I definitely see what you mean, I agree with you about the last chapter, I was actually trying to change that by making the chapter longer, but it got too long, because the only possible ending to this chapter except this one would be the ending of the next chapter, if that makes sense
Like I've said before this isn't much like the fics I usually write, I tried something brand new here, but if it's any consolation I think I have a more emotional oneshot or short fic coming soon