~Amy~

That was amazing! I knew it'd be good but I underestimated you, lol. I'm so glad you didn't just make her memory come back and they all live happily ever after; this is a way better ending. I loved the picnic paragraph with the banter etc. especially this “If it’s something dirty, don’t you think that it would be best if we waited until were inside and away from prying eyes?” She looked deeply into his eyes and smiled. “Can we eat now?” she laughed. What a perfect closing line! I 'aww'ed about 10 times from start to finish, lol. Can't wait for your new fic, if its even half as good as this I'll be hooked! You're an amazing writer, Amber.

Karens gone - JnM fluff - Final chapter - Although you're starting a new fic so I'll forgive you, I'm nice like that. Honestly though, loved the latest installments, such drama. Glad they're starting to get back to normal, one big happy family. Jack, Martha & Joey, aww! I'm (slightly) ashamed to say I smiled when the old bat fell off the cliff; theres comuppence for ya! I thought when McGrath said something about letting Jack know it panned out that she was gonna live. Like how they always seem to grab onto the cliff just in time, thankfully not, lol. Oh and loved the 'Their lips lingered as they shared a soft and tender kiss.' line, how it ties in with the name. Can't wait to see how it all pans out!

Oooh new chapter! “We didn’t come here to talk about your sex life Holden,” McGrath told him. Even I cringed when I read that. And now they'll find Martha Kick Karen's ass and live happily ever after. Update soon!

Thank you!

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