Jackieleanne Posted September 6, 2006 Report Posted September 6, 2006 That wasn't crap Penny it was brilliant go Gypsy!!! I loved it can't wait to read more.
tasha7905 Posted September 6, 2006 Report Posted September 6, 2006 I agree with Jackie, Penny that was great. I love Gypsy's attitude, I wonder what Amanda is going to try and do next, I think she has seriously underestimated Gypsy, Kit and Tiegan. Cant wait for more.
Frankie Posted September 6, 2006 Report Posted September 6, 2006 Go Gypsy and The Angels...this just gets better and better. And...I would love to see the photos of them in their Egyptian costumes...
Skykat Posted September 6, 2006 Report Posted September 6, 2006 Go Gypsy and The Angels...this just gets better and better. And...I would love to see the photos of them in their Egyptian costumes... Me too! I bet there's some people on here who could work wonders with photoshop! Great chapter Penny, definately not crap. Go Gypsy!
summer_bay_rules Posted September 6, 2006 Report Posted September 6, 2006 A brilliant couple of chapters. Keep it up!
Gypsy & Will Fan Posted September 6, 2006 Report Posted September 6, 2006 Chapter one hundred and fifty five. They all sat down in their corner of the bar and Amanda and John with their family sat at the opposite end to them. “Ladies and Gentlemen, thank you so much for dressing up, you all look amazing, gorgeous,” the barman said smiling at them all. “Some more than others,” Nick shouted out cockily. “Yeah, your such a catch,” Kit said sarcastically. “Your just jealous, that Jade snapped me up before you,” Nick said laughing. “In your dreams,” Kit said folding her arms across her chest. “Right then ladies and gentlemen, lets get this party started, so lets start with a group dance, come on everyone get up on the dance floor,” the barman said over the microphone. “I am not dancing,” Noah said as Hayley tried to pull him up. “Oh Noah, don’t be so boring,” Hayley moaned. “You owe me for this, alright?” Noah said as he got up. Amanda walked past them towards the dance floor holding Georgia’s hand. “Its such a shame you won’t be able to join us on the dance floor Matilda, Georgia is such a natural,” Amanda said as she twirled her around. “You want a bet, I’m getting on that dance floor, and I’m going to kick your daughters butt,” Matilda said as she pushed her wheelchair over Amanda’s foot. “Ohhh, you got told, give up Amanda,” Kit said as she walked past her, “you won’t beat us, Gypsy, Tiegan and me will be waiting for you, and today was just the start, next time, you do something to upset my sister, it won’t just be a swamp you’ll be thrown in, it will be your grave.” ‘Dancing Queen’ by Abba came on. “Now this is music,” Irene said as she bopped along next to Barry. “I can actually hear the lyrics,” Barry said as he took Irene’s arm. “Do you think we’re getting old?” Irene asked laughing. “Nah,” Irene and Barry said shaking their heads, as they boogied on down. You can dance, you can jive, having the time of your life See that girl, watch that scene, dig in the Dancing Queen “Oh wait for us,” Colleen shouted as she reached the top of the stairs. “Steady on woman,” Alf said as he followed her. “Come on Alfred, its ABBA,” Colleen said as she ran too the dance floor, “Friday night and the lights are low looking for a place to go.” Colleen sings at the top of her voice. “You can dance, having the time of your life,” Alf says as he joins in singing. “That’s it Alf, relax” Colleen says as she grabs his arm and spins him around. Friday night and the lights are low Looking out for the place to go Where they play the right music, getting in the swing You come in to look for a King Anybody could be that guy Night is young and the music's high With a bit of rock music, everything is fine You're in the mood for a dance And when you get the chance... “Jade, you look so beautiful tonight you know,” Nick said as he looked into her eyes. “You don’t look too bad yourself,” Jade said as she smiled at him. “I know, I tried to make me look average, but I couldn’t, as I can’t change the way God made me look,” Nick said laughing. “Our child is going to look gorgeous, if he takes after you,” Jade said as she rubbed her belly. “I know, what can I say, some fathers have the looks to pass on to their children, some don’t, like Will,” Nick said as he nudged Will. “OI! I am very good looking,” Will said looking at his brother laughing. “Yeah, sure you are,” Nick said laughing as he spun Jade around. You are the Dancing Queen, young and sweet, only seventeen Dancing Queen, feel the beat from the tambourine. Matilda was sitting in her wheelchair looking at John spinning Georgia around. “Are you OK Maddie?” Lucas asked worriedly. “I’m fine, I just get upset when I see him with Georgia, why can’t he love me like that? What’s wrong with me?” Matilda asked sadly. “Nothing is wrong with you, he is the person with something wrong with him, and his wife,” Lucas said as he touched her cheek gently. “Look at her, she’s so pretty, Amanda’s right she’s everything I’m not, she can walk, dance, swim and best of all she has a dad,” Matilda said as tears filled her eyes. “Yeah a crappy one,” Lucas said as he turned around and looked at them. “Amanda’s right, I can’t dance like her,” Matilda said as she looked up at him. “Maybe not, but there’s something we can do,” Lucas said as he ran towards the angels. You can dance, you can jive, having the time of your life See that girl, watch that scene, dig in the Dancing Queen. “Whose for the conga?” Gypsy shouted out. “Oh, I am,” Colleen said waving her arms in the air excitedly. “Stewth Colleen, calm down,” Alf said laughing. “Alf Stewart, I am perfectly calm,” Colleen said laughing. “Right then lets get it started,” Kit said as she grabbed hold of Gypsy’s back, who was holding onto Will. Lucas grabbed hold of Matilda’s wheelchair handles and everyone followed her. “Now you’re the queen of the dance floor!” Lucas whispered in Matilda’s ear. You're a teaser, you turn 'em on Leave them burning and then you're gone Looking out for another, anyone will do You're in the mood for a dance And when you get the chance... Amanda was walked off in the dance floor in a huff that Matilda was taking centre stage when she was tripped up by Kit’s trailing leg as she danced. “Opps, I am sorry Amanda, you must watch out you never know where another trailing leg might come,” Kit said laughing, as Tiegan trampled over her legs, “see, you never know!” “Ohhh, what you doing down there?” Beth asked as she stepped over her, “at least you found your home, it where you belong a dirty little scrubber like you!” You are the Dancing Queen, young and sweet, only seventeen Dancing Queen, feel the beat from the tambourine You can dance, you can jive, having the time of your life See that girl, watch that scene, dig in the Dancing Queen. Next time: Colleen really gets in the spirit of things, its Amanda’s family VS. The Angels, Gypsy gets down and dirty and Irene, Colleen and Beth form a trio and mix that with an accident and the boys making complete idiots of themselves, it’s a must read!
amz89 Posted September 6, 2006 Report Posted September 6, 2006 That was a great chapter. Go the angels, cant wait for next post!!! Great work Penny!!!
Jackieleanne Posted September 7, 2006 Report Posted September 7, 2006 Brilliant stuff Penny I'm loving the angels and I loved the addition of Alf and Colleen and well Matilda and Lucas are just so adorable.
~Lynd~ Posted September 7, 2006 Report Posted September 7, 2006 This gets better every chapter,can't wait for more!
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