Jamey-Maria Posted April 23, 2006 Report Posted April 23, 2006 thanx so much. i really appreciate all the positive feedbak i'll try and update it tomorow
linzie_mac01 Posted April 23, 2006 Report Posted April 23, 2006 I've just read and caught up and it's fantastic! Hope someone helps Martha!
Nicom Posted April 23, 2006 Report Posted April 23, 2006 Hey can I just ask what that means. Is Martha having a heartattack or something? I'm sorry I'm not bright. lol
bay girl Posted April 24, 2006 Report Posted April 24, 2006 Martha went into cardiac arrest (twice, i think) after the car accident. So she kind of has heart problems now, it's probably quite weak because of that and especially coz she's quite young.
Jamey-Maria Posted April 24, 2006 Report Posted April 24, 2006 I'm sorry i should have been clearer. Please read this updated version. End Of Chapter Three Lying awake in bed that night Martha bagan to feel ill again. Her stomach ached and twitches of pain crept all over her body. No matter which way she turned she could not shake the feeling. The pain was begining to become unbearable until it suddenly dawned on her. The pain wasn't coming from the food poisonig, it was a stabbing sensation coming from her chest. The pain was coming from her heart. It was the ache of not being with Jack. Again I apologise for not being clearer. I'll post again later
Jamey-Maria Posted April 24, 2006 Report Posted April 24, 2006 I'm writting the next chapter as we speak. Should be done in the next hour. Thanks for the reviews
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