Nicom Posted July 26, 2006 Report Posted July 26, 2006 It is creepy!! Lol. Great though! Loved the Lucas bit!! More soon!!
shawtyy Posted July 26, 2006 Report Posted July 26, 2006 Harry is really crazy awesome chapter, can't wait for more!
bay girl Posted July 27, 2006 Report Posted July 27, 2006 Hope this Anna girl doesn't hang around. Martha will probably see her and realsie that she was the girl that Jack was kisssing, and take off. Actually something that i was wondering about. Has Martha even told Jack that she and Corey broke up. Because i don't remember reading it. Hmmm. Anyways, excellent update. Very funny. I hope to read some more soon.
puja Posted July 27, 2006 Report Posted July 27, 2006 WOW! First of all, I just wanna say how funny the opening sequence was...I was literally in stitches! Secondly, I agree with Nicole in that it was a little creepy (Harry and the shooting) but it was excellently written. Can't wait for more, please update soon!
-Annie- Posted July 28, 2006 Report Posted July 28, 2006 Woah, that was a full-on chapter! But a great one too! Yes the Harry thing was a bit creepy, but I loved the Lucas scenario! Hope Jack and Martha are together now!
SaRaH_16692_ Posted July 28, 2006 Report Posted July 28, 2006 Woah, that was a full-on chapter! But a great one too! I agree completely, my favourite bit was what Lucas said. The last bit with Harry and the shootings was definitly really creepy. Can't wait for the next chapter!
Martha_Jack Posted July 28, 2006 Report Posted July 28, 2006 I love how Lucas is like OH MY GOD Hope Jack and Martha stay together Update soon
Jack and Martha 4eva Posted July 28, 2006 Report Posted July 28, 2006 I just read all of it, it's fantastic please add more as soon as possible, it's great!
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