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Chapter one hundred and sixty three – Bring me to life.

“Is she alive?” Gypsy said as the tears rolled down her face. “I don’t know and I don’t care,” Amanda snapped back. “You have to let someone help her, she could die, please?” Gypsy said desperately. “Your not so big and strong now are you”? Amanda whispered over the body, she was gasping with every breath she took. Gypsy took one look at her and knew she was dying, she had to get help.

Gypsy ran down the stairs and ran into the bar. “FLYNN YOU HAVE TO HELP, PLEASE?” Gypsy screamed as she looked at them. “Gypsy! What’s happened?” Will asked as he stood up. “Flynn, you have to come, you have to save her, she can’t die!” Gypsy shouted as she collapsed in a heap on the floor. “What’s happened?” Will whispered to her as he scooped her up in her arms. “She’s been stabbed,” Gypsy whispered as she looks into his eyes with such fear. Flynn didn’t say anything he just rushed out of the bar towards the stairs to the swimming pool.

“You had too annoy me didn’t you, you had to push it,” Amanda said as she started to shake as she looked down to see the victim gasping for each breath, “you had to hurt me, so I had to hurt you back, it was the only way.” Amanda looked down at the victims blood stained chest with the penknife sticking out of her body. “It was the only way,” Amanda said as the tears rolled down her face.

Flynn rushed up the stairs and his heart went into his mouth as he saw his friend lying in a pool of blood gasping for breath, she was dying. “Amanda, let me help her, please?” Flynn asked as he walked towards her. “No, she deserves to die,” Amanda whispered as she looked up at him. “Amanda, please let me help her and I can help you too,” Flynn said gently as he crouched down beside the body as he saw the other one crying as she looked on at the scene. Amanda nodded. Flynn looked over the bloody body and sighed, he needed to get her to hospital.

The others rushed up the stairs and looked on worriedly. “Who is it? It can’t be Kit, please tell me it isn’t,” Beth said as she started to cry on Tony’s shoulder. “Shh, its OK Beth, Kit will be OK,” Tony whispered in her ear, “I’m here for you, let it all out.”

“It’s Tiegan, I know it is,” Joey said as he walked around the top deck as he looked at Flynn doing compressions on a lifeless body. “It might not be,” Chloe said as she put a hand on his shoulder. “What if it is, Chloe, I love her so much,” Joey said as he broke down in tears on her shoulder, “I love her so much.”

“Come on wake up please,” Flynn said as he looked at her pupils, “Amanda she has to go to hospital she’ll die, please?” Amanda nodded sheepishly. “The crew know, and are coming stopping the boat and there going to take her to hospital straight away,” Will said as walked towards Flynn, he looked down and he felt physically sick when he saw who it was, he looked over at Joey and a tear slipped down his cheek, he was going to have to break his brothers heart.

Will walked off and walked towards Joey. “NO! NO! IT’S NOT HER, TELL ME YOUR LYING, PLEASE!” Joey said as he crouched down on the floor in floods of tears. “I’m so sorry,” Will said as he crouched down besides Joey. “She’s not dead is she?” Joey asked whispering. “NO! She’s still alive,” Will said as he hugged his brother tight as he burst into tears on his shoulder. “TIEGAN!” Joey shouted as he hugged his brother tightly, “I just want my Tiegan.”

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That was brilliant I really thought you was going to leave us guessing then for another chapter. I loved it I hope Tiegen is going to be ok Amanda needs to be taken down for this she best not get away with it. Can't wait to read more.

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Chapter on hundred and sixty three – Joey’s angel.

“Tiegan, can you hear me, it’s Flynn,” Flynn said as he saw Tiegan’s eyes flicker open. “Tiegan, it’s Sally, your sister, your going to be OK, I promise,” Sally said as she grabbed her hand. “Yeah Tiegan, your going to be OK, you have to be, who else am I going to argue with?” Vinnie said as he kissed her on the cheek. “Tell Joey I love him,” Tiegan said as she slipped unconscious. “Don’t you dare Tiegan Brooks leave me,” Joey said as he ran towards her and grabbed her hand, “don’t you ****ing dare!”

“What are you doing mum?” Kit asked her mother as Beth cuddled her, “You’re a doctor, Flynn can’t save Tiegan by himself, he needs you mum.” Beth looked at her and knew she was right. “Are you going to be OK?” Beth asked as she looked at her eldest child. “I’ll be fine,” Kit said as she clung onto Robbie. “Don’t worry about her Beth, I’ll look after her,” Jack said smiling at her. “He will mum, he’s Dr Holden,” Kit said trying to laugh. Beth ran towards Flynn.

Amanda was looking over at the river crying her eyes out. “I don’t know what your crying about,” Nick said angrily. “Excuse me?” Amanda whispered. “You’ve nearly killed my brothers girlfriend, you could of killed your step daughter, my sister in law, all because you couldn’t stand the fact they weren’t scared of you,” Nick shouted at her. “Leave my wife alone,” John said as he cuddled her in his arms. “Your defending her, she could of killed your daughter, she’s nearly killed my brothers girlfriend, your sick,” Nick said disgusted. Nick went to punch him but Will pulled him away. “He isn’t worth it,” Will said as he looked at his brother seriously, “we need to be there for Joey, not fighting, this is what got us into this mess.”

“Right, it looks like a punctured lung and damage to the right…” Beth started as she crouched down beside Tiegan. “Excuse me?” Flynn asked bewildered. “Dr. Hunter,” Beth said as she ripped Tiegan’s blouse open. “We need something to stop the bleeding, a shirt or something,” Beth said as she looked at the knife sticking out of Tiegan. Joey didn’t hesitate of ripping his over jacket that he was wearing over his Egyptian dress. Beth held it over the wound. “We need to get her to hospital, now, or where going to lose her,” Beth said as she looked at Flynn.

Just then a helicopter came hovering over and the paramedics came down the ropes onto the boat. “Help her, please, you have too, I can’t live without my Tiegan,” Joey said as tears fell freely from his eyes.

The paramedics spoke to each other in Arabic, Joey couldn’t understand a word of what they were saying. “For ****s sake speak English will you?” Joey screamed as he kicked a chair over, “I can’t understand a ****ing word your saying.” “Joey, calm down, it will be OK, everything will be OK!” Irene said as she pulled her son into a hug, “Shhh, she’ll be OK.” Joey collapsed into sobs as he cried on Irene’s shoulder as they put Tiegan on the stretcher. “She has to be OK, she’s my Angel,” Joey whispered as a silent tear slipped down his face.

So Tiegan was heading to hospital where she could get better… or will she? Well one things for sure Joey was in for a rough time and when he receives a bit of news which means someone’s else life is in danger as well, he really gets angry.

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