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Give me a few more minutes and I'll se what I can come up with
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Here are some avatars for you. They're not very good, but I hope you like them anyway.
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I usually quote to point out what I like when I review, but this time I found it hard. I really had to pull myself together not to quote the entire chapter! Seriously, I don't know how old you are, and I haven't read any of your original fics, but if they're half as good as your fanfics you should try getting them published! I'm literally JEALOUS (and I don't think I spelled that right!) when I'm reading your fics! The first part of this chapter is absolutely AMAZING They say everyone holds on to happy memories of their childhood. But if you don't have any happy memories then you can always hold on to a dream. There was a photo in a silver frame... This part is very good. You write in a way that really makes me see how desperate Kane is holding on to the small piece of faith in a good life he has left. Kirsty asked why he wanted to keep it when his childhood had been so sad, because he had told her about the times when Dad was blotto or Mum was behaving strangely or Scott owed him a bashing. But he said they had been a family once. He knew because there was a photo. And Kirsty didn't say anything, but she kissed him gently. The same goes for this sentence. I really see how the innocent boy Kane and the grown man Kane is the same person when I read this. It must have been because Dad hadn't got any lollies when he was a kid. So Jamie had been saving up lollies for Dad's birthday prezzie. Except he kept eating them. ... A tear rolled slowly down Jamie's cheek for the best Dad in the world who was having nightmares because he hadn't got any lollies when he was a kid and who, thanks to Jamie, wasn't going to get any now he was grown up either. I just love Jamie! He's so adorable, and you just make me want to hug him. I also have to say I like the way you talk about the Sutherlands. I don't think Shelley and Rhys would ever be able to forgive Kane (I think Dani would) but yet they would want the best for Kirsty and Jamie, and you make that so clear by writing about their behaviour when they visit Kirsty and Kane. As I've said so many times before, I love your fics, ILM. It doesn't get much better than this. Please update soon!
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Thanks Would anyone mind moving it to the library for me?
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I'll give it a go
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Thanks There won't be any updates, it's just a oneshot.
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I loved that too
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Don't worry I will just cut off some of the storylines and maybe pick them up later, because right now I feel like there's too many storylines and characters, but I will keep the VJ and Pippa storyline, the Johannah storyline, the caller storyline and there will be more about DeAnna, including an explanation to all the questions...
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Thanks New update soon.
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I really, truly love your writing, ILM! Again, the way you describe the people is incredible, especially Kane. I actually think your way to describe him has affected how I feel about him when I watch Home&Away. I also love the way you start each paragraph, by mentioning something casual, and not that relevant for the storyline. It makes it easier to read, and easier to get in to the situation. I really like how you switch between the past and the present, and how you manage to talk about all the characters and not forget a single thing about them and at the same time you manage to write the parts of their story that are still unwritten, AND MAKE IT BELIEVEABLE! This is a really good fic, and I can't wait to read more of it, so please update soon!
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I have set a date for the first chapter of "Closer each day": Monday January 1st 2007
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Thanks, I'm glad you liked it No, it was originally a oneshot, but then I decided to make it longer, but there will only be a few chapters. Probably 3-5.
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Thank you I was a bit afraid that I wouldn't be able to make him believeable because I don't know the character very well yet. It's pretty easy for me to write the "before"-him because that's the storyline he has here at the moment (late 2004), but I haven't seen that many episodes of him from 2005 and 2006, only a bunch from Flynn's cancer and the last 2006 episodes.
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I liked it, even though I liked "Where's my Jason" better. Are you planning to post more fics about the actors? I really enjoy them, and I hope you have more coming up!
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Thank you The last Chapter of "The next moves" should be up sometime by tonight.
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I have to admit I only started reading it because the title got me wondering, but this turned out to be a really good story! You are funny, the conversations are lively, and it's easy to imagine the situation. "It would be very, very wrong." Sarah informed her solemnly. " Want some help?" I loved this sentence, it made me laught (it wasn't the only one that did that) Great fic!
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Thanks At the moment it's not good at all, because I don't have spelling and grammar control on my computer, and I have my dictionary in my locker at school... I used "for example" for a while, but I thought it sounded even more weird, and "Norwegianized".
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As usual I love your fanfics, and the way you describe Kane and Scott as kids. I also love the way you write, because I can hear their Australian accent when they talk. When I try to write Australian it just turns out as crappy twisted southern states American slang... I also think it's very interesting to read about how you imagine Kane and Kirsty's kids as I'm doing the same thing in my fics. It's very interesting to see how different Jamie and DeAnna are, but I can still totally imagine Jamie as KK's child, just as much as DeAnna I know I haven't been reading a lot of your fanfics lately, but I promise, this one I will keep reading. And I'll keep that promise
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Thanks I kind of tried to leave the ending a bit open (I didn't write that Jade died till example) so the reader could imagine. Did she just just in to the water to swim after the light? Did she die? Was she rescued? I don't know. I'm glad you liked it And by the way: you don't say "till example" do you? I have been wondering for such a long time, because it sounds so wrong and "Norwegianized" in my head.
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Okay, thanks And thanks for moving it for me!
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Thank you Phew, I know it's a bit whiny to ask people to comment, but I just got really nervous and started wondering if it was a complete disaster because no one commented when I have gotten comments very fast on the previous chapters
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No comments at all? I hope it wasn't that bad