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Too much is never enough! Argh, haven't looked at your thread in ages, sorry. Those are....nice. But I love the First Brally one from a previous post...outstanding!

Hey guys. Just here to announce that I won't be on for the rest of lent. Yes, I'm giving BTTB up for lent. Don't say I can't do it. BTTB is addictive, but I have my Mum's discipline and MY discipline If I never do come back, it's because my parents come to the decision they don't want me on here anymore. They're concerned of the topics I read and how much older people are then me. What they're saying, etc. So....yeah.... I'll miss you all, LOL

Sounds...interesting...I was a bit scared with a few of those bits, lol. CUT?! Now I'm intrigued!

Lov ehte colouring! I love the last two best...Love her expression in the second last one!

Rhys cradled her in his arms and smiled at her. Not long after he did that, she closed her eyes and began to softly snore. Awww, beautifully written! Jessica laughed as she ran over to Jodi, wrapping her in a big hug. Jodi hugged her back. Hugging her is a bit random, don't you think... lol. “Hey Bobby, it’s Averyl. Nic and Claire’s babysitter. I just wanted to ask your advice on something. If you could ring back soon that would be great. Bye for now.” Averyl hung up and took a deep breath. “God! I’m dork! He won’t ring back!” LOL! downstairs to let her parents know her answer Who's decision?! What decision!? Loving Becca and Averyl right nowA! ] Great job with the previous chapter Shanny!

That's super! Although, it looks like his body is just kind of disappearing... How do you get that effect? Lovely work!

Alright, good. Thanks! I just think it makes the story that little bit better if it's proof read. Eli, the girl who proof reads for me has really helped me with my fic, soooo....yeah. LOL And for the SPAG (Spelling, punctuation and grammar) Just try and watch it. That's probably why the mod warned you.

I'm not sure....Think you have to PM Nicom... I;m nice? I'm not sure you know me very well... LOL Just ask Nicom. It's fine by me if she says yes.

Amy Mathews is a bit weird in this fic.

I just have to keep telling myself that Amy Mizzi is NOT really that evil.

Just go to the proof reading thread and ask...I made that mistake once... But, yeah, I'm happy to. !!

They're nice...I do love the tasha sigs though! great work!

This is really good. It's great to have an idea of what goes through her head. But I've noticed that it's not being proof-read? I'm not saying that it's bad, but I think that proof-reading would make it even better? I wouldn't mind! ... Your choice though (And please don't take that as an insult! I don't mean to be nasty....just helpful!)

Hi Shanny! I've just read it all! I love it! Amy Mathews is a little...strange. It's great! I love the Mark-singing bits!

“Reach for stars, climb every mountain higher, reach for the stars!” Bobby sang as he walked along the beach. “Bobby, no offence mate, but singing S Club 7 really does make you sound gay,” Rhys spoke up as he walked over to Bobby. “Dude, Jessica is female.” “Yep, you’d know.” “And how did you know that was S Club 7?” Bobby asked him smirking. Crack up! I love those little moments! You write them so well! Great job, Shanny.

Particular pictures? Text? Etc.?

Those are good, but I love the ones I've selected below! I love your colouring!

here you go, Chrissy! All pretty pathetic, but...whatever! Not great. Sorry.

*Sarah is in a stupid phase. Too much maths, me thinks* What's coursework?

The weirdest thing happened at school the other day...it started with a girl asking me to pretend to be her friend and ended with my friends giving me the nickname 'canary' What-ever...

Mines very bad, Kat, so...whatever! Here you go: Not sure if you're still wanting them, though..oh well...

I think as Kat said before, ILM, you didn't make Hayley worse. Some one like her...well, needs to be explained. IMO, someone THAT awful should probably have a reasonm, if you know what I mean. She was neglected, and everything, but still got everything she wanted. And she turned into a B****. I kind of thought there was a reason from the start, and you explained it all. That just helps the story. I'll stop going on and on now. ....

These ones are all really good!!! Specially the group one! I love the 'poker face' one!