AngelRose Posted June 4, 2006 Report Posted June 4, 2006 Have just reread this on here, with the comments in hopes of giving my muse a shake; we shall see. Thank you for all the kind words!
Jess Posted June 4, 2006 Report Posted June 4, 2006 I hope your muses are shaken soon AngelRose....I just want to echo what Nicole (I think) said - I don't read many J&M FanFics, but yours is one I could read forever and ever and ever! I'd hazard a guess and say it was the best J&M FanFic here at the moment
rachael_87 Posted June 6, 2006 Report Posted June 6, 2006 Yay! So glad your looking at this again. I agree with jeh-jeh, I hope your muses are shaken
AngelRose Posted June 7, 2006 Report Posted June 7, 2006 A snippet to kickstart us all! “Mac, you can't give Tasha’s money back!” Jack pled. “Quite apart from the fact that we REALLY need it, you’d only make things worse!” “Oh for God’s Sake Jack; where do you get off being so damn NOBLE about this all the time? ! You SAY it’s OUR problem but that’s easily said when it’s MY name on the cheques; my body up for AUCTION!” Jack’s blood turned to ice at Martha’s words: “Mac don’t!” “Don’t what Jack? Don’t tell the truth? Don’t face facts? You’re the one who remembered that little nugget, not me! I still get to call the shots here Jack! I may as well give Tasha her money back; better in the bank helping her and Robbie out than me pouring it down the drain on some plan Morag’s going to destroy whatever I do! Who made my personal watch-dog anyway?!” “I’m not, I’m, I’m the man who…who thought he was your best friend!” Jack’s voice shook. He’d just caught himself just in time. By now though Mac was far too angry, at Morag, at Tasha, at Jack, at the world and mostly at herself to see the tears of pain glistening in his eyes. Instead she stormed on: “Jack, if you can’t support me no matter what, GO! JUST GO!” Without a word Jack put down his tool belt and walked out. Tony followed but silently made it clear he would return. Tony knew that whatever had happened his eldest son wouldn’t want Martha to be alone on a broken-down old property. That left Corey to turn to Martha as he was leaving and comment: “I’d better go make sure he doesn’t drive; nice work genius!”
-Jade- Posted June 7, 2006 Report Posted June 7, 2006 YAY!!!!!!!!! You've written more! Thank You!!!! That was great, I just hope that Martha doesn't stay mad at Jack for long! Aww poor Jack!
Nicom Posted June 7, 2006 Report Posted June 7, 2006 You so should have seen my face when I saw you'd updated! Lol. Actually, if you're having trouble imagining it, just look at this... Lol. That was great! I'm so happy! Thanks for updating! I love it!! I can't actually believe I remember what's going on, all I had to do was read a couple of sentences from the last chapter and my brain clicked! Lol. *strokes head* well done. Please update soon! I'm very happy now!
bell Posted June 7, 2006 Report Posted June 7, 2006 lovely face nicole YAY you updated, its really good so to keep me in the happy mood you have put me in please update soon?
AngelRose Posted June 7, 2006 Report Posted June 7, 2006 I was pleased that MY Corey (who is a nice guy not a cracked, evil looper remember!), gave Mac a serve for that; she deserved it!
dolly-999 Posted June 7, 2006 Report Posted June 7, 2006 YAY, you've updated, I was starting to wonder if you were ever going to continue this. Great Job.
-lolly- Posted June 7, 2006 Report Posted June 7, 2006 YAY an update!! oo im excited now great job!! Cant wait to read on!
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