Tariq Posted August 31, 2006 Report Posted August 31, 2006 Amanda got everything she deserved, although I hope they continue to torment her.
shawtyy Posted August 31, 2006 Report Posted August 31, 2006 That was great, everything Amanda got was what she deserved!
xsamie Posted August 31, 2006 Report Posted August 31, 2006 Oh wow that was amazing i was cracking up when Gypsy, Kit and Tiegan threw her in the swamp, Amanda totally got what she deserved I hated her after what she said about Matilda, that was so mean and I felt so sorry for her. I loved this chapter your doing an amazing job.
~Lynd~ Posted September 1, 2006 Report Posted September 1, 2006 That was hilarious,can't wait for more.
Jackieleanne Posted September 1, 2006 Report Posted September 1, 2006 Great stuff, yay at Amanda getting what she deserves for what she said about Matilda.
-michelle- Posted September 1, 2006 Report Posted September 1, 2006 Great chapter as usual. Cant wait for more
Frankie Posted September 1, 2006 Report Posted September 1, 2006 Can't wait to see how this ...eerrrr war... ....pans out. Great stuff Penny.
Gypsy & Will Fan Posted September 1, 2006 Report Posted September 1, 2006 Chapter one hundred and fifty one. Gypsy, Tiegan and Kit found the others by the coach, they looked at each other and laughed. “What have you three been up to?” Flynn asked looking at them seriously. “Nothing!” Gypsy said laughing. “Really?” Joey said folding his arms across his chest, “come on girls, spill!” “We just flexed our fist muscles, that’s all,” Kit said laughing. “And threw Amanda in the swamp.” Tiegan said as she burst into giggles. “You didn’t?” Robbie said looking at Kit amazed. “Our hands slipped,” Gypsy said giggling. “You guys are something else,” Jack said laughing. Will woke up and suddenly saw Matilda sitting up in bed. “Umm, hi Maddie,” Will said sleepily, “what are you doing here?” “It’s a long story, Gypsy left you a note on the table,” Matilda said as she looked at him. Will got out of bed and read the note and laughed. “Are you OK?” Matilda asked sadly. “Yeah I’m fine, just Gypsy letting her temper get the better of her,” Will said as he sat on the edge of the bed, “do you want some breakfast?” “Yeah, I’m starving,” Matilda said as she rubbed her tummy, “I’ll phone Kim then, and see if he and Jonathon want to join us.” Amanda walked across the temple covered in mud and sewage. “Amanda! What’s happened?” John said as he ran towards his wife. The others look at each other and burst into laughter. “You guys were serious,” Robbie said cackling with laughter. “Hey Amanda! Did you put deodorant on this morning, because there’s an awful smell around here, and its coming from you direction?” Kit said wrinkling her nose up at her. “What happened?” John said as looked at his wife full of concern. “I slipped,” Amanda said as she squinted her eyes evilly towards Gypsy, Tiegan and Kit. “Oh didums, what was it Amanda, did you see your reflection in the water, and thought to yourself, is that what people have to look at, I may as well kill myself,” Kit said as she laughed with the others. “KIT, DON’T SPEAK TO YOUR STEP MOTHER LIKE THAT,” John shouted. “Dad why don’t you go and **** yourself,” Kit said as she stormed off. Matilda, Rachel, Jonathon, Kim, Will and Lily were in the dining room eating breakfast. “Thanks for carrying me up here,” Matilda said as she looked at Kim. “No problem, I’m not going to let you starve now, am I?” Kim said laughing. “Where’s mum?” Rachel asked her dad as she drank her water and held her sore head. “She’s gone on the trip to help Kit put the garbage out,” Will said laughing. “Eh?” Rachel asked confused. “Never mind sweetie, lets just say mummy is letting her fists do the talking,” Will said looking at Kim. “I hope she batters her,” Matilda said as she looked up. “Don’t let Amanda get to you, she isn’t worth it,” Kim said as stuffed his face with a croissant. Tiegan was sitting on the coach with Joey, they were heading back to the boat. “Tiegan, are you OK?” Joey asked as he saw Tiegan hold her head. “Yeah, I’m fine, I’ve just got a hangover I think,” Tiegan said smiling at him. “If your sure,” Joey said as he kissed her on the forehead, “I still can’t believe you pushed her into a swamp.” “She deserves it, the cow, and anyway that’s not all that Amanda is going to get, we have something much worse planned,” Tiegan said as she smiled smugly at Amanda who was sitting a few seats behind her. The tour rep stood up and grabbed the microphone. “I hope you are all enjoying the holiday, I just thought I’d inform you that there is a fancy dress party tonight, everyone has to dress like an Egyptian,” the rep said smiling at them. “There is no way I am dressing up,” Noah said as he folded his arms across his chest. “I certainly am,” Nick said smiling. “What?” Flynn said amazed. “Yeah, I mean there’s bound to be a competition for best dressed, and I just know I’m going to win,” Nick said as he winked at the others. “Can your head get any bigger?” Robbie asked seriously. “Oh I think it can,” Nick said laughing. “I’m going to go as a belly dancer,” Amanda said to John. “I don’t think you should do that, I mean is the world ready to see your fat stomach,” Gypsy said as she smiled sweetly at her.
shawtyy Posted September 1, 2006 Report Posted September 1, 2006 That was Awesome Penny, I like all the attitude Gypsy, Kit and Tiegan are giving to Amanda .
Jackieleanne Posted September 2, 2006 Report Posted September 2, 2006 Great work Penny I love all the attitude they are giving Amanda. Can't wait to read more.
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