>>Emma<<

Awww she's all worried about her date. In a way I want it to be mucked up so that Jack can comfort her Please update soon. Great chapter!

Poor Jacky, I hope he survives and can go back to Martha. They need each other! Aww Kim and Luc were sweet. Great writing, can't wait for more

N'aaaaaw. Jacky and Maccy. That chapter was funny stuff. Its so sweet how they call each other hun. Gawsh. Slow mover eh? Looks like this'll be a long one then =] Update soon Kiwi-Trixibelle. Haha didn't that embarass you.

Great chapter Rach, loved all of it. Jack's so funny singing in the shower, his head is sooo big! Martha so wants him. I know she does, people are just in denial these days about their true feelings. Their friendship is so cute, although I still think it implies they're together; “You know Jack; you can use the front door now. My parents aren’t here, so it’s not like you’re going to wake them up” See . They act like a couple of naughty teenagers trying to sneak around, still adorable though. Update soon please. Preferably really soon

Great start Rach. I thought they were a couple, although I now understand that was the point... Aww they seem so sweet with each other. Update soon please, or die. Only joking...

That was so adorable They're getting married and they're going to have a lickle baby..it's soo cute! Now they can live happily ever after. You wrote it all so well, I can't wait for your new one! Oh Rach...ever heard of an epilogue?

That was so romantic *sheds a tear*... Well it was romantic in a sort of non-romantic way..if you know what I mean Aww Jacky's letting his guard down, so sweet. You'll actually be pleased that I am annoying you sooo much about updating. You know what I mean... Update sooooon please

I can't believe it's over That was a great way to finish it. Loved all of it! Aww I'm so glad that Jodi was okay, and the baby Are you sure none of us can persuade you to do a part 3? It would be fab if you did...*looks hopeful* CHRISSIE!? No way... After the way she went on, it was like she wanted to find out. I am definitely shocked... Please please please do a part 3. I'll give you some chocolate if you do That was a great chapter, I really hope you write more!

Great chapter Aww I really want Jack and Martha to get back together now. They need each other... They need to talk with each other and sort it all out. Update soon, can't wait for more.

2 chapters! Haha in your face Martha. Bet you regret cheating on him now. Oooh wouldn't it be great if Martha got jealous of Jamie and Jack. Still can't believe that Jamie actually forgave Martha though. Thought she'd hate her for ages. Update soon, can't wait for more

Great chapter! Yay Martha and Jamie are friends again, but I still will not forgive Martha for what she did. Neeever! Ooooh is a certain Mr Holden back in the bay? Pleease say its him. Update soon, can't wait for more!

That was great! Oooh Jack's leaving, *waves*. He deserves better than Martha, so I'm glad he's leaving. It will show Martha exactly what she's missing even though she's too wrapped up in Hugh to realise anything at all. They kissed! That could have been the beginning of a beautiful relationship, but he's going. Oh well they'll just have to move on. Update soon Can't wait for more.

Great chapters Rach Gaaah Martha. I am ashamed of you... Jacky and Jamie, ooooh! Something's gonna happen there 2 chapters today, you're treating us! Can't wait to see what you have instore for us. Update when you can.

Sorry I haven't commented in a while Rach, haven't been on bttb an awful lot. Great few chapters. Martha --> SLUT! That's pretty much a word to sum her up. Can't believe she'd actually cheat on Jack, and even after realising that she's done the wrong thing carry on doing it! Gaah that girl never ceases to amaze me Feel so sorry for poor Jacky, he doesn't deserve any of this. Why does Martha always manage to hurt him?! She can't redeem herself now, she just can't. Bad Hughy, me likey But when Hugh takes Martha away from Jack me don't likey. They need to sort themselves out before Jack ends up getting more hurt. Update soon, can't wait to read more. Great writing

Lord of the Flies (in English). Not my idea of fun...

It's so adorable I'm in love with it already. Cheered me up a bit that has 3 new students...it'll be interesting to see who they are. You can tell that Jack and Martha love each other already. I'm glad that Martha stands up for Jack against her friends. Update soon Retchel the Pretzel. Great start!