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Hey Miranda Yes you inspired me to write this could I use your idea of the Heath and Indi pairing please Thought I would give writing a comedy with Fate being a quite dark story

Great Chapter it's not looking good for Nicole and Angelo through If I was him I would take Nicole's deal otherwise it could get really messy for them PART 7 FOR THE BIG REVEAL I CAN'T WAIT

I don't think Angelo cheated on Nicole worse than that I think. Made me laugh with everyone debating about Roman and Roo. I forgot about Roman and Martha as well perhaps he likes to give it in the family. Really liking this so far.

It won't be Justin Carina

Yay got to read 2 chapters of this tonight Really good interaction between everybody I am coming round to trusting Dean now it might not of him after all with the drugs thing look forward to more

Oh No I haven't showed my softer side by reading this story have I (runs away) only joking I think it's because Heath reminds me abit of myself in this story with me putting my foot in it when talking to girls oh I forgot to say I like the way Nicole's baby is called Rob in this fic did you get that from Zetti's fictions ?

I have just read this from start to finish in chapter 1 when Indi heard the Heath in the bushes I thought you were going make Heath a werewolf but thats just me and my wild crazy ideas I like Heath in this fic his quite funny I feel the same as you about Brax in not really liking him he just seems very dodgy to me really well done with this story

Great Chapter once again wasn't expecting Laura to turn up in the hosptail we are getting closer to finding out what is wrong with Holly look forward to more

I like this Fic because I have no clue where it is going Has Bianca meet Rabbit somewhere before through that got me wondering oh I love the msytery look forward to more

Good Chapter Felt sorry for Rob in this chapter Not getting exicted about Roman and Roo just yet they will break up again I think sadly can't see a way back for Angelo and Nicole in this fic but I'm sure your fix that for us Zetti maybe

hmmmmmm interesting chapter Holly started to feel ill in chapter 19 with a small stomach pains and now blurred vision and dizzyness is it something to do with the drugs she's taken Dean getting off with the fight with Nate's not fair can't wait for more

Yet again another HILARIOUS chapter Loved the whole thing Not sure about the sexiest thing in the world being Bianca speaking french through look forward to more well done JosieTash

I like the way this is written it's like we are seeing things happen as the characters do bit like when we dream hope that makes sense keep writing want to see where you take this

Really Good I'm still in shock over Irene dying Nice that Brax and Charile told Casey and Ruby first about them being together that was a nice touch good one shot but I sort of want more

Really liked the laptop saga there I know that feeling when comupters freeze too it's very annoying I preidict the sound of patters of tiny feet for Holly soon

Great Update How could you hit Nicole Angelo can't see a happy ending here this time round look forward to more

Abortion Such a Emotionful subject matter to write about and I think you did it the justice it deserved the emotions were written prefect so well done for that I did find myself wanting Ruby to change her mind through wheather Casey came back or not but that is down to you being such a good writer in making the reader feel these things as they read does that make sense the end result was sad but I guess the choices are very hard well done

X Men First Class Its's really good loads of action some hot girls in it too

Yes I think that really is funny Rabbit This chapter really made me laugh it was just great well done can't wait for more

Well done really good The abuse scenes were written perfect very intense and creepy. I'm not saying the whole thing wasn't written really good because it was but like Carina said the abuse scenes made me cringe as I read them. poor Aden hope Laura gets help I pat you on the back for the great work your doing on this fic

that was a sort of heart warming and sad chapter at the same time great work

Hey Tele This is a really interesting story I think it could be Angelo who has Roma reason 1 His a cop so he could be leading people down the wrong path reason 2 I think he knows about Charile and Roman's affair and his taken Roma as revenge on Roman for that and the best way to hurt Roman is through Nicole look forward to more

loads of funny parts I liked in that chapter “By the grace of almighty God, we will prevail,” said Elijah, making the sign of the cross. and the photo of Colleen in a bathing suit. look forward to more

YAY You posted this already I'm liking this What has Angelo done I wonder how could he hurt Nicole

Great chapter Not liking Dean Holly get rid you don't need him look forward to more