Jackieleanne Posted September 13, 2006 Report Posted September 13, 2006 Awww that was such a sweet chapter I loved it. Can't wait to read more.
tasha7905 Posted September 13, 2006 Report Posted September 13, 2006 Great chapter. Nick is such a sweetie. I loved how they said they would set Gypsy on Barry. Cant wait for more.
summer_bay_rules Posted September 13, 2006 Report Posted September 13, 2006 Oooh I love these little spoilers. Bless Irene's boys, that was so cute! please update soon.xx I agree!
Gypsy & Will Fan Posted September 13, 2006 Report Posted September 13, 2006 Chapter one hundred and sixty one – Amanda’s revenge. “Right then, we need a lady who knows how to get down and dirty,” the rep said as he picked up the microphone again. “That’s me then,” Gypsy said laughing as she knocked back her cocktail. “And we need a guy who loves himself and isn’t afraid to make a fool of himself,” the barman said as he looked at Gypsy who was walking towards him. Everyone turns to look at Nick. “Me?” Nick said as he pointed at his chest. “What ever give you that idea?” “Oh maybe the fact you take a zillion years in the bathroom, perfecting that hair of yours,” Chloe said laughing. “I bet he doesn’t take as long as Jack,” Tony said laughing. “I don’t take that long dad,” Jack said as he looked at Beth. “Jack, your in the bathroom for ages, putting all those potions on your face,” Tony said slurring slightly. “Jack, why don’t you help me get some drinks?” Beth said quickly. “Sure!” Jack said quickly as he followed Beth. “Thanks Beth,” Jack said as he stood next to Beth at the bar. “Don’t mention it,” Beth said smiling at him, “now what would you like to drink?” “Would it be obvious if I had a Cosmopolitan?” Beth laughed. “YES!” Beth said as she slapped him on the arm. Nick stood up and walked towards the bar. “I suppose if someone has to make a fool out of themselves, it should be the best person here,” Nick said cockily as he joined Gypsy. “Your so full of it, mate!” Kim shouted out. Nick stuck his tongue out at him. “Right then, Nick and Gypsy are going to get Dirrty,” the rep shouted out. “OHHH, Will, now I’m going to have my hands all over your wife, show her which brother she should of chosen!” Nick said laughing. “Nick Smith, you better be careful, or I will throw you out the bedroom,” Jade said laughing. Nick laughed. “You know you’re the only girl for me Jade,” Nick said laughing. Nick: Ah, dirrty (dirrty) Filthy (filthy) Nasty (Gypsy), you nasty (yeah) Too dirrty to clean my act up If you ain't dirrty You ain't here to party (woo!) Gypsy and Nick stood together and there bodies touched and you could tell why they were picked for this song, they were both confident and full of themselves, they loved performing. Ladies (move) Gentlemen (move) Somebody ring the alarm A fire on the roof Ring the alarm (and I'm throwing elbows) (7x) Gypsy pushed Nick off her as she walked around him and did punching movements with her arms. “We can all guess who she’s trying to punch,” Kit said laughing. “Dani!” Hayley said laughing. “Who?” Kit said confused, “I was thinking of Amanda.” “We’ll fill you in on the Dani story another day,” Sally said laughing. “Oh do we have too,” Will said as started to fidget. “Your still paying for it aren’t you?” Flynn asked laughing. “Everyday!” Will said laughing. kl Amanda was jealous, because one, Gypsy can sing and two Gypsy was stealing the show with her dance moves and her kinkiness. DJ's spinning (show your hands) Let's get dirrty (that's my jam) I need that, uh, to get me off Sweat until my clothes come off Gypsy then unbutton her red spangle cropped cardigan and threw it at Will. “Bloody hell, she has a hot body,” Kim said as he started drooling. “You can drool all you like mate, there’s only one bloke she’s going to bed with and that’s me,” Will said as he winked at Kim. “Jack, what do you think of her?” Kim asked as he looked at Jack who had his head down. “She’s alright, I suppose,” Jack said as he looked at Kim. “Alright? She’s hot!” Will said bemused, “you wait next year you’ll be drooling over girls doing that.” “I am drooling it’s just not over Gypsy,” Jack thought to himself. It's explosive, speakers are pumping (oh) Still jumping, six in the morning Table dancing, glasses are mashing (oh) No question, time for some action Nick grabbed Gypsy around the waist and pushed her down on the bar and Gypsy hit all the glasses of the bar, which smashed on the floor. “Holy mother of God,” Colleen whispered as she saw the scene in front of her. “There just acting,” Will said as he looked around at everyone. “Yeah, we know love,” Irene said laughing. “Oh John needs to take lessons off Nick, I like the look of that position,” Beth said giggling. “Are they going through the whole Karma Sutra positions?” Chloe asked as she carried looking on. “Oh Barry does that one on me,” Irene said laughing. “Gross Irene,” Joey said as he covered his eyes. Temperature's up (can you feel it) About to erupt Gonna get my girls Get your boys Gonna make some noise Wanna get rowdy Gonna get a little unruly Get it fired up in a hurry Wanna get dirrty It's about time that I came to start the party Sweat dripping over my body Dancing getting just a little naughty Wanna get dirrty It's about time for my arrival Nick swung Gypsy through his legs and then caught her in his arms. “This is putting Amanda’s dirty dancing to shame,” Colleen said laughing, “Alf you can do that too me tonight.” Alf spat his beer out in shock. “Strewth Colleen, are you trying to give me a heart attack,” Alf said in shock. “You better get your energy level’s up Stewie, you’ll be a busy man this evening,” Vinnie said laughing. Ah, heat is up So ladies, fellas Drop your cups Bodies packed From front to back Now move your ass I like that Tight hip huggers (low for sure) Shake a little somethin' (on the floor) I need that, uh, to get me off Sweat until my clothes come off Nick slapped Gypsy’s bum, and she then turned around and took his T-shirt to reveal his stomach to the world, she waved his T-shirt around her head and threw it at there table it landed on Jack’s head, he took it off and handed it to Jade. “Thanks,” Jade said laughing. Beth looked at Jack and laughed. “What’s so funny?” Jack whispered in her ear. “You telling me you didn’t like that T-shirt being thrown on your head?” Beth said as she smiled at him. “It was the main highlight of the evening,” Jack said laughing, “I love the smell of his aftershave, I must ask what it is.” Beth looked at him unconvinced. “So you don’t have a crush on him?” Beth asking laughing. “Maybe just a miniscule of one, but not as much as I like the look of Johnny Depp,” Jack said laughing. “Well, you have a point there, Johnny Depp is spunky,” Beth said laughing. “Whose spunky?” Tony asked nosily. “You!” Beth said as she kissed him on the nose. Let's get open, cause a commotion (ooh oh) We're still going, eight in the morning There's no stopping, we keep it popping (oh) Hot rocking, everyone's talking Give all you got (give it to me) Just hit the spot Gonna get my girls Get your boys Gonna make some noise Rowdy Gonna get a little unruly Get it fired up in a hurry Wanna get dirrty It's about time that I came to start the party Ooh sweat dripping over my body Dancing getting just a little naughty Wanna get dirrty (oh, oh) It's about time for my arrival Here it comes, it's the one You've been waiting on Get up, get it up Yup, that's what's up Giving just what you want To the maximum Uh oh, here we go (here we go) You can tell when the music Starts to drop That's when we take it To the parking lot And I bet you somebody's Gonna call the cops Uh oh's, here we go's (here we go) Ohh ooh ohh, yeah yeah... Gypsy walked up to Amanda’s table and got up on it and started doing an erotic belly dance in John’s view, to show Amanda how to flirt with someone else’s husband. “She’s playing with fire,” Kit whispered to Tiegan. “What do you think your doing, wiggling your bum in front of my husband,” Amanda asked as she stood up. Gypsy didn’t answer she just winked at her. Amanda didn’t say anything else she just slapped her so hard she nearly fell off the table. “You ****ing cow,” Gypsy said as she jumped off the table. Kit and Tiegan looked at each other and jumped over there table. “Are you ready?” Kit said as she smiled at Tiegan. “Let’s kick her butt,” Tiegan said as she and Kit dropped their sparkly jacket on the floor. “FIGHT! FIGHT!” Nick started chanting. Well Tiegan, Kit and Gypsy were mad, and one of them, was going to get seriously hurt because of Amanda, which one, well that would be telling, wouldn’t it?
tasha7905 Posted September 13, 2006 Report Posted September 13, 2006 You cant leave it like that Penny. who is going to get hurt? I need to know! I love Gypsy and Nicks dancing I could totally picture it. I also think I prefer Jack gay. His character is so much more interesting. Hope you post more soon I cant wait.
summer_bay_rules Posted September 13, 2006 Report Posted September 13, 2006 I hate the way you always keep me in suspense! When will you be updating next? Please let it be soon!
Jackieleanne Posted September 13, 2006 Report Posted September 13, 2006 Oh my god is it everyone's job to seriously tease us readers like hell tonight. Anyways brilliant chapter I loved it I was in stitches especially at Alf and Colleen they so need to be together on the show.
Gypsy & Will Fan Posted September 13, 2006 Report Posted September 13, 2006 I have a feeling your going to hate me at the end of this... Chapter one hundred and sixty two – Charlie’s Angels! “Oh look who have arrived, your protectors,” Amanda said as she looked at them bitchily. “I don’t need protecting,” Gypsy said as she punched Amanda so hard she fell on the floor blood dripping from her nose, “don’t you dare lay another ****ing finger on me, or I will so ****ing kill you!” “How dare you hit my wife,” John said as he jumped up of his seat. “Oh dad, shut the **** up,” Kit said as she looked at him with such venom. “Kit, what is this about, why do you hate her so much?” John asked as he grabbed her arms. “Get your hands off me,” Kit said as she pulled away. “Just talk to me, please!” John said as he stroked her cheek. “I said get your filthy cheating hands off me,” Kit said as she slapped him around the face, “I don’t want to talk to you or even breath the same air as you anymore.” Amanda stood up and wiped the blood from her nose and looked at Gypsy with such venom. “You cow, you ****ing cow,” Amanda said as she slapped Gypsy across the face so hard you could hear the slap back in Summer Bay probably. Gypsy didn’t get a chance to slap her back as Tiegan did one hell of a high kick and knocked her down to the ground. “Where the **** did you learn that?” Gypsy asked shocked. “Now that’s my secret,” Tiegan said winking. “Let’s take this outside!” Amanda said as she got up holding her side. “What? You want more? You’ve got more!” Gypsy said as she flung her jacket over her shoulder and walked out the double wooden doors that led to the swimming pool. “I love it when Gypsy gets angry,” Will said as he looked at her bum wiggling as she walked out the door. Tiegan and Kit walked outside, with Amanda following. “Kit, don’t!” Beth said as she walked towards her daughter. “Mum I have too, I’m fed up with her ruining our family, don’t worry about me, I’ll be OK, Amanda can’t beat us!” Kit said laughing. “I love you,” Beth said as she kissed her on her forehead. “I love you too mum, that’s why I’m doing it, for you and Robbie and for Maddie, Amanda has messed with us for too long, and I’m not going to let her get away with it any longer, I don’t want to hear you crying yourself to sleep every night over him and her, I don’t want Maddie to feel so bad about herself that she cuts her wrists, I don’t want Robbie to have to be forgotten anymore, I want us to be free from them, I want us to be a family again,” Kit said as tears dropped down her face. Kit walked out as Beth looked at Amanda through her tear stained face, she didn’t say anything she just slapped her so hard. “That’s for seven years of hurt and pain,” Beth said as she walked off towards the others. Amanda walked out and saw Tiegan, Kit and Gypsy standing by the swimming pool. “So you guys really want to hurt me?” Amanda asked as she made she sure she had her secret weapon in her pocket. “I want to hurt you so badly, its not funny,” Kit said as she walked towards her. “Why’s that? Because dad left your ugly mum and spasticated sister,” Amanda said laughing. Kit didn’t answer she just pushed Amanda to the floor and kept punching her and punching her, tears forming in her eyes. “Don’t you dare call my sister that,” Kit shouted at her. “Why not, its true, isn’t it? That’s what hurt isn’t it, I gave John the perfect family, I’m good looking, I gave him three perfect sons, who aren’t dorks like Robbie and Georgia isn’t a psycho like you and she can walk unlike Matilda, your family is nothing but a burden to us, the sooner you realize that the sooner you can leave us alone,” Amanda said matter of factly. Kit didn’t like that she pushed her up against the railings. “Big mistake Amanda calling me a psycho, if you think I was a psycho before, you haven’t seen nothing yet,” Kit said as she held her up by the throat, “I am going to beat you to the inch of your life, I’m going to show you how much pain you’ve put us through over the last seven years, but it won’t be mental pain, it will be physical pain,” Kit said as she punched her in the stomach. Amanda head butted Kit in the face and knocked her down, with blood pouring down her face. Tiegan run up to Amanda and kicked her around the face like you see Cameron Diaz do in Charlie’s Angels. “Your going to pay for that,” Amanda said as she felt the blood dripping down her face. “What are you going to do too me, head butt me, go on, we’re not scared of you, we’re not little things you can bully, like Matilda, we’re not Beth, we’re strong women, who know how to fight,” Tiegan shouted. Amanda didn’t answer she just got out her penknife and flipped it open. “Don’t come near me, or Kit gets it,” Amanda said as she crouched by Kit who was just sitting up, “I mean it, don’t come near me.” “OK, we’re going to go now,” Gypsy said as she headed towards the stairs to take her too the bar, “Come on Tiegan!” Tiegan didn’t move she ran towards Amanda and tried to grab the knife off Amanda. Gypsy looked on in horror as she heard one of her friends scream in pain as the knife entered the body. “NOOOO!” Gypsy screamed as tears poured down her face. So is Kit or Tiegan stabbed and more importantly do they survive and if its Kit how will Beth cope. But it could also be Tiegan so how would Joey cope would it trigger he’s Schizophrenia again. There’s only one way to find out…
Jackieleanne Posted September 13, 2006 Report Posted September 13, 2006 Oh my god whos been hurt Amanda seriously im gonna come in the story and kill you myself. I have a feeling its going to be Tiegen who got hurt and more teasing everyones making us wait tonight. Great chapter yet again Penny.
Gypsy & Will Fan Posted September 13, 2006 Report Posted September 13, 2006 I'm so cruel! You won't find out until tomorrow or this might me season finale! Don't worry I won't be that cruel! Can I add you too hotmail Jackie?
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