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I watched Step Up 2, it was good but I have to say I thought the first one was waaaay better

Today I watched Annie, its such a feel-good movie I also watched A Little Princess, it made me cry......again

My first reaction after reading this was then Brilliant writing. Loved the date, as Rachel said, brought back some fond memories Jack was so sweet throughout the night but then !!!! Hilarious. As you said, a twist that would change JMs whole life. Great descriptions and an unusual twist. A very good one shot

You guys are making me blush lol thanks

Awsome, love it already I love the dynamics to JM's relationship, very well written update soon

Lovely chapter I can understand why Martha didn't kiss Jack, but i still want them together now Would comment more but i have to get to school Update soon and have fun on your weekend away

OMG, I have been sitting here waiting patiently for an update, when I realise that I missed one Stupid me OH MY GOD Claire and Benard are Jack's grandparents Totally did not see that one coming update soon

Awww That chapter was just pure loveliness I love how Jack is not angry And I love those lyrics, describe Jack and Martha perfectly And Emma is adorable, snuggling with Jack Please update soon P.S. Did you have any luck uploading the video?

Hope Jacky's ok Loved how Emma pulled hair out of Kim's head She called him daddy I wonder what Jack will say when he wakes up Awsome chapter Please update soon

Still trying. Youtube is being stupid. I know what you mean. Sometimes it takes me 5 times to upload a video to Youtube

Can't wait to watch it

You just had to leave it there didn't you That was awsome, I wonder what Jack's reaction will be considering Martha will be staying in the bay for awhile. Poor Alf Cant wait to see what happens next Please update soon

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Emma is adorable... I love how she says "When i was older', so cute Shes just like her parents Also Claire's really nice i just hope she doesn't turn out to be some physco mass murderer But then Jack could come to save Martha and thats when he discovers he has a daughter ..... Ok maybe i should just leave the writing to you Loved the last couple of chapters even though i cant remember if i replied ... Oh well, they were great Alf had a heart attack *shocked face* He better not die, I wonder how Jack will react when he sees Martha again And his long lost daughter.... Oh well, its his fault anyway for telling Martha it didnt mean anything when it so obviously did Since Rach's fic ended, this one has become my new favourite Cant wait to see what happens Please update soon *smiles sweetly* p.s. sorry for the rambling ...

Nooo they broke up *cries* That was a very sad chapter I love how the whole of Summer Bay runs away when they are together please update soon

Oh. My. God. I want Jack Its not fair He is so gorgeous Hopefully Martha says yes I loved that chapter, it was very well written please update soon