Jackieleanne Posted October 5, 2006 Report Posted October 5, 2006 Some of the lines had me in stitches and they were only teasers. I really cant wait for the rest of the story it sounds like it is going to be amazing. Same here, I really can't wait to read all this. How many chapters have you got planned out Penny?
Skykat Posted October 5, 2006 Report Posted October 5, 2006 How dare you! Going away and leaving us dangling...you, you... I can't even think of anything nasty to say unless you don't continue writing when you get back. The spoilers are amazing. Can't wait for the next update.
Gypsy & Will Fan Posted October 5, 2006 Report Posted October 5, 2006 LOL SKYKAT Don't worry theres loads more too come! I love writing this story!
Guest Posted October 5, 2006 Report Posted October 5, 2006 LOL SKYKAT Don't worry theres loads more too come! I love writing this story! Yay you rock at writing this fan fic and you put alot of huge dramas which I love the most and please keep the work up
amz89 Posted October 7, 2006 Report Posted October 7, 2006 I just finished reading the spoiler thing it was good a little confusing though is that what there meant to be saying and is that for the squeal??
Frankie Posted October 8, 2006 Report Posted October 8, 2006 The "spoiler thing" is meant to be snippets of conversations which we are going to be able to read in the coming months as Penny writes the next chapters in the lives of all of these characters. Some of the characters we have not seen yet... some have not been born yet...and it sure sounds like its gonna be fun... I already hate Dani......go the Summer Bay Angels ...
Gypsy & Will Fan Posted October 8, 2006 Report Posted October 8, 2006 Chapter one hundred and seventy six – The End of the Road. “JADE!” Nick screamed as he ran towards her. “Get her out of here,” Jade said weakly. “Are you OK?” Dani said pathetically. “GET OUT!” Nick shouted at her, as he out his arms around Jade. “Jade…” Dani said grabbing Jade’s arm. “Get off me,” Jade said looking at her disgustedly, “someone get her out.” Gypsy didn’t need to be told again she picked Dani up and walked out and chucked her on the bin bags. “Dani, you really are one hell of a bitch,” Gypsy said as she walked back inside. “We better take you to hospital,” Irene said grabbing her keys. “I’m fine, honestly,” Jade said as she took the glass of water Nick gave her. “You really should get checked out,” Shelley said as she walked towards her daughter. “What do you care, you don’t care about this baby or me,” Jade said looking at her mother with such anger. “Come on babe, lets get you checked out,” Nick said as he led her out with Irene following her. “I’ll call you,” Irene said sympathetically to Shelley. “You’ll let us know as well, won’t you?” Will asked as he walked out the door with Gypsy, Lily and Rachel. “Of course sunshine,” Irene said as she got in the car. Will watched as the car drove off. He turned around and saw Gypsy had disappeared with Lily and Rachel. “Gypsy,” Will said as he looked around. Gypsy was walking along the beach carrying Lily and holding Rachel’s hand. “Where’s daddy,” Rachel asked as she looked up at Gypsy. Gypsy looked down at Rachel as a single tear slipped down her cheek. “Why are you crying mummy?” Rachel asked her sadly. Will was walking along the other side of the beach and came face to face with Dani. “What were you playing at Dani?” Will asked crossly. “Don’t know what your talking about,” Dani said smugly. “Yes you do, you saying I’m pregnant with your baby, I didn’t have sex with you on that day, because frankly you were **** the first time,” Will said getting angry. “I know that, you know that, but Gypsy doesn’t and I will do everything in my power to ruin your perfect little family,” Dani said winking at him, she looked up and saw Gypsy walking towards them. This was the moment she’d been waiting for, for months. Without a thought Dani forced herself on Will and kissed him passionately. “Mum, why is Dad kissing another woman?” Rachel asked confused. Gypsy’s head shot up and the sight that she was greeted with broke her heart. “WHAT THE **** IS GOING ON?” Gypsy shouted as she stormed over. “Gypsy this isn’t what it looks like,” Will said as he finally pushed Dani off him. Gypsy didn’t say anything she just gave him the biggest slap around the face ever. With that she took her engagement and wedding ring off and place it in his hand. “We’re over Will, I hope you, Dani and your unborn child have a great life together,” Gypsy said as she ran off as fast as her legs would carry her. Will ran after her. Dani turned around and saw Josh behind her staring at her. “Phase 2 complete,” Dani said laughing. “Are we ready for phase 3?” Josh asked laughing. “We sure are!” Dani said laughing loudly. What’s phase 3?
Jackieleanne Posted October 8, 2006 Report Posted October 8, 2006 That was great awww poor Gypsy why did you let her kiss you Will. I hope Jade will be ok.
Guest Posted October 9, 2006 Report Posted October 9, 2006 I love it and it really funny fic as well and I love it always
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