Jackieleanne Posted September 5, 2006 Report Posted September 5, 2006 Hehe I love Jack hes great "Dr Holden" and him knowing about make up and what eyeshadow goes with Matilda's complexion. Can't wait to read more glad everyone is helping Mattie feel better.
Gypsy & Will Fan Posted September 5, 2006 Report Posted September 5, 2006 Lets just say Jack shocks everyone soon!
chatter box Posted September 5, 2006 Report Posted September 5, 2006 Jack would certainly be more successful as make up artist than he is as a cop Well done Penny, this is not an easy subject to write about (self harm) but you are doing it very well. I do not like John and Amanda one bit, and I adore the angels.
tasha7905 Posted September 5, 2006 Report Posted September 5, 2006 Cant wait to see what you have in store for Jack. I really hope John hates seeing his family so happy with the Holdens and the rest of there new found friends. Hope there is more soon penny.
-michelle- Posted September 5, 2006 Report Posted September 5, 2006 Great chapter. Please update soon.
shawtyy Posted September 5, 2006 Report Posted September 5, 2006 Dr Holden knowing about make up! Can't wait to see how Jack shocks everyone, update soon!
Jackieleanne Posted September 5, 2006 Report Posted September 5, 2006 Lets just say Jack shocks everyone soon! I wonder what that shock is going to be. Can't wait to see what happens.
Skykat Posted September 5, 2006 Report Posted September 5, 2006 Amanda and John need shooting! Go Charlie's Angels! Poor Matilda! Please bring Jack out of the closet soon! Penny I love this, more soon please.xx
Gypsy & Will Fan Posted September 5, 2006 Report Posted September 5, 2006 Sorry this is ****, I've just had a lot on at the moment! Chapter one hundred and fifty four. Everyone walked into the bar in there costumes, the boys were all wearing there long flowing dresses, and they had tea towels wrapped around there heads with a black band covering it. “Nice legs,” Gypsy said as she wolf whistled at Will. “Your going to have to make it up to me you know,” Will said as he looked at his wife. “Do I? Your still making it up to me over shagging Dani in the toilets and missing Lily’s birth,” Gypsy said sweetly at him. “Your never going to forget that, are you?” Will said as he put his arms around her neck. “Nope, your going to be in debt to me forever,” Gypsy said as she kissed him on the lips. “I think I can handle that, if you wear that outfit everyday, because right now I could shag you,” Will said as he leaned in to kiss her on the lips. “Right then, lets take some photos,” the rep said looking at them smiling. “No way am I having my photo taken looking like this,” Noah said folding his arms. “Noah, you look so sexy,” Hayley said as she nuzzled his nose. “Not as good as me, I never realized navy suited me so much,” Nick said he looked around everyone. “Oh Shortie please, do you never stop going on about yourself?” Irene asked laughing. “Nope, and you love it,” Nick said as he bounced his booty next to Irene. “Come on, are we going to take this photo or what?” Tiegan said as she folded her arms. “Right, we’re going to go in families first, shall we have The Smiths?” the rep said as she led them towards the photo area. Gypsy carrying Lily and Will carrying Rachel stood next to each other, as Nick put one arm around Jade’s shoulder and one hand on her little bump. Hayley and Noah stood next to them and wrapped there arms around each other. Joey and Tiegan stand together looking at each other lovingly. “Why don’t we have Barry, Kim and Jonathon in this shot?” Nick asked as he saw Irene standing by herself. “We’re not family,” Barry said as he stood around awkwardly. “Anyone who is seeing our mother is family,” Nick said as beckoned them towards them. Barry stood next to Irene and put his arm around her, as Kim and Jonathon crouched down at the bottom of the group. Everyone smiled and they looked like a proper family. It was the Patterson’s turn next, with Leah, Vinnie and baby VJ standing together, Tiegan and Joey again stand together along with Sally and Flynn, arms wrapped round each other. Again another happy family, they had fathers or father figures, but most of all they were all friends. “Shall we have the Hunters now,” the rep said as she led them in. “Actually, I was wondering if the Holden’s could join us,” Beth asked as she looked up at Tony. “Yeah sure,” the rep said as she smiled at them. Tony put his arm around Beth as he smiled at her. Kit Robbie and Jack link arms with one another and smile and Lucas sits on Matilda’s lap in her wheelchair, they all smile especially Matilda, maybe she is finally getting her family she’s always dreamed off. John and Amanda walked past with their family as they were finishing taking the photo, Amanda had a huge bruise around her eye from when Gypsy punched her. “What do you think your doing, with your arm around my daughter?” John asked Tony as he pushed Matilda away. “Oh go away,” Beth said as she looked at him. “What are you doing Beth, why are you with another man?” John asked getting angry. “What’s it to you? You can’t tell me what to do anymore,” Beth said as she tries to walk towards the others. “I can as you’re the mother of my children,” John said as he grabbed hold of her arm. “You better let go of her,” Gypsy said as she touched his arm. “Oh go away as this has nothing to do with you,” John said smiling at her. “I’d wipe that smug grin of your face if I was you, before I knock it down to the ground,” Gypsy said as she looked at him seriously. “You wouldn’t dare,” John said looking at her. “Try me,” Gypsy said as she put her hands on her hips. “Why don’t you stay out of this?” Amanda asked Gypsy seriously. “Oh Amanda, you’ve smudged your mascara, oh yeah sorry it’s a bruise, I wonder how you got that?” Gypsy asked sincerely, “you must be careful, you don’t know when you’ll be hitting another fist again, next time you want to bully Beth or Matilda, don’t, because you’ll be eating your dinner through a straw, got it?” Gypsy said as she walked off, “Oh and Amanda, have a bath, I can still smell the sewage on you, its making me feel quiet sick, and that’s not just me having to look at your face, have a good evening.” The others follow her laughing their heads off. While John and Amanda look around amazed, but Amanda whispers “this is war.”
-michelle- Posted September 6, 2006 Report Posted September 6, 2006 Great chapter. Cant wait for more.
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