-ParaisGal-

Your really great at writing this! NOW maybe Jack and Mac can get together? *Says hopefully* I give you a cookie if you do! *Bribes* Hehe.

If only Jack wasnt the one who murdered them, I'd be quite content.

Nicole! How dare you! Wash your mouth hands out with soap! Dont even think that that young child is Jack's!

OMG soooooo good! Hehe I wanna know what she does. Don't you DARE break them up lol.

Best of luck Nic!!! We'll be here, awaiting your new chapter and praying for your computer's return, like loyal followers lol.

Yay! Sooooo good!

Why are a lot of fictions insistant on breaking them up? lol, nah just makes more drama. Great going!

Thank you! I'm glad all has settled down slowly for Jack and Martha.

I think I speak for all when I say HALLELUIA! lol, thank you!

One word: Men! But amazing fic! Keep going!

Ouch, nasty girl she is. lol, GO MARTHA! Hehe, Martha fan to end -Swears on oath-

That is sooooo cruel lmao! Poor Jack!

Another great chapter! Any chance of Jack getting out? Or is he gunna be in jail for the rest of the fic?

Great!

So good! I wish I was this good at writing this stuff!

Pllleeeaaassseeeee fine some way of getting Jack out of hospital, or give him a great behaviour bond or whatever. Please, him and Mac are fate, and their little son needs his daddy right now!