Jackieleanne Posted August 8, 2006 Report Posted August 8, 2006 Awww great chapter poor Matilda but awww Mattie and Lucas. Wonder what everyone will say when Nick and Jade announce the pregnancy.
Gypsy & Will Fan Posted August 8, 2006 Report Posted August 8, 2006 Chapter one hundred and thirty three. As the coach pulled up outside the perfumery. As everyone traipsed of the coach Matilda and Lucas were still hugging as Jack and Tony walked towards them. Jack and Tony smirked at them. “Sorry to break up the love den,” Jack said as he looked at his brother whose arms were wrapped tightly around Matilda. Lucas looked up at them and smiled as he tapped Matilda on the shoulder. Matilda looked up at them with her bloodshot eyes which had also gone all puffy, from the tears she had been crying. “Your carriage awaits,” Tony said as he put her arm around his shoulder as he moved her and Jack came round the other side and put her arm around his shoulder. “Don’t cry, your dad isn’t worth it sweetheart,” Tony whispered in her ear as Lucas smiled up at him, but his eyes were always on Matilda. Irene and Barry sat down on the comfy sofas in the perfumery. “Now this is far more interesting,” Irene said as she looked into her handbag. “Why’s that then? So you can flex your plastic,” Barry said laughing. “Well if we were going out, it wouldn’t be my plastic, it would be yours,” Irene said laughing. “We need to talk,” Barry said as he looked at Irene. “Sounds serious,” Irene said as she looked at him. As the others all sat down to wait for the demonstration on how to make perfume, Sally and Flynn were sitting down in a corner by themselves. “Sally,” Flynn said as he looked into her eyes. “Yes,” Sally said as she too looked into his eyes. “You know I love you, don’t you?” “Of course I do,” Sally said smiling. “I’ve got something to tell you, and I know your not going to like it, but I don’t want to lie to you,” Flynn said as he grabbed her hand. “What is it Flynn? Your scaring me,” Sally said as she looked at him worriedly. The tour guide and the perfume expert start talking about all the perfumes and how they make them. The girls all listened absorbing all the information about perfume, while the boys all yawn and got comfortable. “So now you can look around and buy what you like,” the tour guy said. The girls run up excitedly to see all the perfume. “I fancy the one that makes men weak at the knees,” Gypsy said winking. “Will always goes weak at the knees when he sees you,” Leah said laughing. “I know, what can I do though?” Gypsy said as she smiled at them. “Ohhh look at you Irene, buying the same perfume as Gypsy, who do you want to get into bed?” Sally said laughing. “Do you need to ask?” Hayley said winking. The boys were standing near the door ready to leave as soon as they were allowed too. “Have you told her yet?” Vinnie asked Flynn. “Told who what?” Will asked as he picked Rachel up. “I got a text from Tina the other day,” Flynn said as he got his mobile out of his pocket. “Dear God, what did that hoe want?” Joey asked as he shuffled his feet around the floor. “Whose Tina?” Kim, Jack and Robbie say in unison. “Long story, we’ll tell you over a bonding session over a beer,” Tom said as he looked up at Flynn, “So what did Tina have to say?” “She’s pregnant,” Flynn said as he looked at the others. “Holy mother of God,” Noah said as he shook his head.
Frankie Posted August 8, 2006 Report Posted August 8, 2006 ...poor Sally...that is a good twist Penny. Lucas and Mattie...Irene and Barry..... awwwwww
Gypsy & Will Fan Posted August 8, 2006 Report Posted August 8, 2006 Chapter one hundred and thirty four. Everyone was back on the coach waiting to spend the afternoon lazing around on the boat. “So what did you want to talk to me about?” Irene said as she looked at him. “Us,” Barry said as he grabbed hold of her hand, “I don’t just want to be a holiday fling, Irene, I really care about you.” “I really care about you too, and I don’t want you to be a holiday fling as well,” Irene said as she put her head on his shoulder. Barry kissed her gently on the forehead. Flynn and Sally were sitting down and Flynn looked at Sally and his heart broke into two, how could he break her heart, I mean, it couldn’t be his, she was screwing around with practically everyone in Summer Bay, except of course his mates. Flynn sighed. Sally turned around. “What’s wrong babe? Have I done something to upset you?” Sally said as she looked him in the eyes. “No, of course not,” Flynn said as he grabbed her hand. “Then what?” Sally said full of concern. “Sally… I don’t know how to say this…. But…” Flynn said stuttering. “But what?” Sally said looking up scared at him. “… I broke your perfume bottle this morning,” Flynn said suddenly. Sally laughed. “Is that all? Don’t worry about it, its only perfume,” Sally said laughing as she kissed him on the forehead. Matilda and Lucas were sitting together again sharing the last of the wine gums. “Your looking better,” Lucas said smiling. “Thanks to you,” Matilda said as she smiled at him. “I want to see you smile, its your birthday, you shouldn’t be crying,” Lucas said as he offered her the last wine gum. “I know, I know, its just hard, I feel like its all my fault,” Matilda said as she looked at him. “Why?” Lucas said looking at her confused. “If I wasn’t born, mum and dad would still be together,” Matilda said as the tears filled her eyes. “Don’t think like that, and I for one are happy you are born,” Lucas said as he moved closer to her. “Why?” Matilda said as she looked into his eyes. “Because I think your amazing,” Lucas said as he kissed her gently on the cheek. “Oh Lucas,” Matilda said as snuggled on his shoulder. “She’d been crying hadn’t she?” Beth asked as she turned around to see Matilda and Lucas having a nap on each other. Tony nodded. “I just want this day to be over, because then she can forget about him for the holiday,” Beth said as she sighed. “She’s still going to have a top birthday,” Tony said smiling. “How do you know that?” Beth asked curiously. “Let’s just say Lucas and Jack have arranged something,” Tony said smiling. “Your son has a crush on my girl,” Beth said laughing. Tony laughed. “And your daughter loves it,” Tony said laughing. “She takes after her mum, she loves a bit of flattery,” Beth said smiling up at him. Tony laughed. So what is Lucas’s surprise for Maddie? Will Sally find out the truth? Irene and Barry get closer and Nick and Jades secret is out, how will the others react!
ash_mc Posted August 8, 2006 Report Posted August 8, 2006 Awwwww! We all abitta fluff! Bring on j/m! lol! update soon!!!!
Frankie Posted August 8, 2006 Report Posted August 8, 2006 Personally I think it's just fine without J & M......not everything has to have them in it you know...there are enough J & M fics on here to sink a ship! Thanks Penny...you are getting the characters just right...just how I imagined them
ash_mc Posted August 8, 2006 Report Posted August 8, 2006 Personally I think it's just fine without J & M......not everything has to have them in it you know...there are enough J & M fics on here to sink a ship! Thanks Penny...you are getting the characters just right...just how I imagined them *boo* are u mad?
Frankie Posted August 8, 2006 Report Posted August 8, 2006 Personally I think it's just fine without J & M......not everything has to have them in it you know...there are enough J & M fics on here to sink a ship! Thanks Penny...you are getting the characters just right...just how I imagined them *boo* are u mad? No, but you have jumped on the J & M bandwagon. Are you?" (....and a hint from a mod...text speak isn't allowed on this site. (:-o) )
~Lynd~ Posted August 8, 2006 Report Posted August 8, 2006 Personally I think it's just fine without J & M......not everything has to have them in it you know...there are enough J & M fics on here to sink a ship! Thanks Penny...you are getting the characters just right...just how I imagined them *boo* are u mad? No,she's sane.I don't read any of the j&m fics,they bore me to tears,and this part of the board is 99%full of fics about them. Having said that,she should be in this one becourse then Kit can take her eyes of Jack.Rachael should come in to so then she can take her eyes of Kim and Get with Noah.They were meant to be i telly ya .All this H&N happiness is enough to make me cry! Apart from my Noahnot being with Hayley obsesion issues,this is a excelleent fic Penny,update soon .
Jackieleanne Posted August 9, 2006 Report Posted August 9, 2006 Awww brilliant chapter Penny, this is such a brilliant fic I love the mix of old and new characters.
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