~Amy~

Oh, Alli that was just perfect! And you posted yesterday?!! Always the last to know... Anyhow, the writing was superb! (as I knew it would be). This isn't going to stop my Lete obsession, you do know that? Its stronger that ever. But not five minutes had gone by since he and Leah had kissed that he hadn’t thought about her, and how much he wanted to be with her. Aw! See this is how it should have gone, not him ending up with Mandy! They could have been the bay's next hottest couple! Imagine it, there'd be the big drama over her cheating, they'd have to stay in to avoid the gossip and comfort each other. ! Totally loved it! More Lete fics? Yes?

I once had them when we were at Christmass mass, lol. It was all quiet then bam!

Some really nice cropping, especially on the Relle ones. And roseys current av is gorgeous!

Oooooh the drama. I have no idea who the mysterious women is... well I have a few guess but I'll wait and see, lol. I loved the conversation between Tony & Martha; so sweet. Great writing Amber, looking forward to the next chapter and The Big Talk.

Thats cheered me right up! But you're Austrailan so tomorrow then for me. *insert dissapointed smiley here* (cause the sad one just doesn't cover it)!

Oh I loved that chapter! But like who'd want to kill Irene? its got to be something to do with the mysterious woman.... Can't wait for the next one, should be very interesting indeed, lol.

You've got a real knack for text placement, I envy you.

Felix is a dude?! I just assumed..... Anyway great writing Cal, I loved it! A much prettier side to Sarah, I gotta say. "Lensman319: Tease.", I giggled over that, very creative names too. Hope you write more one-shots 'coz I, for one would love to read them.

Amber, I'm really sorry to hear about your loss; hope you feel better soon. That was a brilliant chapter! By the end I was sighing in frustration; “And here I was thinking that maybe you and I might……,” she started but was cut off by a knock at the door. Somebody always bloody interupts when things are getting good. And they were so close...! Irene? I'm thinking that this willl trigger some more Corey memory's, coz he played wtih Irene's breaks..... As for the woman at the hosptial, you've got me there, lol.

^^ Copy and paste from microsoft word. Posts seem to do that when you quick edit instead of full. No idea why...

Oooh excellent writing, Eli! This was one of the weird things about hanging out with Cindy; you got used to talking about drugs like it was the laundry, and older women standing at the corner, screaming bloody murder (and in Rosie’s case, literally screaming ’bloody murder’) no longer made you turn around to see what was going on. I really loved this paragraph, Cindy just gets more and more intruiging (and less like the blonde Cindy. ) as it goes on. If only she were an actual character, could spice things up..... They're running away!?! I can definitely seeing this causing some drama. I'm loving this; update soon!

Jades payback for "Nicom is brilliance" I'm guessing,

Martha telling Tash that she likes Jack. The lelle avs are great, great cropping!

I love that fourth one, nothing do with the scene itself... honest.

I like the cropping on the 6th one, Jen!

Rachel?

Aww thanks, I like to think I'm improving...