shannon. I suppose there's space for one more person. Shannon.... 4 more chapters?!?! This is so depressing.... Depressing for us but good news for the lynch mob who are after the said proofie. Anyway, update soon, Shannon. I love to see how the whole fic ends.
  14. Love the first, fourth and fifth avs, Jen. Great job.
  15. Seriously, this is beyond obsession, you guys.... I swear, I'm starting to become scared of you guys.... If it was me, I'd just be shocked and then smack the fella for causing all the suspicion amongst everyone.
  16. Lol, I swear, the lynch mobs are scary.... Why is everyone so obsessed with finding out who Shannon's proof reader is? I don't get it..... Sorry.... Didn't mean to.... But, it's true.... He's probably feeling jealous of Mark.... Yes, that's so true. I'm probably the only person who missed him.... Hey, at least I don't have any competition.... I know. That's why I thought it one of the best chapters so far. Sorry, I didn't mean to... I'll try and not rant later... But, you love rants..... Hahaha.... Lol, aw, Emily.... So cute...... Aw, that just cracked me up heaps.
  17. I really feel sorry for Shannon's proofie.... Getting death threats from Lil.... And then having to pack their bags and run all the way to Alaska just to hide from Lil and gang.... To be honest, I don't think anywhere's safe for said proofie.... Maybe Antartica or the South Pole might be perfect altho I have this gut feeling that Lil and gang will probably find said proofie.... So, to Shannon's proofie: I wish you the best of luck. You're a wanted person so I suggest you stay in hiding for as long as you can. Back to topic: Holly.... What is wrong with you?!? First you reject Bobby and says to him that he was probably "dropped on the head when he was a baby" and now you're suddenly going after him? Maybe you were the one that's seriously been "dropped on the head" while you were a baby. So scandalous.... Just like her character..... *sighs* Awww.... Mark and DB.... Very cute scene... Mark has a stalker which I think is funny and cute.... Do mine eyes and ears deceive me or is DB just jealous because he doesn't get any fan mail? I'm guessing he probably only mostly gets hate mail especially when he broke up J/M and caked Peter/Zoe/Tracey..... Lol It's really nice to see that DB is a stickler for punctuality and rules.... I swear the studio is like a mini school with the cast as the pupils and DB as the principal.... It's funny..... Aw, poor P/J/. I loved this line from DB: It's a classic DB line and I must say, he's really back into his something-up-the-pants SP.... Welcome back, DB.... We missed you.... Okay, fine, I missed you. Aww, I'm glad that Averyl is back.... Now Azza and Ali can have their little Av/Holly bitchfight.... Altho, I personally think that would be wrong, but, what the heck? It'll be cute.... And DB would seriously explode.... What wouldn't I give to see that one happening.... Omgoodness.... Bobby/Av.... That scene between them is so cute.... I would like to say that Becca is such a good mate.... And, she's so funny that girl.... First, she brings them together, then she spoils the moment, then she tells them to continue and then she spoils the moment again.... Another good line: Cracked me up entirely... I didn't know whether to laugh or cry with Becca's interruption... All in all, a brilliant chapter, Shannon.... Loved it... Most probably one of my favourite chapters so far of BTS.... Great job....
  18. Loving #s 3, 4 and 6. Great job, Jen.
  19. I love #s 2, 3 and 7. They're really great, Sarah.
  20. I love the 5th Drelle and the 4th and 7th Maddie ones. Great job.
  21. Sarah, they're gorgeous. I love #s 1, 3, 4, and 5. Fantastic job, keep it up.
  22. I wasn't surprised at all about you posting the final chapter before the day was over. Altho, what I was most surprised at was that you had the guts to kill off Peter. Kudos, Lil. I swear, this whole story has been an emotional rollercoaster. Froms sadness to happiness to sadness all over again. But, I need to agree with everyone else that it was written very well. Loved the writing style. You captured the emotions of everyone very well... Amanda, you stupid cow!! wish you would've just killed Amanda. Like make her commit suicide. But, then, the town hating her should be good enough punishment. Excellent job, Lil.
  23. Two brilliant chapters. Yeah, I know, I didn't comment on the one before when I read it but now I can't remember what happened. It was so sad.... Poor Pete in a coma. The poor guy. I don't know what he's going to do when he finds out that Drew's dead.... And, goodness.... What is it with Peter and getting women pregnant? He's going to be a dad which is way cool. Makes up for Drew being dead but still..... I'm happy that he's awake which is like way, way cool. Told you Lil would never kill Peter. Loved the latest chapter because it had so much sadness and then some happiness/ new hope towards the end. Nicely done, Lil. Loved it.
  24. I love the 3rd Maddie one. The emotion has been captured very well. And, no need any text for it coz the pic says it all. Really great job, Jen.
  25. Tell me about it, Aaron! 10 days?!?! :P

    Heehee....

    Yeah, I know. I read it and commented. :D

    In reply to your question: I'm good. Back to Uni tomorrow! So not cool :(

    How's Aaron?

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