I was thinking the title seemed different
I loved reading this especially as I never saw Kit and Noah together. Actually I never saw Noah on screen.... anyway the discription in this is amazing. Seriously really great job Eli.
Was it worth it?
I love rehtorical questions in a fic, gives it more meaning and you managed to capture it really well, plus the question really makes you think.
The phone rang again. Kit regretted ever hanging up. Avoiding a conversation wasn’t going to make it all go away.
”It isn’t Scott,” Beth said, as soon as Kit picked up.
”I know mom…” her daughter replied. Somehow she knew who this was about, from the quiet, sad way her mother was talking about it.
”Scott and Dani are okay. It’s Noah…”
Flashbacks are also a big plus in a fic really gives it more depth. The way Kit just knew what was about to happen was really moving.
She couldn’t help but smile when she heard Noah’s voice in her head, telling her again that it was her choice.
My favourite line from the fic. I love how he didn't out right just say "Don't do it" as he said it was her choice. They make a great pairing. Overall this is a beautifully written fic and you deserve a pat on the back *pats Eli*