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Uh, are you KIDDING me!? You didn't ruin it! I can't say anything I didn't like, it would take me too long to work out!

What an AWESOME chapter!! *ryubs hands together* Get ready for a review, Sarah style. Okay, that was lame. Well, that was a GREAT description. the chewing / spitting out left me with horrible mental pictures though! The whole New Mum/new dad thing made me feel sorry for hayley. it made me want to cry. So there IS a reason she's a female dog! I'm going to do thisn characters now, because I can't randomly choose. Gypsy: Well, I wasn't around for the whole Gypsy thing, and If I was I wouldn't have understood it. She's the queen I-want-every-guy, okay, slu*, and you're describing it really well. You're putting into a storyline that sounds like Home and Away, but also sounds like reality. I'm enjoying reading about her character. The writers could learn a lesson or two from you, Kat. Will: He's torn, isn't he? He wants Gypsy when he sees her, but he knows she's bad...he wants to be chewed, but at the same time doesn't want to be spit out. And he covers his feelings up with Dani. It's the perfect plan... Gypsy seems to be a drug. And Kim/Jack/Will are drug dealers. Hayley/Martha/Dani are the angry councellors. That was a good description. Poor Will. That was clever. I laughed when I read it! Now Kim: He;s a bit sad, IMO. I don't liuke him in this fic, I don't like him...ever! Now THAT was good. I also couldn't help laughing at the 'Kim was safe' SURE he is, Will, SURE he is.... Cassie: The way you're describing her in here is perfect. It's like, behind that thick orange skin there's a side of her you're bringing out. Shes new to town, with not the highest self esteem. Bit desperate, aren't we? I have to say, I would have never even thought of Cass wanting Kane. That's the good thing about you kat, you thing up imaginative storylines, but yet they seem sane. And they're original! I love it! Martha: Cady Herin....Mean girls. She doesn't want to follow Hayley, but at the same time, she really does. Is this going to end with Hayley being hit by a bus by any chance? I hope so. Dani: Dani, Dani, Dani. She's a complex person. I thought before 'she's there. Will follows her, she doesn't do much else' but then when I came across this line: I realised she will be joining the war. At least she's not an idiot. I mean, you're not making her blind and going 'oh, she doesn't know Will loves Gypsy'. And with what you're doing, it makes it all the more complex. Kit: I'm glad Noah cares for her and not hayley. Revenge. Aggg, revenge. I KNEW Kit wouldn't just let Hayley get away with it. That is an AWESOME line. Hayley: Well, It's nice for her to be the B!t** There's one everywhere. There's a little b!t** on all of us, Hayley's just more upfront about it! Has anyone told you that you're really good at describing things? Coz you are! Take THIS paragraph, for example: That was a great description. I hear a mental breakdown coming on... She's going to get more evil, isn't she? But those last bits were really well done, Kat. You and ILM are teaming together and creating a work of art. Together, you're writing is unstoppable! This fic has everything a good fic needs. The twists are perfect. The storylines are well done and sound like they've been fixed and thought out really well. The characters work. These haven't all been put all together before, but it sounds exactly like a real H&A storyline, and like they're all present characters. it's hard for most writers to do that. These characters, in the show, we don't go as far into them as you're going. You can see past that layer of what we see on our television screen, and put it down on...um...paper (?) to go deeper than we're actually shown about them. Also, that stuff about Nick/Will/Hayley's past was tear-jerking. I don't cry oin a lot of things. I didn't cry, but i thought I was going to. An ordinary person would be told to write that and struggle, and not as many people would be as saddened, because the way you wrote it was so...touching. A very long review, and it took me a long time...but whatever!

oh my gosh! So much Alexa! thank you all so much! I'll swap my alexa avs over a lot, I hope its okay with everyone me using them...I'll obviously credit. . Ali: I'll give it a go, soon!

LOL. I have a request. Can someone please make me an avatar out of this picture with it saying 'Alexa' ? Thanks in advance! Please Note: That is not my account. It's someone from the screencap and picture forum's who offered that screencap.

My favourites the concern ones. Awesome work, Jen!

Yeah, you are.

I hope you don't mind, but you know the one of that Snow Patrol song? The banner you made? Do you mind if I use it for my wallpaper on my iriver? If anyone sees it, I'll credit....but you can't really 'çredit' people on iriver, but...I'LL know it was made by you, and no one really looks at it anyways.... I hope that made sense.

Yeah, I didn't think of that... Leave it as is, then? Oh, one more thing: I'm not having a dig at anyone here, so no one jump on me when they read this, (please) okay? There was a bit of a small coffuffle in the 'random picture thread' the other day about using pictures. Do we have to ask someone to use their pics for an avatar? I just got a bit confused, that's all...

Loving these two!

Yes, feel like.... Just kidding Shan, I like you really...ahh...yeah. A random question.suggestion, but incase it sucks I don't want it to have it's own thread. If you're looking for a certain avatar, you have to go through everyone's threads, right? And some people make mostly the same people, (sort of) right? So why does everyone have individual threads instead of having 'çharacter' threads. Eg. A Ric one, post your Ric avatars there....THat way you know where to look with a variety. Just a suggestion.

Lovi8ng that first banner! My fave credit ones are Belle, Peter and DRew, mainly, but they're all great!

Yeah...it would've been worse if it was in the middle of the shopping centre in the middle of a huge sale. Now THAT would be horrible! Or in the middle of church. I once felt sick during a Mass and got all panicky coz I didn't wanna throw up in front of a big crowd! Luckily, I was overreacting. I hate being sick....you just feel....YUCK! Ew, Ash, only 4 hours sleep! Drink coffee!! I would like to announce that tomorrow I'm going away for a week, so obviously won't be on until the Tuesday after. I know, you'll miss me, but try not to cry!

THank-you!!! A sequel may be up in a few months, but no time soon. I have other fics to do!

Awww! *Hugs Jo* Are you feeling any better? I had a vomit-bug a while ago, at the end of the school year, and I vomited on our front lawn. If you have a weak stomach, do NOT read what's in the spoiler tags!!! Vomitting on the street!? Ew! Poor you! I wonder who gets the job of cleaning THAT up...

^^ LOL. Even if it wasn't my name, I probably would've been going along with iut anyway. Call me anything asnd I'll be fooled into thinking it's my name! 6 months! *gasps* *Brings out pestering personality* Hey Ka-at...