Luc

Here's a sneak peek at next chapter...

^ I'm glad you like the banner. Next update should be very soon.

Happy Birthday Cornelia!

Love this one - can I please use it for my av - I will credit!

^ Thanks Bec. Hope you like the banner I made for this fic. I've never made a banner for a fic before, so this is pretty roughly done.

It is incredibly windy in The Outer-South-East of Melbourne, our neighbour had a tree fall, away from the property but destroyed the fence.

^ I know a lot of people are going to hate Cassie being a b!tch, but I needed someone to contrast Matilda's niceness (is that a word?)

Great examples of prolouges and epilouges are Mary-Alice's voice overs in Desperate Housewives, I know it's not literature, but it gives and idea of what they are.

^Because deep down Aden is a good guy and Cassie is a self-centred bitch , I really wanted to dive more into the psychology of the characters, because we all know Aden has a heart, but he doesn't use it to often, and if you don't like the fact I've made Aden good and Cassie a bitch you are sure as hell going to hate Belle next chapter

Almost right, Ali G Indahouse is the official spelling. The last movie I saw was not technically a movie, it was a telemovie, Me and Luke, a moving and coming of age drama about a boy who gets his girlfriend pregnant, her mother puts the baby, Luke, up for adoption, but before he can be given over, Matt kidnaps the baby, who he forms a bond with. Blah blah blah, happy ending (like all good Lifetime Network movies), The End.

I'm glad you're enjoying it. that's what I do, go for the shock factor and pull in readers

That was an amazing story. So sad. I'm not really a JnM fan, but that was an amazing story. Loved it.

Thanks Meg. Since I've spent the past two years of my life writing a terrible first person view story about fluff, I thought it was time I unleased my writing potential, which I really didn't know I had. I'm glad you're enjoying it.

I wanted to make it that these events could sort-of happen in life, not like ones where the guy gets the girl, fall in love and get married, let;'s face it, people get divorced, there are a lot of older mothers in the world, there are gay people (Seven seem to be denying it) andpeople do have drug overdoses, it's not a happy world, and I decided to emphisise that.

^ Couldn't agree more, it was so brief, and so much had happened, almost a a let down, let me emphisise (sp?) the almost.

A good example for a prolouge would be in Vanity Fair by William Thackeray. it descibes the setting, but isn't directly linked to the next chapter. An example of an epilouge would be in the final Harry Potter book, I don't want to give anything away for those who haven't read it, but it basically finishes the story by describing events that have taken place in between the past 19 years, and ties off everything gracefully.

I think Aden has a bit of nice somewhere deep down in H&A, so I drew from that. I hope you find it more interesting next chapter, I introduce Cassie and her personality is, well, sort of different, but sort of the same, in a complicated way.

Suprisingly, I've never been told that before

Thanks Bec, I know what you're trying to say, I'm glad you're enjoying it, hopefully the next chapter should be more interesting, I'm going to introduce more of Aden's personality in it, he is a lot dofferent in this story than he is in the series, what do you think?

A prolouge is used as an introuduction to the story, in which you introduce the characters and setting of the story before you begin it, it is usually used for dramas. An epilouge is a piece of writing at the end of a work of literature in which you tie up all the lose ends. In Chapter stories, the epilouge is usually the last chapter, epilouges are generally used when the writer decides to end a story gracefully or abruptley, but tying everything off, leaving no questions unanswered. Hope that helps.

Thanks. I'm glad you're enjoying it

High School Musical 2

Carry on Girls. The scripts was so terrible it was funny. Barbara Windsor looked so young in it, I couldn't believe it, and Wendy Richard looked so different to what she does today. The acting was bad, when lines were delivered they were half improvised by the look of some of the other actors around them, and to top it all off, June Whitfield was an extreame feminist. It was so horrible it was terrific.

Hot, little clouds and at least 40 degress celcius.

It's Luc or Mattie - haven't decided yet, thanks for the help! Much appreciated