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  1. Better post a comment before Shannon hits me. The Rhys/Becca scene was so sad. I was on the verge of crying. But, the whole scene was written very well. You captured the emotions that the both of them were feeling very well. Love Rhys' dedication to Indi. Him talking to her was sad but also very, very sweet. Love the fact that Averyl is coming home. Now to see if we get the Holly/Averyl bitch fight that Ali and Aaron want so badly. Katrina/Claire scene was hillarious. It cracked me up entirely. Loved it. I think what I loved most was Katrina accidentally going into Nickerz's room and saw him naked... Lol, that had me in stiches of laughter. Aw, Mark... He really loves to sing. Altho, he should shut up a little bit before he annoys the living daylights of everyone and DB kicks him out. I would be gutted. All in all, that was a really excellent chapter, Shannon. You had a mixture of emotions. From sadness to just hillarious. And it was written very well, too. Loving the teaser. Please, update soon.
  2. Really loving the Lily/Kyle av, Sarah. It captures the emotion.
  3. Loving all of your latest work, Jen. I love the R/T ones best of all.... Really great.
  4. Shannon, I am speechless. I really am. It was/is perfect. You captured it so well. I really never thought that this would be a Clete song. But.... wow.... Sorry, but, I really don't know what else to say. It's that good. I think Ali will somehow agree with me. From now on, when I listen to Carrie's song, I'm going to think of Clete now.
  5. I loved that whole sentence and in particular the reference to the drugs. It was very suiting. I reckon this was a very good ending. I loved it. So simple yet so explanatory.... Another fic written really well, Andy. Altho, I must say, you've used your favourite word in all 3 of your most recent fics. But, I loved this one. It was short but very self explantory. A job well done, Andy.
  6. I have got to say that I loved Tracey in this fic. She's brilliant. Esepcially when she smirked at Zoe and told her that she knows it's her.... I loved how you captured Tracey's feelings. Like her shock and confusion about what to do and then just beeing such a good friend [if you call it that] to Zoe. You captured her very well, Andy. I really am not happy about that ending, mainly because it's a cliffhanger. But, it's good. You keep your audience wanting to hound you for a next part to it. Or hopes that you will write a next part. *hint hint* All in all, it was brilliantly written.
  7. Lol, that just cracked me up. Peter Baker is such a girl. You call that short, Andy? You've got to be kidding. Anyway, that was brilliant. Loved how you explained the in between things going in which a certain SP we all love to hate didn't. But, all in all, it was excellent. You captured the mood really well and I love how you put the bit about Zoe's insecurities there. It shows that she's also human.... Really good, Andy.
  8. I love the banner with the text. It's gorgeous, Jen. Very suiting.
  9. Lol, first of all, sorry I ranted. I will promise to keep this very short. Well, as short as possible, anyway. Claire being all nice and friendly? Now that's a first. I guess in some ways, she does care. Altho, Becca, how are you going to face her?! I really want to know how Becca is going to face Nic when she sees him. Now wouldn't that be fun.... *cough*hint*cough* And, omg, how cute is Rark?!? They are so adorable. I want a Rark wedding. I love how Kate is so understanding and how she's able to pick up on these small things that no one else can. She's so Sally in some ways. And I love her scenes with Mark. And, Amy/Chris What an idiot he is. What is wrong with the fella? Can't he see that Amy Matthews is better than Amy Mizzi?!? He really needs to get his brains checked. And, Amy, so sad.... Why regret your actions?!? Man, Chris is so lucky to have her. Yet, he can't help but be a cow towards her. All in all, brilliant chapter, Shannon. Very comical and cute. Love to see what's next. ETA: I ranted.
  10. See, I know Lil wouldn't kill off Peter. The day she does that, pigs will be flying in the sky. Now, what I really want to see is Peter's reaction to all of this. He's probably going to blame himself for this. A very sad chapter, Lil. Written very well. You managed to capture the emotions and the just the whole atmosphere of panic. Update soon.
  11. The teaser is so cute. Rark is just adorable. Heehee... I do indeed. Dream on... My goodness, what is wrong with you guys? A bitch fight?!?! Oh dear, what would DB say about this, I wonder? Lol... Back to topic: Typical Jason, sleep during the best parts. Lol, DB's such a crack up. I love how he's back to his former self. Welcome back, DB. I've missed you. Holly, really... Please... Dream on. Bobby belongs to someone else. You turned him down before, which was the right thing to do but don't even think of it. Lol, Tim/Ada... How cute were they. I really love their bets. And, Tim asking Ada to call, "Gamblings Anonymous" was such a crack up. I would think he'd be the one. Always betting at everything. Loved the description writing in the Nic/Claire part. They're so cute. Oh no, Averyl.... I hope she's making the right decisions about going back home and leaving her dad in NY. I don't envy her one bit. Altho, if she came back, there'd be this awesome bitch fight between Holly and Averyl over Bobby. I'd love to see Tim/Ada bet about the Avery/Bobby/Holly bitch fight. All in all, a very lighthearted chapter and very sweet as well. Great job, Shan. Update soon.
  12. I so didn't see that coming at all. It would be such a shame for Drew to die on his 18th birthday and I know for a fact that you would never kill Peter. Or would you? That was brilliant, Lil. Snow Patrol album? I am not at all surprised. And Plitzy, in love?! That's so cute. It's too adorable. Loved their interaction. Update soon.
  13. Lol, sorry, it was a typo. I was thinking Lelle but I typed Drelle instead. I love that one there and the 2nd Ric/Mattie one.
  14. That was really good Lil. Altho, I think you might want to differentiate the dialogues a little bit. It's a tad bit hard to know who's talking when. That aside, it was really light hearted. And it was seriously another very awww chapter. Loved Pete's gesture about going out to buy flowers for Fitzy. And red roses at that too. He's definitely getting serious with this. Drew's 18th birthday. Something that I can't wait. Loved this line: Had me in stitches lol.... Peter really did have everything down to a patch. I hope nothing goes wrong. Update soon.
  15. Henry coming back would make for a good storyline I reckon. I love the 2nd Drelle one best of all. The red is very suiting, Jen.
  16. Edward Scissorhands
  17. Awww, Drew's reaction was such a classic. And so cute at that. Awww, Plitzy are too cute. I'm glad that he's happy again. I just hope Mandy doesn't come in and ruin it. Loved Jack's reaction in seeing Lara. So cute.... Jack and Fitzy work well together. Update soon.
  18. ^ Aw Henry... Totally forgot how cute he used to be.... I love the first and the third one, Jen. Great job.
  19. You need to update School Secrets when you come back from Sin City, Aaron...

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  20. Breeeezaaaaaaaa!!! Come back! Help me annoy the Panda fans :P

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  21. Lol, so did I.... Hey Rosey and hey Tess.
  22. I agree with Tess. The last Tasha one is beautiful.
  23. Hey Sarah... I'm good. Btw, feel free to call me Chris/Chrissie. :D

    I think it's weird for me to call you Sarah and not tell you my name. :D

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  24. Lol... All good. No worries.... I'll just go entertain myself reading LA
  25. ^ Lol... Nah.... I don't blame you for loving TAFE. P/S: Sent it already.
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