Eli

I'll give it a go, but could you think of any words or phrases I could use for it? I'm not even sure who it is (still on the 2004 season) so I can't think of anything

I just saw that a mod closed a request thread (but it was a random request, not a thread for people to request stuff from a specific member) and asked that all request should be posted here instead of separately, so it just made me wonder It is a great idea, I just think it should be used for random requests

Would those of us who have our own request threads have to stop using them? Or is this just for random requests?

Thank you Hopefully there will be an update before Wednesday.

I love this! It's beautifully written, and you really get the characters. I discover things about the characters I didn't even think about before I read your fics. If she ever fell in love like in fairytales, it would be with a boy who never, ever expected her to sit round being girly and giggly. It would be with a boy who would want to run with her faster than anyone had ever run before, climb with her higher than anyone had ever climbed before, who believed they could touch the moon and the stars. Not Ben Smith nor Dale Armstrong (her best mate, who, Dani insisted, would really like Kirsty to be his girlfriend) nor any other boy she knew. This is really good^ I was nodding to myself thinking "Kane" through this paragraph Maybe you had to be cute like Jamie. Jamie's Mum played games with him, bought him lollies, fussed over him if he fell over. Or maybe you had to be smart. He knew kids who were heaps smart whose olds seemed real proud of them when they picked them up from school. Or maybe you always had to be real good so they never got mad at you and instead took you to the movies and bought you toys. It was obviously his fault they didn't like him, but he tried real hard to be good, never crying, no matter how much he wanted to, when he got bashed. And he must have been cute too when he was Jamie's age. And he sometimes got gold stars in school, but when he told them they only said stuff like stop jabbering or he'd get a thick lip. He couldn't figure it. Maybe he was just plain unlikeable. I feel so sorry for poor Kane You just wanna hug him! Can't wait for updates. And by the way, ILM, how old are you?

Thank you! I guess I get a lot of practice, because I do 90% of my writing in English It made a lot more sense when you said it should be an italic font, I found it weird when I read it, because from what I've ready from you before I didn't think you'd make a mistake like that. And you didn't after all The present tense... the past tense... I feel really stupid right now, cause I know them so well, and still I wrote "from one time to another" lol

Not less addicted after chapter 7, this is great! Going to the Sutherlands these days was like walking a minefield. I loved that sentence^ I have some critisism too (I don't think I spelled it right, but you know what I mean): In the last chapter I think you went fromone timeto another (I'm not sure if that's the termyou use, what I mean is that you for example changed from was to is, said to says and then back again) It can be confusing if you'renot aware that it's a mistake. Other than that, really great!!

I'm addicted to this fic! Really good chapter!

I love them! Especially these^ they're great!

Great! Keep up the good work!

This is beautiful! I had tears in my eyes.

That's really good written! I've never thought about the possibility of a storyline like that between Robbie and Kim but it's really interesting!

I had totally forgotten about the signature rule!! Thanks for reminding me, I'm updating it NOW!

Actually, unless anyone's read this story before, there is NO WAY they'll guess the secret. Eli, I keep asking (well, to be more accurate, driving people crazy) on the "Sally" thread, that's how I get to know Australian expressions etc. And you have a much better English than me in general because you're lucky enough to have it as your mother tongue

Again, this is great! One of the things I like about your writing is that you really create a good picture of the setting by using Australian phrases and words. I try to do it as much as possible, but my English is very American, so it tends to be some kind of high-school slang lol Keep posting this is really great! Can't wait to find out about the secret

I posted this in it's own thread because I didn't see this, but no one answered so I just copied and pasted the question here, hope that's okay. I just want to ask a question about using other polls than the ones on this page. What I mean is that if I till example want to let my readers influence one of my fanfics the best option wouldn't be to post as a poll because thet would mean the same question would be asked even after the poll was finished if you know what I mean. I wonder if I'm allowed to use HTML-codes from places like pollhost.com? It's just regular HTML codes that allow you to post a poll at the end of a post till example, and you can close/remove the polls when they are finished. I'm sorry to bother, because I don't think this is against the forum rules, I just want to be sure I'm not doing anything against the rules so my fanfic thread gets closed down or something. Thanks.

This is almost creepy. I have only "met" (people on message boards, and my friends, people who aren't actually authors and do this for living) one other person that can impress me with her writing the way you do. It's creepy because your style is so much like hers, and right now she's really ill (she has been for months). You are such a good writer! I'm telling you, I don't expect a very good quality on all this stories, but (too bad for other people posting their fics) you really stand out and write extremely good! Keep up the good work, ILM!!

Let me put it this way: Whenever I read I fanfic I really like I tell the author. Now I almost regret saying I loved other stories, cause I can't find a way to express my opinion about this fanfic other than "I beyond love this fanfic" You're a great author!

Oooh my God, this is SUCH a good fan fic! Please update more soon I can't wait to see how this goes. Oh, and I have to say ILM, you're a really good writer!

Thank you I don't know if I'll have time to post tomorrow, but hopefully I will. In the meantime, please leave me comments people, I would love some feedback on the idea of writing a future fan-fic and the chapters I've posted so far

I really like it! Please post more soon

Not sure if I'll include Rachel. I know very little about her because she's not introduced to us here (in Norway) yet. Because we're so far behind there might be mistakes with details I'm not aware of, but whatever, it's just for fun Thanks for all the comments, updating later today

Dante's peak

I really want a banner for my fiction forum, so if anyone would like to make one that would make me very happy! You can see the colors/theme of the forum by clicking the link in my signature. Thanks!

I LOVE it! I've been wondering what happened to KK