-ParaisGal-

Please update soon.

I asked this on HAAC, but is the style weird? Should I averte to the previous? I've just never written like that before. But I asked Kase, and she suggested something like this, so yeah. Thanks Kase, BTW.

I need some advice. Is mine too bunched? Should I have each new characters line on a different line, because it looks REALLY short when in essence it isn't that short.

Thanks. I think there have been fics like this around, involving kids of jack or mac.

I was thinking about it during exams, and then I got sidetracked during the exam -Looks embarassed- Hehe. Then I came home, realised that Rosie wasn't going to leave me alone if I didn't make Rachy okay. So then I sorted that, but I can't tell you how Rach's gunna react to the fact that Mac and Jack will have one daughter, who I will say are very close and Mac's gunna be real protective of her daughter. From now on, Martha will be referred to as the child's mother, and Callie will refer to Martha as her mother. Just to save confusion, unless issues arise where Jana needs be mentioned. Mac will call Callie angel throughout the fic. Jack will call her baby girl.

Leave Lucas alone you big bully! Great going girlie.

No way is Jack killed off! It is very good. May have another update tonight cause I'm just too bored.

Three words: Bring - It - On! If you didn't kill Mac, we wouldn't be in this situation *Shakes finger* Not too late to change what you wrote..

Sarah, continue. Hehe, make Rach and Kim happy.

Wow, cool! You like the oneshots, dont you? Hehe.

I saw Bay Girl was online and that this fic had been updated and I near jumped for joy, only to realise Bay Girl wasn't replying here Amazing, if I havent already stated. I adore this fic, hehe.

*Squeals and jumps around* YAY! *Squeals and jumps around* YAY! When can we expect it?

Whoops. Hehe, me and my stupidity. Sry.

Its your fic. You can make characters live or be already dead. Keep going, and feel free to keep Rach's mum in it. Everyone makes fic's differently. In mine Rach's parents still live.

Please let Laila return home to her parents, and please update soon. *Hands cookies to Bay_Girl* Now, I wait Great going.

The police will surely take Laila and ring Jack to come and collect her. And Harry understands Jack's pain, he's lost a daughter too. Keep going. Can't wait for the next update!

Isabel kissed another guy whilst on holidays. It was in mags and everything.

And I'm guessing thats a no to the cookies? Not even with ice-cream? *Asks, hopeful for chance of the returning of Laila*

Damn, how come Zoe managed a safe pregnancy *Sulks* Great writing though, just wish it had been anybody but Zoe

Will Laila come back safely. Hehe, meanie. Keep going, you've got me breathless for the next update. I've got a speech due tomorrow, and your fic is the only thing making me want tomorrow to come as chance of update. Hehe. Your fic rocks mate

OMG no, no, no, no! You cant do this! Argh evil Megan! Please update ASAP so we know what happens to Laila! Jessa-Belle suggested it and you took the option. Awww *Starts crying, and grabs packet of cookies* I'll give you the whole packet if you bring her back safe, and bring her back in the next chapter...

Going really well.