Holly Posted March 23, 2006 Report Posted March 23, 2006 Wow 2 chapters! and 2 great ones at that! Am loving this, its tormenting I want to know what happens but don't want ot to end.
ldscott Posted March 23, 2006 Report Posted March 23, 2006 Brilliant chapter! PLease post again soon!
tasha7905 Posted March 23, 2006 Report Posted March 23, 2006 Great as usual. I liked Tasha's reaction. Post again soon
AngelRose Posted March 24, 2006 Report Posted March 24, 2006 Irene was running the vacuum cleaner over the family room at the Beach House (Colleen was taking the middle shift at the Diner) when a clearly very distressed Tasha ran in and bolted straight up the stairs. Irene sighed heavily. What was wrong now? Whatever it was, it was bad for Tasha to come back here instead of hers and Robbie’s apartment. It was a good job Irene kept Tasha’s old room made up for visitors and disasters; both of which seemed to happen with roughly equal regularity in Summer Bay. Putting the vacuum cleaner out of harms way, Irene trudged up the stairs and knocked on ‘Tasha’s’ bedroom door: “Tasha love, can I come in for a minute?” she asked gently. She heard a gasp and then: “Come in Reene.” Irene opened the door to find her ‘daughter’ lying on her bed in floods of tears. She went over to Tasha and sat down beside her: “Hey lovie, did you and Robbie have a fight?” she asked. To Irene’s surprise Tasha shook her head: “No, we are great; I was on autopilot; I didn’t even realise where I was until I heard your voice. I’m sorry.” Irene hugged her ‘daughter’: “NEVER be sorry for coming here Baby; this is your home to. But if not Robbie, then what?” “Martha and I had a fight; well more like I yelled and she listened, I’m MEANT to be her BEST FRIEND Renne! Why didn’t she tell me about Morag?!” Tasha despaired. Irene thought for a moment before answering: “Can I ask you something?” Tasha nodded. “If you were REALLY in trouble, the kind of trouble that might ruin your life, who would you go to first?” Irene asked. “Robbie and you. Why?” Tasha was puzzled “Exactly Tasha. Mac did the same thing; she went to the man she loves. The only difference between the two of you is that Martha just doesn’t realise it yet.”
Wannabe a hobbit? Posted March 24, 2006 Report Posted March 24, 2006 That Irene - she's a wise one Love it, keep up the good work
Skykat Posted March 24, 2006 Report Posted March 24, 2006 Good old Irene is spot on as usual. This is great AngelRose, keeps getting better. On a separate issue I'm just wondering if you're still planning to return to your other fics aswell?
coolcatcola Posted March 24, 2006 Report Posted March 24, 2006 oh, this is brilliant, really good. You have really given the characters personalities and developed them and you have carried out the story excellently, giving just the right number of twists to keep it interesting. Sometimes i think that the home and away script writers should take ideas from the fan fiction and this is one storyline that would have been great if it were used!!! It certainly had me hooked, and im guessing it also had everyone hooked as well. Keep up the great work!!
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