sxc_detective_baker Posted March 22, 2006 Report Posted March 22, 2006 Loving the scenes between Peter and Amanda I so wish he was like that in home and away. Great fan fic more please
Drew Posted March 22, 2006 Report Posted March 22, 2006 Thanks for the feedback guys, the next episode might be up tomorow
QUIET ACHIEVER Posted March 23, 2006 Report Posted March 23, 2006 Great storyline. Keep up the good work.
sevenpuddings Posted March 23, 2006 Report Posted March 23, 2006 I can safely say I'm addicted. It was brilliant. Can't wait for more.
Drew Posted March 25, 2006 Report Posted March 25, 2006 PREVIOUSLY… IN SUMMER BAY PETER’S APARTMENT/THE LOUNGEROOM PETER You rather stay away from me, to keep my brother happy? [Amanda stares at him] Don’t you miss all the fun we had all those years ago? AMANDA So we slept together a few times, Pete, time has changed. [Pete looks at her] PETER And you haven’t… You know you want to be with me. AMANDA I don’t. That was eight, nine years ago. This is now, I’m with Dan. PETER Well then why don’t we let history repeat itself? [Peter kisses Amanda, though Amanda doesn’t pull away] PETER’S APARTMENT/BEDROOM [Peter is asleep, Amanda is lying on top of him, she smiles] THE ROAD/ROBBIE’S CAR TASHA I’m going into premature labor, I don’t think our baby will be alright. ROBBIE Your baby. TASHA What’s that supposed to mean? [Robbie doesn’t answer] Is this about Jonah? HUNTER HOUSE/MAIN AREA TONY She’s brining a raped child into the world, can you imagine how she’ll feel? How Robbie will feel? THE HOSPITAL/WAITING AREA JULIE Robbie, you can come in now. ROBBIE I’ll be alright thanks. THE HOSPITAL/ A ROOM BELLE Tasha, are you okay? [Tasha can’t talk] Help, someone! [irene, Beth, Tony and Julie walk in] I think she’s having the baby. TASHA I can’t breathe! JULIE Okay, we’re going to have to take you into theater. ABANDON WAREHOUSE/MAIN AREA [A woman inside is chanting, she’s in the middle of five candles and around the candles are rose petals] WOMAN Blessed be my child, I welcome thee into this world! [The camera moves towards the face, the face looks upwards and it’s Mumma Rose] THE HOSPITAL/THEARTRE DOCTOR Push. TASHA I can’t. DOCTOR Yes you can, big push, big! [Tasha pushes] TASHA I can’t, it’s too hard. I need Robbie, where’s Robbie? IRENE Belle’s trying to find him love. Oh, I see a head! DOCTOR Come on Tasha, you can do this. On the count of three. One! TASHA I can’t! DOCTOR Two. [Tasha pushes] Three! [Tasha screams and makes a big push, a baby is crying] TASHA Oh, oh thank god. DOCTOR He’s a boy! [irene smiles] ABANDON WAREHOUSE/MAIN AREA MUMMA ROSE It is done! YOUNG GIRL Where does this girl live? Far from here? MUMMA ROSE Summer Bay. YOUNG GIRL Summer Bay!? Are you serious? MUMMA ROSE Heard of the place before have you? YOUNG GIRL You never read the papers did you? [The girl bends down and whispers in her ear, the shadow disappears and the figure is revealed, it’s Zoe] I was the Summer Bay stalker! [Mumma Rose turns too look at Zoe, they both smile] THE HOSPITAL/RACHEL’S OFFICE [Rachel opens the door, they walk inside and talk near the doorframe] RACHEL The results have come back from the lab. IRENE Oh good, hopefully a piece of the puzzle. [Rachel hands her the results, with a disappointing look] Are you okay? RACHEL Irene, it’s not what we were hoping for. IRENE What do you mean? You found her mum didn’t you? She’s dead isn’t she? RACHEL No, she’s very much alive and still is living in the Bay. [irene opens it, her smile turns into disappointment] IRENE What does this mean Amanda! Not Amanda Vale!? RACHEL I didn’t believe it at first either, that’s why I got the lab too run the tests twice, but both have came back with the same result… Amanda is Belle’s mother! [belle walks past] EPISODE TWO: AH THE HEART; HIS ONE TRUE WEAKNESS THE HOSPITAL/A ROOM [Tasha is holding the baby, Martha walks in and knocks on the door] MARTHA Hey, congratulations. [They kiss on the check] TASHA Thank you. MARTHA Aw he’s so cute, have you given him a name? TASHA We haven’t decided yet. MARTHA We? TASHA Robbie and I… MARTHA …I heard that Robbie was a bit upset last night. TASHA He was, or is. MARTHA Have you spoken to him since you had the baby? TASHA No. [Tasha has a tear in her eye] He promised me this baby wouldn’t get in between us, but since I went into labor he’s been ignoring me and- MARTHA He’s upset Tash, just let him be for awhile. TASHA What if this ruins our marriage? What if this ruins our relationship? MARTHA …Well, we’ll worry about it then. THE BEACH HOUSE/MAIN AREA [irene is making a coffee and Belle walks out of her room] BELLE Morning Irene. IRENE Belle… [There’s silence between the two] BELLE Have I done something again to upset you? [belle has a cheeky smile] IRENE What? Of course not! BELLE You seem funny ever since we left the hospital. Actually when I think about it, ever since you spoke to Rachel. IRENE Belle, I’m fine. [Rachel knocks on the back door] BELLE If you say so. RACHEL Morning. BELLE Hey Rachel. [Rachel smiles] Okay what’s going on? IRENE Nothing love. Can you give Rachel and I a second to talk? BELLE Alright then. [belle smiles and walks back into her room] RACHEL You haven’t told her have you? IRENE No, and now that I know who her mother is, I don’t think I want to tell her. How the hell am I going to break it to her that her mother is a flippn son of a- RACHEL Do you want me to tell her? That’s why I came around, I thought it will be hard for you. IRENE No, I’ll tell her in my own time. PETER’S APARTMENT/PETER’S BEDROOM [Amanda opens her eyes, Peter is asleep] AMANDA Oh my god! [she’s wide awake and wakes up Peter] PETER Morning. [Peter kisses her shoulder] AMANDA Peter, this is not the time! [she gets out of bed and takes a sheet with her, she changes in the bathroom] I can’t believe I slept here the night! I can’t believe I slept in your bed! More importantly I can’t believe I slept with you! PETER All for a good cause Mandy. AMANDA You haven’t called me that in years. Don’t you dare tell Dan what happened between us! [Amanda walks out changed in her lingerie, she’s running around the room all worried trying to find her clothes Peter laughs] PETER Come back to bed. [He pats the spot next to him] AMANDA No, I need to get back to my son. PETER He’s with Dan he’ll be alright. Amanda, stop panicking. AMANDA I just slept with my ex husbands, brother of course I’m panicking! [Peter puts his underwear on and walks out of bed and hugs Amanda] PETER Will we do this again? [Amanda looks shocked at what he said, but then has a big grin on her face, they pash] I take that as a yes? THE BEACH HOUSE/MAIN AREA [barry walks down the stairs, Irene is sitting on a lounge] BARRY Morning. IRENE Oh, morning Barry. BARRY Is everything alright? IRENE No, Barry it’s not. [belle walks out of the bathroom] BELLE The showers free. [irene stares at her] Do you want another minute? [irene smiles] I’ll go head down to Ric’s then. Bye. BARRY Goodbye. [belle walks out] She’s a good kid Irene. IRENE Yeah, she is. BARRY Okay, what’s wrong, something is bothering you, you couldn’t stop twisting and turning last night, I hardly slept! IRENE Sorry love. BARRY Is this about Tasha? IRENE No, this is about Belle. BARRY Oh, what did she do this time? IRENE She didn’t do anything Barry. BARRY Then what’s the problem? IRENE It’s about who she is… BARRY I’m not following. IRENE I took your advice the other week and had a DNA sample done on Belle. BARRY You found out who her mother was? [irene smiles] Irene, who is it? IRENE Amanda. BARRY Amanda Vale? [irene nods] What are you going to do with her? Have you told her? IRENE No, and I don’t think I want to tell her. Belle deserves much more than that witch. BARRY Irene you went behind her back and got a DNA sample of her, I think you should at least tell her what’s going on! THE HOSPITAL/A ROOM [Tasha is holding the baby and looking at it, Robbie knocks on the door and walks in] ROBBIE Hey. TASHA Hey. [she smiles] I was getting worried about you. ROBBIE You were? TASHA Yeah, where have you been? ROBBIE I just needed to clear my head, sorry Tash. TASHA About what? This is hard for you Robbie I understand. ROBBIE This is harder then I thought it will be. TASHA What do you mean? ROBBIE Well I thought I could look at the guy and look at him as my own, but when I just think about him all I think of is Jonah and what they did too you. TASHA Is that why you’ve been so upset? [Robbie smiles, he sits on the bed] I love you. ROBBIE And I love you too. I’m going to try and make this work, you me and the baby. TASHA That’s good. ROBBIE Does he have a name yet? TASHA No, we never really thought about it did we. ROBBIE Nah we didn’t. [Robbie bends down to look at the baby] We should of thought of that, hey little guy? [Robbie automatically pauses] TASHA Robbie are you okay? ROBBIE Um, yeah, I’ll see you later. [He kisses her on the check and walks away] TASHA Robbie, Robbie! THE HOSPITAL/HELPMAN’S OFFICE [Rachel knocks on the door and notices no one is in there, she begins to snoop around his desk and finds Helpman’s medical file, she opens it and reads it] RACHEL Oh my god! [Rachel looks shocked at something she just read] Two heart attacks in under a year!? [Helpman walks in] DR. HELPMAN Looking for something are we? [Rachel drops the file] RACHEL Doctor, I didn’t see you there. DR. HELPMAN But you did see my file. [Rachel says nothing] Why are you in here Rachel? RACHEL I’ve had enough. DR. HELPMAN You’ve had enough? RACHEL Of all your blackmail, your stupid little bully games, it’s gone to far- DR. HELPMAN I agree Rachel, it has gone too far. RACHEL So then it’s finished then is it? DR. HELPMAN I don’t know if you and pretty boy are finished or not, but we’re certainly not finished. RACHEL I was talking about you and I, not Kim and i. DR. HELPMAN Well, now you know where I stand. Is he lurking around here as usual? RACHEL If you’re talking about Kim, no. DR. HELPMAN I’m surprised none of the staff have caught onto what you’re doing. When it comes out, and it will… I’ll make sure I’ll make you’re life is a living hell! Now get out. [Rachel just stands there and doesn’t move] Did you make your boyfriend moan so hard he made you deaf? I said get out! [Rachel walks out, Helpman walks towards his desk and sits down] THE BEACH HOUSE/MAIN AREA [belle walks in from the back door, Irene is sitting on the lounge] IRENE Sweetie can you come here for a second please. BELLE Okay!? [belle sits down] Are you okay? You still sound a bit funny. IRENE Well yeah that’s because I found something out I wish I didn’t. BELLE What do you mean? What did you find? IRENE Oh there’s no easy way to tell you this… Love, I found your mother. BELLE You what? How? [irene hands her the results] You got a DNA test done on me without me knowing? IRENE It was a stepping stone to help you find your mum, but it turned out to be a rock that keeps destroying a town. [belle looks at her funny, she doesn’t open the results] Do you just want me to tell you straight out? BELLE You did all this behind my back? IRENE Belle, like I said it was to help you out. BELLE You don’t trust me? IRENE What! Of course I trust you love, it was to help you out. BELLE You just did something so personal, and you shouldn’t have done it. I mean this is illegal what you did isn’t it? [irene doesn’t answer] I’m going for a walk. IRENE Belle, Belle love, wait! [belle walks out and slams the door, Irene sits down and covers her face with her hands] AMANDA’S APARTMENT/MAIN AREA [Amanda is reading a magazine, Dan walks through the door] AMANDA Hey. DAN Hey, where did you get to last night, I was worried. AMANDA Oh, I had nothing on last night, neither did Pete, so we had a movie marathon and we both fell asleep in front of the T.V. [Amanda laughs] DAN You spent the night at Pete’s? AMANDA Dan, it was nothing like that. Our history together is way over, I call that ancient now. [Dan looks at her] You don’t trust me do you? DAN No I do trust you, I’m sorry the thought came across my mind. [They kiss] THE BEACH [belle is sitting on the sand crying, she looks at the results, she opens it up and looks terrified at what she’s reading, she gets up and begins to run] AMANDA’S APARTMENT/MAIN AREA/KITCHEN [someone is banging on the door, Dan opens it up] DAN Oh, hi Belle. Are you okay, you look a bit upset? BELLE Yeah, I’m okay thanks. Is Amanda home? DAN Yeah she’s just in the kitchen, would you like to come in? BELLE Um yeah, thanks. [belle and Dan walk into the kitchen] DAN Amanda, Belle’s here to see you. [Amanda turns around, Belle smiles] BELLE Could you give us a moment? [Talking to Dan] DAN Yeah sure. [Dan walks out and leans up against the wall listening] AMANDA What can I do for you? BELLE Did you have a baby on the 12th of January, 1989? AMANDA What!? [belle hands her the results] What is this? [Amanda reads the letter] BELLE Are you my mother? AMANDA What is this rubbish? BELLE Did you, or didn’t you have a baby on the 12th of January 1989? [Amanda looks shocked, Dan looks surprised from outside] AMANDA Oh my god, get out of here. What do you want my money? What is this thing? Some phoni letter to worm your way into my accounts? [Amanda pushes Belle towards the door, Dan quickly pretends he’s doing something] BELLE I don’t want your money, I just want to know if you had a baby on that date!? AMANDA No, back then I was fourteen! Who has a baby at fourteen! [she pushes her out the door] Stay out of here you beggar! [she slams the door, Belle looks upset, Amanda looks like she’s about to cry] Oh my god! DAN What the hell was all that about? THE BEACH HOUSE/MAIN AREA [belle walks in crying, Irene is pacing around the room] IRENE Oh there you are girly, I was getting worried! [They hug] You read the results? [belle nods] Oh honey. [They hug again] BELLE I hate her so much. IRENE Join the club. BELLE She had no right to talk to me like that. IRENE Who? Amanda? [belle nods] Honey I’m confused. You went to see Amanda? BELLE Yeah. I went to ask her if it was true, if she was my mother. She just looked surprised at me, and then she started screaming, telling me to get out because she thought I just wanted her money. [irene hugs her] IRENE Never mind hun- you still have me… So does this mean you wont be seeing her again? Like mother and daughter? BELLE No, I just wished so much that I could change my birth certificate, I hate her. AMANDA’S APARTMENT/MAIN AREA [Amanda is sitting on the lounge crying, Dan walks in] DAN Are you going to tell me what all that was about? [Amanda cries a bit more] Hey, what is it? AMANDA Remember how I told you when we were going out, that I was pregnant at fourteen, but my mother said the baby died? [Dan looks shocked] The baby never died. DAN You mean Belle’s that baby? [Amanda nods] Well why did you react the way you did before? AMANDA Because I was in total shock Dan. The baby I thought was dead has been alive all along. I hate my mother so much, when I get my hands on her I’ll make sure I’ll be the one that takes her breathe away… [Dan looks shocked at what Amanda’s saying] THE HOSPITAL/DR. HELPMAN’S OFFICE [Helpman is working at his desk, Rachel knocks on the door and walks in, she closes the door] DR. HELPMAN Come in Rachel, please. RACHEL I’m already ahead of you. DR. HELPMAN Really? Is that how it’s going to be from now on? You always a step ahead of me? RACHEL Most likely… Yes. DR. HELPMAN Is that supposed too scare me? RACHEL I don’t know, should it? [Helpman says nothing] You think you’re above everyone else, but you’re not. I don’t care about your bully games anymore, they’re over. Kim and I will be together, and nothing will stand in my way… Nothing. [Helpman gets up] DR. HELPMAN Oh, my heart is breaking Rachel. Is that all you’ve got? A stupid little speech to scare me off, you have another thing coming. [Helman walks out, Rachel stays in the room, she has a flash back of her finding the details about Helpman’s strokes] RACHEL Ah the heart… His one true weakness… [Rachel has a smile, looks around the room and walks out, she closes the door behind her] ...CONTINUED
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