Drew Posted April 7, 2006 Report Posted April 7, 2006 Ive totally forgot about Kit! I have to put her in the story sometime lol... Oh and the middle names thing, i just picked random names out as you can see lol, so Rachel could be related to Mama Rose... You never know. The next episode wont be up until atleast Monday, right now im staying at my cousins house so i cant write anything at the moment... But stay tuned!!!
Oxidizer Posted April 8, 2006 Report Posted April 8, 2006 Hey dude this is really awesome. Loving the Stalker/Believers stuff!
Drew Posted April 10, 2006 Report Posted April 10, 2006 Sorry it took me awhile to write this, I just had a busy week! PREVIOUSLY… IN SUMMER BAY THE POLICE STATION/PETER’S OFFICE [Jack walks in and hands him a few papers] PETER Are these the files of Rosemarie Jacobson? JACK Yes, they came through the fax two minutes ago. [Peter is flicking through them, Peter stops and looks very confused] Peter? Is everything alright? PETER Look at the names of her children. [He hands her the piece of paper] Read them out to me. JACK Eldest child, Elise Rachel Jacobson. Second child, Eve Rebecca Jacobson. Youngest, Jonah Robert Jacobson. What about them? PETER Read the second name again too me. JACK Eve Rebecca Jacobson? [Jack realizes what he just read] Oh?! PETER I can’t believe this! Two fugitives we’re looking for and they’re mother and daughter! I should of put two and two together when I found out that the cult leader’s last name is Jacobson. God! SUMMER BAY HOUSE/LIVING AREA CASSIE Sally. Are you okay? [sally drops the mail along with the note and runs upstairs] RIC What’s wrong? [Cassie picks up the letter] CASSIE Oh no. RIC What? [Cassie hands him the letter, Ric reads it. “I’M HERE, AND NOW WE CAN FINALLY BE TOGETHER, MY LOVE”. Ric scrunches it up] These stupid people! Why are they doing this to her!? [Ric’s screaming] SUMMER BAY HOUSE/SALLY’S ROOM [sally is sitting on the bed crying, she then lies down] SUMMER BAY HOUSE/FOYER [All the lights are off, A figure walks into the foyer and then up the stairs, trying not to make any noise, a rose is in his hand] SUMMER BAY HOUSE/SALLY’S ROOM [sally is sleeping, the figure opens the door and walks in, he moves over to Sally, Sally wakes up terrified from the dream and sees the man] SALLY Oh my god! You!? [The camera moves up, it’s Kirean] KIREAN It’s nice seeing you again Sally. [He puts the rose on the bed and smiles, Sally looks very much in shock] HOLDEN HOUSE/LIVING AREA [They kiss, Lucas begins to walk towards the hallway, Matilda follows as she kisses him, Matilda throws her bag on the table and knocks over the candle] HOLDEN HOUSE/LUCAS’ ROOM/LIVING AREA [Lucas and Matilda are making out on his bed] [The living room is going up on fire] HOLDEN HOUSE/LUCAS’ ROOM/LIVING AREA [Lucas and Matilda are making out, Lucas’ shirt is off and Matilda’s top is off] [The fire is all over the house, the smoke alarm goes off] MATILDA What’s that? LUCAS That’s the smoke alarm. MATILDA Oh my god. [They look shocked] HOLDEN HOUSE/LUCAS’ ROOM/LIVING AREA [Lucas and Matilda get out of bed] LUCAS Hurry up Matilda, before the fire spreads! [He opens up the door and notices there’s fire in the hallway] Oh no. [Matilda looks into the hallway] MATILDA How are we going to get out? EPISODE SIX: A BLAST THAT TURNED INTO THE PAST THE HOSPITAL/WAITING ROOM [Tony is sitting down looking at the ground, Beth walks up to him] BETH Hey, are you alright? [Tony looks up, he looks upset] Hey, it’s okay. [beth kisses him on the check] TONY No it’s not, it’s all my fault. BETH Hey, you can’t blame yourself for what happened. TONY It’s the truth Beth, it is my fault. If I fixed his window when he kept nagging me too, everything would have been alright. BETH Tony listen to yourself, it’s not your fault. TONY It is, and it’s something that’s going to be with me for life… It’s my fault he’s dead. [Tony looks very upset] SUMMER BAY HOUSE/SALLY’S ROOM [sally and Kirin are talking] SALLY Kirin, can you please go, it’s eleven thirty at night. KIRIN Yeah I think I should, I don’t want to be bashed up by another kid of yours. [He walks up the stairs and stands on the platform] I’m not giving up on us Sally, I never will. THE ROAD/PETER’S CAR & ABANDON WAREHOUSE [Peter is speeding in his car, a helicopter arises behind Peter’s car, four police cars are speeding behind Peter. They arrive at the abandon warehouse, two more helicopters arise from behind the building, policeman are holding guns from outside the helicopter, Peter stops the car, he gets out with his gun, same as Jack and ten other policeman] PETER I want you to watch your back! Both of them could be here! [They’re running towards the building, the building suddenly explodes before they enter] ONE HOUR EARLIER HOLDEN HOUSE/LIVING AREA/LUCAS’ ROOM [From the outside you can see flames burning from the living area, in the living room it’s pretty much on fire, Lucas and Matilda both look stressed] MATILDA Lucas how are we going to get out of here? How are we going to get out!? This isn’t right! This is all wrong! Lucas, I’m scared, I’m scared Lucas! [Matilda sounds very much in panic] LUCAS Hey, calm down, everything will be alright. [He holds onto her arms] MATILDA How are we going to get out? [Lucas runs over to his window, he tries to pull it open] LUCAS Argh! It’s still stuck! MATILDA Stuck!? Lucas, I’m scared. We’re going to die! [Matilda starts to breathe heavily. Lucas hugs her, he then moves over to the hallway again and looks out] LUCAS It will be alright Matilda, just stay calm. Breathe easy, you’re going to need the oxygen. [Lucas moves back into the hallway, Matilda is breathing heavily and still looks in shock] SUMMER BAY HOUSE/SALLY’S ROOM [sally is standing on one side of the bed, Kirin on the other] SALLY It was you? The whole time? The whole time!? KIRIN What was me? The flowers, the love notes-? SALLY They weren’t love notes, you were trying to scare me! KIRIN Scare you? Sally I love you! SALLY Don’t you dare say that! KIRIN Why? It’s the truth, I love you. [He moves around the bed] SALLY Don’t you dare come near me! Don’t you dare touch me Kirin! KIRIN Sally, what’s wrong with you? SALLY You! I loved you and you ruined my life, I’ve built a life that didn’t include you in it and it was great, and now you come here and ruin everything! [Pippa starts crying in the background] KIRIN You have a baby? SALLY I have a toddler, excuse me. [she goes out the door to go get Pippa but Kirin blocks her] Kirin, move! KIRIN I’m not moving until we’ve sought everything out. SALLY We’ve sought everything out already when we signed the divorce papers! KIRIN Oh no we didn’t! I never signed the papers! [Kirin smiles] SALLY What!? KIRIN Yeah, when I received the papers I never wanted to sign them, I still wanted my life with you. [sally looks shocked] Yeah, I’m shocked too, to think that your stupid enough to get married overseas before we had an actual wedding back here with all your family and friends. That was a shock to me when you agreed to the idea. SALLY This whole time, we’ve still been married!? [Kirin smiles] Oh god! THE POLICE STATION/PETER’S OFFICE [Peter is going through a few files, Jack walks in with some more] JACK Here are some more files of Rosemarie Jacobson. PETER Thanks mate just leave them on the desk. [Jack puts them down, Peter is still going through the files] JACK Peter? What are you looking for? PETER I don’t know, a connection to her and Eve, just to make sure that they are really mother and daughter. JACK We already know that they are, what are you really looking for? PETER I just want as much as her background as possible, so it could give us a clue to where she’s hiding, or even Eve. JACK Eve never saw her mother after she was four years old, it says that in the file when she went to go live with her grandparents. Anything in Rosemarie’s file will not give us a clue to where Eve is hiding. [Peter throws the files on the ground] Mate, go home, get some rest. Your obsession with this is beating you up inside. [Peter has a dirty look towards Jack] If you want to know where Rosemarie is hiding… Why not ask Jonah? [Peter looks at Jack] THE STREET/SIDEWALK & HOLDEN HOUSE/OUTSIDE/LUCAS’ ROOM [Tony and Beth are holding hands talking] BETH Do you think we’re coming home a bit too soon, we might ruin their night? TONY It’s ten thirty, how early can we be? [They smile and kiss, the notice smoke up ahead] BETH Is that a fire? TONY Oh my god the kids! [Tony races towards the house, Beth follows] BETH Oh my god! [Tony gets to his house and stares at it in deep shock] TONY Lucas! Matilda! [Tony runs to the front door, but notices it’s blocked by the fire] LUCAS! LUCAS Dad! Help! TONY It’s okay mate, I’m here. Try to go out your window! LUCAS It’s stuck! [beth catches up to Tony, she stares there in shock and looks like she’s about to cry] BETH Matilda! Tony, we’re going to have to get them out! TONY Hey, hey, it’s okay. Lucas! Brake the window and get out! LUCAS I have noting in the room to brake it with! TONY Oh god! [Tony races to the side of the house] Beth, call the fire brigade! [beth takes out her phone, Tony is standing at the outside of Lucas’ room, [he picks up a brick] Move away kids! MATILDA I’m so scared! [Matilda is crying] LUCAS It would be alright! [They move away] BETH Hello? Hello? I need the fire brigade, my neighbors house is on fire and my daughter is trapped inside! [Tony throws the brick at the window it smashes, only leaving a hole it went through] TONY Argh! [He picks up another brick, and smashes the window with it, trying to get all the glass out, the side of the house begins to collapse a bit, from the inside Matilda and Lucas notice this too] Oh god! LUCAS Oh my god! [Matilda is breathing really heavy] Hey, hey, hey, calm down. MATILDA I can’t. [she’s still breathing really heavily, she collapses] LUCAS Dad! Matilda collapsed! TONY Try and wake her up mate! [A part of the roof falls and creates a fire near the window] LUCAS Dad! TONY Try and wake her up Lucas! I’m going to see if the fire brigade are coming! Stay calm mate! [Tony runs to the front of the house] Are they coming!? BETH Yes, yes, they’re coming! Where are the kids? [Tony has a look of disappointment] SUMMER BAY HOUSE/SALLY’S ROOM [Continued from before] SALLY This whole time Kirin! The whole time!? KIRIN Why would you want me to sign the papers? I loved you, you loved me, why should we get divorced? SALLY Because you lied to me, you cheated on me! KIRIN With that red head!? She came onto me, how many times do I have to tell you?! SALLY She may have been a teenager back then, but she wasn’t stupid Kirin! KIRIN I haven’t seen her since I’ve arrived back here. Where is Gypsy hiding these days? [He smiles] SALLY I don’t have to answer that! [Pippa starts screaming] Will you let me go and get my daughter please? SUMMER BAY HOUSE/RIC’S ROOM/PIPPA’S ROOM [Ric walks out of his room, and enters Pippa’s room] RIC Hey, what’s up Pip? [He picks her up and starts patting her on the back] You want mummy? [Pippa nods] Well mummy’s sleeping right now, she’s really tired, do you want me to stay here with you? [Pippa nods, Ric sits on a chair he hears Sally screaming] SUMMER BAY HOUSE/SALLY’S ROOM [They’re still standing in their same place] KIRIN I notice there’s no man around the house, how did you have the kid? A one night stand? [He laughs] SALLY How dare you say that, I had her with my husband! KIRIN You’re husband, right. Where is he? I haven’t seen him around. SALLY That’s none of your business. KIRIN Did he run away with Gypsy? Is that why I haven’t seen any of them around? [sally says nothing] Did he run away and join the circus? [sally doesn’t answer] Are you going to tell me where he is? What is he dead!? SALLY GET OUT! SUMMER BAY HOUSE/PIPPA’S ROOM/HALLWAY/SALLY’S ROOM [Ric looks very confused at what he’s hearing, he puts Pippa back in her cot] RIC I’m going to go and see if mummy’s alright. Is that okay? [Pippa nods, he smiles] I’ll be right back, okay. [He walks out into the hallway, and walks to Sally’s room, he listens from the outside] KIRIN So he’s dead? SALLY I said get out! KIRIN Sally, I’m not going anywhere! SALLY Don’t make me call the police! KIRIN You wouldn’t do that to your husband now will you? [Kirin smiles, from the outside Ric is still listening] RIC Husband? [He walks in and sees Kirin] What the hell is going on in here? SALLY Ric!? KIRIN Whose he? RIC I’m her son mate! Who are you! SALLY Ric will you just go, and make sure Pippa’s alright. RIC She is, I just checked on her. KIRIN Son!? He’s like sixteen. Now there’s a part of your past you never told me about. And you thought I was the liar! [Talking to Sally] THE POLICE STATION/PETER’S OFFICE [Jack and Peter are still talking] JACK You’re not going to find her now. Not any of them! PETER It’s still worth trying, that’s something you have to learn about the police force, never give up! JACK I’m not telling you to give up, I’m telling you to give it a rest for now, get some sleep, you’re tired! It’s quarter to eleven, what’s the chances of finding her at this time of night? [Peter’s phone rings] PETER Hello? [PAUSE] What!? Are you serious? Who made the call? [PAUSE] Well where is she? [Jack raises his eyebrows] JACK Whose she? PETER About ten minutes ago? Thanks, we’ll be right there! [Peter hangs up the phone] JACK Are you going to tell me who that was? PETER Well your gut instincts are truly wrong Jack, we’ve found Rosemarie Jacobson! JACK What, where? PETER At the abandon warehouse. [Peter is getting ready] Well are you coming or not mate? If we catch her, then we catch Zoe! [Peter is on the phone] Yes, I need backup, lot’s of it. [Jack doesn’t look to sure in what they’re about to do] HOLDEN HOUSE/OUTSIDE/LUCAS’ ROOM [A fire truck arrives at the house, two men come out of there, one is getting the hose ready, another runs out towards Beth and Tony] FIREMAN Where are the kids? TONY Around the side mate, hurry, they’re trapped! [The fireman races to the side of the house, so does Tony. Lucas is still trying to wake up Matilda] LUCAS Come on Matilda, don’t give up now. FIREMAN What are their names? TONY Lucas and Matilda. FIREMAN Lucas! [Lucas looks out the window] LUCAS Can you hurry up, I don’t think she’s breathing! FIREMAN What happened? [Talking to Tony] TONY She collapsed, she’s afraid. I’m going to check on her mother, can you please try and hurry up. FIREMAN Don’t worry mate, we’ll get them out of there. [Tony races to the other side, the fireman jumps through the window and races out of the fire] Are you okay mate? LUCAS I’m okay, I don’t think she is. [The fireman picks her up] FIREMAN Can you hold her mate? LUCAS Yeah, sure. [He passes Matilda’s body over, the fireman moves pieces of the roof over that has fire on them to clear an entrance for the window] Are you okay mate? FIREMAN I’m good mate, I’m good. [The entrance to the window is cleared] Okay give her to me, so you could go out first] LUCAS Okay. [Lucas hands back Matilda’s body, Lucas jumps out] FIREMAN That’s good mate, that’s good. Make sure you don’t drop her [He passes her body back, while they’re doing this, the roof is collapsing] Hurry mate hurry. [Lucas walks off with Matilda, the fireman looks around the room and looks up towards the collapsing roof. The roof collapses on top of him, Lucas ducks and turns around] LUCAS Oh my god! SUMMER BAY HOUSE/SALLY’S ROOM RIC Can somebody please tell me what’s going on? SALLY Ric, everything is alright, can you please go back to bed before you upset Pippa or wake Cassie up? KIRIN Cassie? [sally looks at him, Kirin has a sarcastic laugh] How many kids do you have!? RIC It’s none of your business mate! [Ric walks over to Kirin] KIRIN Oh I think it is as her kids are my step children. RIC What? What is he talking about? [Ric looks towards Sally] SALLY Ric, could you please just go. RIC I’m not going until you guys tell me what’s going on! I’m not your step child mate! KIRIN Well Sally and I are married, what’s hers is mine. [Kirin smiles] RIC Married? [He looks at Sally] What is this jerk going on about? You’re married to Flynn! KIRIN Ah, is that his name? RIC It doesn’t matter. KIRIN Well she was never married to this Flynn, she’s been married to me for the past five years. You can’t be married to two people at once, don’t they teach you anything at school? [Ric looks really angry, he turns to Kirin and punches him] SALLY RIC! RIC Get out of here jerk! KIRIN Hey now, calm down, it’s all going to be okay. RIC I said get out! [Pippa starts crying, Ric walks out] I’ll go get her. THE ROAD/PETER’S CAR [Peter is speeding towards the warehouse, with the siren on, Jack is sitting beside him] JACK Slow down Pete. PETER Jack if we skip like pixie fairies, by the time we get there, she’ll be gone. JACK What happens if she’s already gone? PETER Well then I guess we’re back to square one mate. JACK How long does it take to get to this tire warehouse gez! PETER Tire warehouse? JACK Yeah, you know, the warehouse they told you where to go. PETER Yeah but they didn’t say the tire warehouse. JACK Is that a problem? PETER No, just a whole lot of coincidences. JACK What do you mean? PETER We thought Zoe died in that warehouse when she kidnapped Sally. JACK Oh. THE HOSPITAL/WAITING ROOM [Tony is sitting down looking at the ground, Beth walks up to him] BETH Hey, are you alright? [Tony looks up, he looks upset] Hey, it’s okay. [beth kisses him on the check] TONY No it’s not, it’s all my fault. BETH Hey, you can’t blame yourself for what happened. TONY It’s the truth Beth, it is my fault. If I fixed his window when he kept nagging me too, everything would have been alright. BETH Tony listen to yourself, it’s not your fault. TONY It is, and it’s something that’s going to be with me for life… It’s my fault he’s dead. [Tony looks very upset] BETH Hey it’s okay, he saved our kids. He died a hero, and that’s something we all should be proud of. TONY I can’t imagine what he’s family is feeling right now. SUMMER BAY HOUSE/SALLY’S ROOM [sally and Kirin are talking] SALLY Kirin, can you please go, it’s eleven thirty at night. KIRIN Yeah I think I should, I don’t want to be bashed up by another kid of yours. [He walks up the stairs and stands on the platform] I’m not giving up on us Sally, I never will. SALLY You lost your right to have me when you cheated behind my back. [Kirin looks disappointed] Goodnight Kirin, I don’t want to see you again. KIRIN You have no idea what you’re doing. SALLY Oh I think I do. [Kirin walks out the door] THE ROAD/PETER’S CAR & ABANDON WAREHOUSE [Peter is speeding in his car, a helicopter arises behind Peter’s car, four police cars are speeding behind Peter. They arrive at the abandon warehouse, two more helicopters arise from behind the building, policeman are holding guns from outside the helicopter, Peter stops the car, he gets out with his gun, same as Jack and ten other policeman] PETER I want you to watch your back! Both of them could be here! [They’re running towards the building, the building suddenly explodes before they enter, three policeman fly to the ground, Peter is lying on the ground, Jack wakes up looking at the burning site and the bodies on the ground] JACK Oh my god! …CONTINUED…
Holly Posted April 10, 2006 Report Posted April 10, 2006 Excellentae!! Really good job with that Drew boy!
ldscott Posted April 13, 2006 Report Posted April 13, 2006 What a fantastic chapter! Keep up the brilliant writing. I can't wait to read more!
Gypsy & Will Fan Posted April 15, 2006 Report Posted April 15, 2006 This is bloody brilliant! I love it! More soon please!
da_love_goddess Posted April 16, 2006 Report Posted April 16, 2006 Fantastic. Hope you continue it soon.
Marieh Posted April 17, 2006 Report Posted April 17, 2006 I just read it all, and I love it!!! Keep up the good work...
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