summer_bay_rules Posted August 15, 2006 Report Posted August 15, 2006 Thanks for another great chapter!
Jackieleanne Posted August 15, 2006 Report Posted August 15, 2006 Great work Penny, I loved it you are really capturing the emotion in Matilda and I love how Lucas is supporting and encouraging her.
Gypsy & Will Fan Posted August 15, 2006 Report Posted August 15, 2006 Chapter one hundred and forty two. Sally didn’t say a word she just ran as fast as she could towards the coach. “SALLY!” Flynn shouted out after her. Gypsy, Tiegan, Leah, Hayley, Jade & Chloe ran after her. “You told her then,” Vinnie said as he walked towards Flynn. Flynn nodded. “I’ve lost her, haven’t I?” Flynn said sadly as he stared at the pile of rocks. “Only if you let it,” Will said as the others joined him. Sally walked on board the coach and saw Matilda still walking very gently with her crutches and Lucas still holding onto her from her back. Sally looked at them and she could feel the love from both of them filling the coach, she smiled at them, as she sat down in her seat. “Are you ok?” Matilda asked as she lifted her head up, when she heard the soft weeps from Sally. “I’m fine,” Sally said softly, as she quickly wiped the tears away. “When I cry, I always think of the happy times, like yesterday when I learnt how to float,” Matilda said as she looked at Sally. Sally looked up at her, and smiled. “You’re a sweet girl Matilda, your dad doesn’t know what he’s missing out on,” Sally said as she smiled at her, “now stop talking and keep showing the world, how much you can achieve.” As the others arrive back on the coach, they all look at Sally who is staring out of the window, Flynn goes to sit next to her. “Just don’t,” Sally whispers, “I don’t want you near me.” “Sally, do you want me to sit next to you,” Gypsy asks as she enters the coach. Sally nods her head, as Gypsy walks past Flynn and sits down next to Will. Flynn walks over to Will and sits down and sighs. “I wonder what happened?” Barry asked Irene as they sat down in there seats. “With this lot, they could be arguing over who was snoring in the middle of the night,” Irene said laughing. “I wouldn’t like to be Flynn though, that slap looked like it hurt,” Barry said laughing. “That was nothing, wait until you see Gypsy and Tiegan in action, they can pack a hell of a punch, just ask Will,” Irene said as she smiled up at him. “Gypsy punched her husband?” Barry asked shocked. Irene laughed. “Barry you need to learn so much, about this group,” Irene said laughing. Barry shook his head and laughed, as he put his head on Irene’s shoulder. “What’s wrong Sal?” Gypsy asked as she saw Sally looking sadly out of the window. “Flynn could be a dad soon,” Sally whispered as the pain filled her body again. “Your pregnant? Don’t push him away Sally,” Gypsy said as she put a hand on her shoulder. “I’m not pregnant,” Sally said sadly. Gypsy looked at her confused. “Then who is?” Gypsy asked confused. “Tina is,” Sally sadly as she looked up at Gypsy with tears in her eyes. Gypsy didn’t speak she just dropped her mouth open in shock. “You told her then?” Will asked as he fed Lily her milk from the bottle. “I couldn’t lie to her anymore,” Flynn said sadly. “You did the right thing, she’ll come round,” Will said supportively. “I don’t think so, I’ve really blown things,” Flynn said as he sighed. “Look Flynn, if I can get back together with Gypsy after I cheated on her, then you can get back with Sally,” Will said laughing. “I wish I had never met Tina,” Flynn said as he put his hands over his face. “I wonder what happened?” Hayley asked Noah. Noah shifted guiltily in his seat. “I don’t know, lets just let them get on with it,” Noah said as he tried to change the subject. “Noah? You know something don’t you?” Hayley asked as she looked at him quizzically. “No, of course not,” Noah said as he moved about shiftily. Hayley looked at him suspiciously. “I wonder what the hell is going on?” Kit asked as she looked around at all the others talking seriously to one another. “We know,” Robbie, Jack and Kim say in unison. “Do tell,” Kit said as she moved closer to them. “Lets just say, Flynn’s ex girlfriend is pregnant,” Jack said as he looked at Kit. “Well, I certainly would of slapped him, in fact I would of done a lot worse,” Kit said squinting her eyes together in anger. “Your not thinking of dad are you?” Robbie asked his sister gently. “This thing that has happened to Sally and Flynn, is what you and Joey were talking about wasn’t it?” Leah asked looking at her husband. Vinnie nodded. “So what is it about?” Leah asked looking at her husband. “I can’t tell you,” Vinnie said looking away from his wife. “Vinnie Patterson you better tell me, before I kick you out of our room and you would have to share with Colleen and Alf,” Leah said angrily, “so tell me!” “Tina’s pregnant and Flynn might be the father,” Vinnie said sheepishly. “WHAT?” Leah said furiously, “and you didn’t feel the need to tell me.” “I couldn’t I promised Flynn,” Vinnie said as he looked at Leah. “That’s ok, as long as you kept Flynn’s secret, doesn’t matter that your foster sister over there is crying her eyes out or that you lied to your wife!” Leah said as she turned around in anger. Coming up: Can Sally and Flynn’s, Hayley and Noah & Leah and Vinnie’s relationships survive with all the lies that have been told, Lucas and Matilda start scheming, Beth gets a phone call that makes her finally loose her temper & Irene and Barry get up to something in a tomb.
summer_bay_rules Posted August 15, 2006 Report Posted August 15, 2006 Another great chapter. Maddie and Lucus are great together.
tasha7905 Posted August 15, 2006 Report Posted August 15, 2006 Brilliant, I love how all the guys are getting in trouble because of Flynn. Matilda and Lucas are so adorable. Cant wait for more penny.
~Lynd~ Posted August 15, 2006 Report Posted August 15, 2006 Aww,i love how Luc helps Mattie and encourages her!Good chapter!
Skykat Posted August 15, 2006 Report Posted August 15, 2006 Great update Penny, love the drama! More soon please.xx
Gypsy & Will Fan Posted August 15, 2006 Report Posted August 15, 2006 Chapter one hundred and forty three. As the coach pulled up outside the Valley of the Kings, Sally stood up and wiped her eyes with the back of her sleeve. “Come on Sally Fletcher, I need to talk to him,” Sally whispered to herself as she walked out of her seat and off the coach. “Oh Sally,” Leah said as tears filled her eyes and pulled her in for a hug. “You know more than your letting on Noah,” Hayley said as she folded her arms and stood in front of her boyfriend. “Hayley I don’t,” Noah said as he looked away guiltily. “Yes you do Noah Lawson,” Hayley said as she looked at him with anger in her eyes. “Hayley, just drop it please,” Noah said as he stormed off. “Leah we need to talk,” Vinnie said as he tapped Leah on the shoulder. “No we don’t Vinnie, I’m too mad at you, at the moment,” Leah said as took the brakes off the pushchair. “Leah!” Vinnie said desperately. “Just leave it Vinnie, I’m to angry to look at you, let alone speak to you,” Leah said as she stormed off. Everyone was standing outside Tutankhamen’s tomb, listening to him telling them all about his death and his burial. Irene and Barry looked at each other, and they were both thinking the same thing, they wanted to rip each other’s clothes off and make wild passionate love. Irene moved next to Barry and squeezed his bum suggestively. “Irene Roberts,” Barry whispered in her ear. Irene looked up at him and winked. After the tour guide had finished his speech, they were allowed to wonder the full glory of Tutankhamen’s tomb, Beth pushing Matilda’s wheelchair walks towards the dark entrance but stops when the wheelchair won’t go any further. “Oh what?” Beth said as she bends down to see wooden mini steps, “how on earth am I meant to get a wheelchair down their!” “Don’t worry Jack and I will carry her,” Tony said as he squeezed Beth’s shoulder. “No it’s ok Tony, I can walk it,” Matilda said as she looked at Lucas. “Oh I don’t know love, you get so tired on your crutches,” Beth said worriedly. “I can do it, with Lucas,” Matilda said as she stood up as Lucas grabbed onto her back quickly, and Tony held her arm on the other side and very gently she moved her feet and walked towards the bottom of the tomb. Beth looked on and tears filled her eyes. Irene was walking around the tomb by herself when suddenly she felt someone push her in a little alcove in the wall. “What the hell?” Irene said angrily, “who the hell are you?” “You don’t know a certain Barry Hyde then?” Barry said as he kissed her on the neck very gently. “Barry! What are you doing?” Irene said weakly as each time he kissed her on the neck, she felt like she just wanted to rip his clothes off. “Are you telling me, that you don’t want to make love to me right now,” Barry said as he kissed her passionately on the lips getting deeper and deeper with each kiss. Irene didn’t answer she just put her arms around his neck and pushed her legs around his waist, Barry pushed Irene against the wall and very gently started to make love to her. A whirl of emotions went through Irene as Barry went deeper and deeper inside her, she felt like she was going to explode, she was feeling so much pleasure, she was feeling so much love, she didn’t want this moment to end, she groaned with pleasure and she felt the moment was about to end. And it did end and as it did, she collapsed on Barry’s shoulder, all she felt was love, warmth and affection for the man that had made her feel like a woman again. All the others were sitting down in the seating area after they had seen all the five tombs, they were waiting for Irene and Barry who were still in the first tomb. Beth’s phone started to ring. “Hello,” she said as she answered the phone. “Hi Beth, it’s John here,” the man said on the other end of the phone. “Oh now you ring, Matilda’s birthday was yesterday,” Beth said trying not to let the anger show inside her. “I know, but Georgia wanted to go horse riding,” John said through the phone. “Oh that’s ok then, as long as Georgia went to her precious horse riding classes, it doesn’t matter if Matilda has a **** birthday,” Beth said as she went bright red and her voice got louder and louder. “Is she there?” John asked getting annoyed at his ex wife. “No she’s not, she’s having a great time with her new friends Lucas and Tony,” Beth said as smiled as she mentioned Tony’s name. “I want to speak to my daughter,” John said getting angry. “And I wanted you to be there for me after she was born, she wanted you to be there for 7 years, but I forgot your new family is far more precious than Kit, Robbie and Matilda, so you can stick your phone call, and your stupid life up where sun don’t shine, because I for one are sick of you, so will you just **** off and leave us alone,” Beth said as tears filled her eyes as she hung up. Everyone was on the coach heading back to the boat, and Matilda and Lucas were deep in thought. “Matilda, you know how you want a dad, that will always be there for you?” Lucas said as he turned round and faced her. “Yeah,” Matilda asked confused. “And I want a mother, as I’ve never really had one,” Lucas said as he got a bit excited. “Yeah, hang on your not thinking what I think your thinking, are you?” Matilda said as she looked up. “And what do you think, I’m thinking?” Lucas asked as he smiled at her. “You want my mum and your dad to get together,” Matilda said laughing. “Well, it would make perfect sense,” Lucas said as he looked at her and smiled. “Well I for one Lucas Holden, think it is a fantastic idea,” Matilda said as she leant in and kissed him gently on the lips. Coming up: Flynn and Sally have a crisis talk, Hayley finds out Noah lied, Matilda and Lucas put their plan into action, Kit and Kim get close and Irene and Barry talk about their relationship and what happens after the holiday.
Skykat Posted August 15, 2006 Report Posted August 15, 2006 Yay! Quick updates...go Irene and Barry, that was well saucy! Lucas and Matilda are so cute and I loved Beth telling her ex where to go. Nice work Penny, look forward to more when you have it.xx
tasha7905 Posted August 15, 2006 Report Posted August 15, 2006 Brilliant I love the idea of Luc and Matilda matchmaking. Barry and Irene how naughty Cant wait to see if Flynn and Sally sort things out. More soon please
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