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I think you might kill Aden off in a plane crash bet I'm way off the mark just the where you wrote a few bits of the chapter made me think that

I like Holly giving Aden her big list of stuff to buy hmmmmmmm I think I might of worked out what you have in mind lets just say I think sad times are ahead I could be wrong through good update

Good update It's good to see Roman again Angelo just go and be with Nicole very well written

That was a sad chapter Laura what are you doing hopefully Nate will help her out good work

How can I get Rob without making myself look deluded? You can't Marilyn too late for that don't trust her Angelo another good update

Cantwait to see where this is going I like the mystery to this story

Andgelo and Nicole stop being silly get together already that was a very soopy chapter there nice to have a break from Marilyn look forward to more

I like this fiction so keep going with it I'm wondering if Aden's cancer will come back ?

Oh don't hide from us Very good update I think I can sense a catfight coming up for Nicole and Marilyn I might be wrong I hope Marilyn is happy with herself Your a great writer

Thanks for the pat on the back Miranda yep Nicole's with Angelo for the time being

Nice few updates there part 5 was abit to soopy through only kidding was quite touching part 6 was abit wacky how wacky can Marilyn get just go leave Rob alone you should write for the show I would love to see that knife scene on tv

Wow looks like it's going getting very intersting wonder why everyone can see Rabbit

Nicole better not lose Rob or I will very annoyed good chapter

My hatred for Marilyn is building she really doesn't have any rights towards Rob and making alot of ememies too if I was Nicole I would bitch slap Marilyn really good update

cool fan fiction I'm hating Marilyn through she sounds like she's going give Nicole a hard time look forward to more

how about Nicgelo very good story really enjoyed it

Good work really liked it

I liked this Well Done Dexter my fav character

very well written nice start something tells me they won't stay this happy

good start looks like its going get very good as it goes on update soon

Thanks Red I have big things coming up for Nicole and your find out who was at the end in next part Thanks Miranda I have the whole story in my mind and I can picture all my ideas and I just try my best to bring the ideas to life as I write them hope thats coming across

Thanks Red Ranger but I'm having help with grammar and punctuation from Elissa (eilkell) so can't take all the credit for that glad you guys are enjoying it

this is really cool liked the supernatral element to it

good start got me wondering why they had to leave Summer Bay

I thought that was great was abit shocked with Miles and Nicole being a couple but in a strange way it worked hate to say because I'm not nomally a guy who gets emotional but I could feel tears in my eyes not saying i cried but was on brink that will be our Secret oh dam too late well done