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Thanks all of you for your comments

Tash is so funny Poor Jack Poor Martha Once they get this all sorted out they can live happily ever after that was a great chapter but you made us wait please update soon

Aw Jacky is so cute he loves her i just wish she would give in already she knows she wants him great chapter update soon

yay Ive missed this fic while ive been on holidays and when i came back today i had a lot to catch up on 1st thing- Jacky's in lurrve I cant believe Martha pushed him away Doesn't she realise any girl would kill to be in her position 2nd thing - Jack was just too cute getting all protective of Martha and going to save her...too bad it backfired Third - Jack needs to dump Laurie now and Martha needs to dump Billy........... and then Martha and Jack can live happily ever after yay! Fantastic chapters. i loved the way you described JAck's reaction to Martha at the party. PLease update soon ps sorry for all the rambling

Jacky is in luurve i loved that great oneshot poor Jack was so nervous....it was so cute

*sigh* Jack Jack Jack when are you going to learn poor Martha i really hate lily she ruins everything for Jack and Martha but at least their leaving tomorrow so thats the end of her but now we have to deal with laurie Jack has too many women he should just have Martha update soon

protective Jack is just too cute love drunk martha update soon

she loved it really they should just give in to each other already great chapter update soon

Jack is going to give into temptation isnt he marthas not going to be too happy great chapter, i just hope Jack doesnt hurt Martha like Tash thinks update soon

too cute what is Jack doing chatting up a girl when he is already seeing someone but she should be seeing Martha they're practically together anyway please update soon

Yay your back hope you had a great holiday anyway the chapter tasha can't like Jack !! brilliant chapter can't wait to see how this pans out update soon

so cute hope martha's date goes well more please

they have to do that more often please update soon

i just read this whooooole thing (yes it took me a couple of days but i finally got through it ) its brilliant Jack has to survive please update soon

sooooo cute hopefully the date goes well or not then Jacky can come and save her update soon

awww such a cute chapter i love all the jnm interaction you write them so well now they just have to get together update soon

sorry i wasn't trying to be pushy if thats how it sounded. It's just when i requested one i hadn't posted anything and now i have posted one chapter so just thought i would say something just in case someone thought i had changed my mind (paranoid ) Thanks, i appreciate you guys finding me a proof reader

I have posted the first chapter of my new fic but I still want a proofie for the rest of the chapters it thats ok