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That was great!Loved it! But one more chapter?

If martha is asleep peacefully, how can jack tell that she was crying by her eyes?Shouldnt they be closed?!? Anyway great writing

lovin it! But do u really have to end it???? As long as the other one will be just as great ill be happy! Jack is the sweetest as for Martha being paranoid...she's just seeking for attention...hehe

Is that it??!?! I loved it! Why was it so short? Keep writing! Love Kit and Noah together!

I absolutely loved it!Its great!I wonder if this will get to 100 pages? Please do, it will be great!never ever let it end

yay! another terrific chapter!

Great writing! I didnt see that coming at all!

Why cant we just kill Megan off or something? Or we can make it that the baby has suddenly grown teeth and she bites her! SOunds like a plan?!? Great writing as usual

Megan! I thought she was banished! Guess not! meanies still floating around...Why cant we have laila have secret powers and zapps her to another place where scary obsessed people go to? Anyway great writing

Another great master piece! Thanks!

I love fluff! Loving it!

Fantastic! I just read your enter fanfic and it has taken me so long but i was so hooked on it! Great work!Loving the lil holden!

Once again! you have done it!Writen an awesome piece! Loving it!

Another wonderful ending! I cant beleive its all finished?!?! Will you be writing another one? please keep me posted if you do!

ANother beauty!Great as always! Cant beleive its gonna finish soon:(

You killed Jack! But at least his with Martha!Aww! Emily!Its good you did it in her point of view after Jack died. So cute she named her son after her grandad! Still loving it, even though my fave couples are dead! Keep up the work!

ANother great chapter! Beautifully written. Have you written other fan-fics before? THis is great!thanks for sharing your brilliant writing skills Please update soon

I am always thrilled to see another update on the chapter! Time does fly!Its great that Jack is a great grand-dad soon, and all the kids have grown up! You can really picture it, but Jack being 7oish?Ummm... ANother great chapter!keep it up!

woot! another brilliant chapter! Fitsy!?!Nice choice

This is awesome!Ahh!FLuff!Loving it! Cant beleive there is a lil holden soon!YAY

That was once again an award winning chapter! That so sweet! Jack being a mother and a father! Cant wait for the next installment!

Another unbeleivably great update! It was definately worth the wait! I could really picture Jack going through it all and thinking about Martha! Continue this great work! Cuz im absolutely loving it!

WOOT!Awesome!Another touching fan fic! Lovin it!Keep it up!

I have been checking back so many times Im so Anxious! Please update soon!!I just love this! Maybe when i finish my last exam, it'll be up! Fingers crossed! Keep up the great work!!!

Aww Poor Jack! Its so sweet that Martha knew what Jack would look into the kids'boxes! This is so great! beautifully written as usual! I love it! Thanks for updating so kwik!