-Jade- Posted May 18, 2006 Report Posted May 18, 2006 :o Omg! I'm gonna do what nicole did... Nooooooooooooooooooooooooo!!!!!!!!!!!! that better not be Jack, or you're gonna be in BIG trouble! lol I hope he's ok . Please update as soon as you possibly can!!!
Jamey-Maria Posted May 21, 2006 Report Posted May 21, 2006 Sorry this chapter's really bad and not very interesting. I will have more J&M interaction soon. Anyway, here it is. Chapter Twleve "Dad!" Lucas screemed at the top of his lungs. It was dark now and his voice rippled through the streets, shattering the quiet that had been before it. Lucas had seen the car and the force in which it rammed his dad into the road. "Dad," He screamed again, rushing to his fathers aid. He was terrified. He had never been so scared in his whole life. He knelt down besides his father, squeezing his shoulders. "Dad can you hear me? Please dad open your eyes." There was no respnose. Lucas checked for a pulse. He found one but it was very week. (in true home and away style ) He ripped is phone out of his pocket, almost tearing a hole in his jeans and dialled triple 0. For the the entire duration of the conversation he didn't once take his eyes off his dad. Lucas was gripping Tony's hand and he could feel him squeezing back. As he waited for the ambulance, he was engulfed in his fear and his eyes began to water. "Dad please," Lucas cried, he was beginning to beg. "I need you, you can't leave me!" Tears were gushing down his face as his stared at the semmingly lifeless body. Lucas needed comfort and reasurance. He needed an adult to hug him and tell him everything was going to be fine, even if it wasn't. He needed a parent, and the only one he had was almost dead lying on the side of the road. He found himself automatically dialling Beth's number. ********************************************************** Jack heard a scream coming from down the road but before he could think a car zipped straight past him, narrowly missing him. He stood there stunned by what had just happened until a second scream broke him from his thoughts. "Dad, " It sounded. He didn't need to think, he knew who it was. He could hear Lucas talking but he didn't know where he was, so he followed the general direction of the sound. He was still pretty intoxicated but he knew what he was doing and that he needed to help. "Lucas," he called out after a minute. "Jack?" Lucas responded. "Over here," Jack could just make out Lucas' outline from across the road in the dark. He was kneeling over someone. "No.... god no!!!" Jack yelled as he ran over to Lucas. "What the hell happened?" He screamed, realising that the body belonged to non other than his father. Lucas opened his mouth to speak but all that came out was a loud cry. Jack didn't care anymore, he followed Lucas' lead and his face was covered in tears, which came out almost instantly. They were besides themselves with grief. Jack put his arms around Lucas as he continued to cry. Realising that he had to take control of the situation, Jack swallowed his tears and pulled at Lucas' arm so he would turn his head to face Jack. "He will be fine," Jack told his younger sibling. "This is Dad we're talking about, he will hang in there." This made Lucas feel a lot better. Jack was glad that he had managed to stop his brother from crying, but he was beginnig to doubt the words he had just spoken. Especially when he noticed blood seeping from the back of Tony's head. He hugged his brother tighter. The sound of an ambulance shook them from there silence. *********************************************************** The doors to the emergency ward swung open, and in rushed a frantic Beth. She spotted both Luc and Jack raced over. The lights were a blindingly bright and the walls seemed cold and uninivting. All around there were sick people and it was as if they were waiting on death's doorstep. "Where is he? What happened? What did the doctor say?" She spoke hard and fast like time was against her. The questions came all at once with no pause or break for breath. The call that Luc had made her earlier had devastated her. It didn't seem real and she didn't want to believe it. She stared eagerly at both boys anticipating an answer. They both had bloodshot eyes and were staring at there hands. They hadn't said a word since the ambulance had arrived. Lucas had wanted Jack to keep reasurring him, to tell him everything would be fine, but he didn't. At all the questions Lucas burst into another well of tears. He couldn't stand it. "I'm so sorry," Beth apologised, realising how selfish she had been. She sat next to Lucas and wrapped her arms around him as if he were her own child. She kissed his forehead and gently wiped his tears with her finger. "Everything's going to be alright sweet" She whispered. "He'll be alright." Beth felt a great deal of empathy towards him as she knew what it was like to be concerned about your fathers saftey. The whole time Graham had been at war when Beth was a child she had worried herself sick. Her eyes were drawn towards Jack. He was keeping his feelings hidden for the moment. He was having the most awful day from what she could make out before, and now he had this to add to to it. Beth was about to speak to him when Flynn walked out. Jacked jumped out of his seat, nearly nocking the coffee in front of him. "Is he he O.K," Jack asked. Beth and Lucas both looked up waiting for response, praying that it would be postive. Flynn looked at the hopful faces and sighed. Trying to break the news as gently as possible. He was going over the words in his mind when Beth interupted him. "Flynn if something's wrong then just tell us!" "Tony took quite a severe blow to the head," He started. He paused again trying to prepare them for the news that was to follow.
linzie_mac01 Posted May 21, 2006 Report Posted May 21, 2006 What the bloody hell do you think you're doing leaving it like that?!?! Oh god, Tony, Noooooooooooooooooooooooooo He has to be alright, please let him be ok! That was really really great writing and I can't wait to read more
-Jade- Posted May 21, 2006 Report Posted May 21, 2006 What the bloody hell do you think you're doing leaving it like that?!?! My point! What do you think you're doing??? Noooooo! Tony! How could you leave it there?? How mean is that! Well all I can say is that you better write fast and update soon, otherwise i will be after you... You have been warned....
Nicom Posted May 21, 2006 Report Posted May 21, 2006 Yea! And I'll be with jackandmartha!!! He better be okay, else... i don't know, I'll find a way to get you back! Lol. Please update soon! I'm dying here! And so is Tony...if he's not dead alrady :S
bell Posted May 21, 2006 Report Posted May 21, 2006 that is just plain mean leaving it like that just please up date soon
katie343 Posted May 21, 2006 Report Posted May 21, 2006 arghhhhhhhhhh you can't stop it there what were you thinking? please update soon
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