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Very Good chapter I found it very intriging with the msytery behind Angelo's behaviour made me stop and think that something isnt right here hmmm I like Roman with Roo too good pairing look forward to more

Oh Good I look forward to them :lol:fastcnating stuff

Ruby gone to see Grant not sure this is wise liked the home videos part nice touch look forward to more only 2 more chapters

Welcome back Zetti Glad your back and hope your feeling better

Very Good update Who will Belle pick hmmmmmmmm I was on Javaier's side until he started quoting Shakespeare thats just seems very cheesy but maybe that's because I'm a guy and Shakespeare really stresses me out Aden seems like Belle's safe bet While Javaier seems like her exicting optoin but is that what she really needs I don't know where your going to go with this

That was very Good I'm in two minds about Romeo I think its good his there for Indi but I don't like Indi thinking its not Romeo fault she pregnant aswell it takes two to tango girl does that make sense I see your trying to edcate me about female sea monkeys now I'm learning alot fro this fic look forward to more

Hope you get better soon Zetti take it easy

So glad Ruby read the letter calmly I thought that was a very sad chapter but it was very good and well written look forward to more

Chapter 7 I loved how Miles repeated Rabbit's order made me laugh Chapterr 8 Rabbit and Dex are comedy gold This story cheers me up

Wow I like the twist to this story more soon please

A very well written chapter what are you trying to do make us cry Wonder what the letter sad Update soon

Well thank you for edcating in the world of turtles the only turtles I knew about was the ones who knew Ninga and eat pizza (Teenage Muntant Hero Turtles) lame joke I know

I found Dex very funny in that chapter with the whole egg 27 degrees for a boy and go bake in sun for girl is that true ? his remark about lemmings and the part about the turtles Great Chapter

Great but sad Chapter there. So it was Charlie. it sad nobody knew she was trapped feel for Angelo and Ruby Look forward to more Written well too

Thanks Zetti I thought I would give them some happiness in this chapter and hold off telling you who dies in Belle's place

Great Chapter I can't belive Angelo did this I'm sure he regrets it but I have lost rescet for him in this story. I can't see Nicole forgiving him sadly mabe he can see the children with supervision for a while Look forward to more

Nice and fitting ending to this story I don't know about Heath turning every man gay (Not Me) but Heath and Dex seem to match each other

Very Good character interaction in this chapter and I look forward to more

Oh I'm sorry for pinching your idea I can read your mind :lol:which idea was it ? see Im not that good of a psychic You made me sad by rejecting me now only joking You can write Heath the stripper with Perry if you like I don't mind You promised yourself to Red Ranger people will talk only kidding again

Thanks Carina aww you laugh at your own jokes well at least you cheer yourself up

Plenty of drama in that last update I'm no betting man but I still think Charlie dies clever the way you don't reaval whos died yet you could keep us guessing for a long time if you want

Nice abit of double team there from Nate and Dean breaking Laura out of hosptail I wonder if her dad will come after her Good chapter

Thanks JoiseTash

WELL DONE WITH THIS CHAPTER I KNOW PEOPLE HAVING BEEN WAITING A LONG TIME FOR THE REVEAL Angelo that was pretty low of you he shouldnt of done that I lost abit of respect for him in that chapter but I do think theres more to this than meets the eye like why is he drunk a totally diffrent Angelo than we have seen before I wait with baited breath for the other side of the story