I'm going to copy ILM...sort of.
“Families huh? They’re the ones who screw your life up and they’re also the reason you have to get back on track.”
^^ That was such an awesome line. I just...ahhh....
“Not thinking of running in front of a car again are you?” he teased. She didn’t flinch but she didn’t turn either.
“Would you save me again if I were?” He couldn’t tell if she was joking or serious and he wasn’t at all sure what to reply.
Some good, friendly teasing.
I could see it all happening too...perhaps we should give the home and away writers a calll....we have a new recruit for you....
He looked around the cold, sterile room. The lime green walls, comfortable sofas and various, assorted pot plants were assumedly somebody’s feeble attempt to make the place seem homely. The effect however was the opposite. It was overbearing, suffocating, as if the walls were closing in around him.
Now, me being me, I'd like those comfortable sofas, but that's a really good way to describe how he would feel like that.
“I love him, he’s my brother. It’s not his fault my parents preferred him.”
“And whose fault is it?”
“Mine I guess.”
Awwww/ Touching. He doesn't blame Dan for the neglectance and nagging of his parents. Sweet.
“Sure, it’ll help wash down the prescription pills,” he retorted dryly, not entirely sure whether he was joking or not. She managed to smile at him.
“Now that sounds like a good combination.”
LOL!!
All in alll....when's the next one, when's the next one!!!???
Great job Kat!