>>Emma<<

Aww that was so sweet. It has just made me believe even more that one day Jack and Martha will get back together, just as soon as Martha realises that Cam is no good for her. I'm so glad you wrote something again, you are really talented I hope to read more of your work soon, it's fantabulous!

Aww that was soo cute. Please write more, it is just so adorable. I really hope you write another chapter! Fab story.

Great chapter Shan! For a moment there I really thought Averyl was going to stay... Aww can we have Jack and Martha in the next one? Pleeeeeeeeease *smiles sweetly* As Chris and Amy are having relationship problems, I think we should have a happy couple on the scene at the same time Update soon, can't wait for more

Kat and I love music that was amazing! Throughout the whole chapter I was hooked, and just kept reading wanting to see where it was going. When you describe the teen's emotions, I feel like I am one of them, I feel like I in some way know what they are going through and can relate to them. It makes the story so much more real. You can make someone's feelings for a character change completely throughout the chapter from the way you describe it. The shouting had slowly grown, from a dull murmur of raised voices to a full on screaming match. Abuse, yelled at the highest decibels, seemed to bounce from one parent to another. Like a ping pong ball. Six-year-old Jack had buried his head deeply under the covers so did not notice his little brother Lucas enter the room. He had no idea he was even there until the covers were lifted from his head and he felt Lucas’s small body climb into bed next to him. Normally, when one of them took something belonging to the other or encroached on the other’s territory like this, a furious row ensued, often with Lucas, being youngest, throwing kicks and punches and Jack torn between defending himself and not wanting to be a bully... That flashback was just incredible, and it showed us why Jack and Luc's relationship is so strong, and also why Jack is how he is. Deep down he feels hurt, and you can't help but feel sorry for him, and see where he is coming from. “No smelly farting though or you’re out,” Jack warned in a stage whisper. “Now get to sleep.” Yet with the seriousness there is still humour! That line made me laugh alot! I think that the way you are describing the characters really makes the come to life, it makes you feel like you are there, and I think it's brilliant how you do this. I can't wait to read more, you really have me hooked, and I always check to see if there is an update. Keep up the fantastic work. It's just fabulous!

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Poor Jack! I feel so sorry for him... Richard really really annoys me, he makes me so angry inside, I just want to hit him. Haha Tasha I'll start calling him Dick aswell That was such a shock when Henry showed up, I was not expecting that. Update soon Nicole Great chapter.

Woo another update! Fantabulous! Lucas is so funny! Brett isn't genuine... Martha has memories, hopefully more about Jack! Update soon, great chapter!

Richard and Eamon were so funny! I still keep picturing Richard from old BB as Richard in this fic... Aww it's sweet how Martha gets jealous when someone flirts with Jacky. Let's hope Martha realises what she really wants, and soon, before it's too late! Great chappy Nicole, update soon

Tasha that was fantastic! And you dedicated it to me! :D You are the best! Aww I'm so happy that they ended up happy together, they deserve happiness after what stupid Ruth nearly did! I still can't express how much I hate Ruth! But you still finished it wonderfully. You should definitely write a sequel, it would be fab just like this. Or you could start a whole new fic! Hmm usually I would say update soon here but it's over I'm so sad it's finished, I loved this fic and I loved looking forward to the updates. I'm sad to see it finish but it finished in style! Great all the way through, I loved it!

That was great Amber! Martha is so funny, she's got it bad! I think it's either Brett or Jesse...more Jesse because Martha can probably remember him and when they were dating, so it would be more easy to cause problems! Please update soon, fabby chapter!

Personal opinion! I would like to see a happy Jack and Martha fic

I hated it... A chance for Martha and Jack happiness...ruined!

Tasha you made a really hard decision for me now. Do I want them to be unhappy and get a sequel, or happy and not get a sequel? Argh, why do you have such hard questions for me to wonder about! And Tasha made sure it's a pretty big rock, to hide from all the tomatoes I'll be throwing Becky, how could you let that happen? They had a chance to be happy and you ruined it!

OMG!OMG!OMG! TASHA! I hate Ruth so much. Everything was going so well until she came in and started to make a move on Jack! Urgh how could you do this? I hate her so much, and I bet Martha will think it's Jack's fault. Why did you do this? How could you do this to Jack and Martha? What about the baby? So many questions, so little answers. This was the best chapter ever, now its the worst! Urgh I hate Ruth so much. Ahh...I see you are online, we will have words...I still can't get over how horrible Ruth is! I mean think about how this will effect their relationship! How could you? I can't believe you're ending it aswell! Please do a sequel. Pretty please! You have to let them be happy in the end. Let them be happy, please. Post the next chapter now! Oh Tasha, I just want to know what happens, this is what this damn fic does to me! Update soon, otherwise you will have to die. I still can't believe you would do this to them! I thought it was all going to be fine and dandy but no! You have to put in that twist, argh I hate Ruth so much! Let's hope Martha takes Jack's side and actually believes him. If not you will completely suffer. Update soon Tasha. Oh and one last thing. I hate RUTH!

Nicole you updated! That was fantabulous. Jack and Martha are so sweet. I actually started to forget about Henry, until you mentioned his name. Then you started to talk about him, and how he would cause problems for Martha Urgh I really hate Richard, he is bugging me, I just want Martha to spill to Jack about it all! Maybe Richard could get struck by a bolt of lightening in a freak storm...Just a suggestion . Update soon, you're doing really well with no-one bugging you to update, you doing it on your own accord and all that! I'm impressed. More soon please!

:wub: that was sooooo good. The flashback was amazing, Martha wants Jack bad Update soon, great chapter.

Great update Nicole. Poor Jack, I feel so sorry for him! I want Henry to go away, and let Martha and Jack be happy. Please update soon, fab.

I think I read like 5 chapters! Tash, at one point I hated you, I can't quite remember which chapter, but I did. I was like crying. But then I loved you You make them so happy, they are so adorable together. I am sure you will get Jack and Martha back together soon enough. Please please please update soon, I love this fic, and all of those chapters were completely fab!

Shan they were all fabby chapters! Jodi and Paul are so cute, but we totally want more of them I love going on holiday and coming back and finding loads of updates Please update soon, great chapters Shan