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Its over But that last chapter was brilliant, very descriptive Jack and Martha They were so adorable in this fic Hope we get to see more of your writing I loved this fic it was awsome I cant say update soon so I'll just say great work

Its ending .... noo *cries* that was great chapter Jack and Martha are just I dont want it to end but I want to read the next chapter.... update soon

Loved that chapter Love Jacky He just needs to give Martha her kiss Great chapter Please update soon

Wow ... this is awsome Extremely well written and i love the quote at the beginning I love the banner, its great I can't wait to see what happens next Please update soon

Thanks guys Glad you enjoyed it And sorry about killing Martha

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Jacky is sooo sweet poor Matha Yes Im thinking hibernating is a good idea Great chapter Please update soon

Adorable ... Jacky is soooo cute I love him.. Poor Martha But yay Jacky came to her resue Its so cute how Jack has like ownership of Martha Great chapter Please update soon

Rach!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! How could you do this !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Jacky has to save her and then get back togther I can't believe you left it there Please update soon

cute chapter they have sooo much chemistry that was a really good chapter please update soon

That was a really sad chapter brilliantly written though Can't wait for the birthday ...this should be good I would review more but i have to get to school please update soon

Poor Jack Im glad he's not cheating on her Not that i ever thought he was Martha really needs to start trusting Jack They need to get back together Awww Jacky said he would be ready to marry her... if only Martha hadn't of gone and stuffed things up please update soon.... with fluff

MARTHA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Now you've done it Poor Jack Now he thinks Martha doesn't trust him *cries* Martha needs to learn to open up to Jack, she's the one thats ruining the relationship Jack did nothing wrong, shes just insecure Great chapter Loved the fluffy begining Please update soon

Yay an update !! I was so excited, after two whole hours of studying, when I found you had updated Brilliantly written chapter Poor Martha She needs to start opening up to Jack... Jack better not be cheating on her otherwise i will not be held responsible for my actions Take that as a warning... I am asking the same questions. Great descriptions about Martha's feelings. I could really feel her insecurity. Jacky is soo cute Even if he is cheating... I will still love him anyway I don't want to study more... Im procrastinating now... So i'll just end with please please update soon *smiles sweetly*

Fluff Jack and Martha are just but im sensing it wont last you better not make Lily come back rach Jack is adorable remembering her birthday I love him Great chapter Please please update soon

That song goes perfectly

Naughty Naughty If Lily comes back I will not be responsible for my actions I have an idea, if Martha and Jack's parents don't approve then.... they should elope I laughed how Jack's mum checks on them like they're little kids Fantastic chapter Please, please update soon *smiles sweetly* (I would use a smiley face there but i have already used up my limit of emoticons *angry face* )

I would love it to go on longer especially since you won't be writing for a while i love this fic and i definately don't think 10 more chapters would make it drag on

They can move in together they are sooooo cute but their parents are being difficult the pool table please update soon

Wonder how they'll get out of this sticky situation They're in trouble *sings* Can't wait for the reaction of Martha's daddy aww they love each other that was an extremly cute chapter please update soon