Jamey-Maria Posted July 30, 2006 Report Posted July 30, 2006 Sorry if the last chapter was a bit too creepy. Just thought I needed to show Harry's deteriorating sanity, lol. Chapter Twenty-Two "So that means she's broken up with Corey then?" Lucas asked. Jack focused on the wall behind Lucas. "Well, um, no. Not exactly." "Jaaaack.." "WHAT! Before you came in I wasn't really thinking about Corey to be honest." He tried to defend himself. "Well that's obvious. I know exactly what you were thinking about," Lucas sarcastically quipped. "Yeah so sue me! I'm in love with the girl, is that so wrong?" Jack even surprised himself with how honest and open about his feelings he was being. Lucas sighed. "It is when she's got a boyfriend. Do you really think you could handle sharing her? More importantly you shouldn't have to. If it's really as right as you say it is surely waiting a few days until she's broken up with Corey, if that's what she's going to do, isn't going to hurt." Jack couldn't really respond, he hated it when Lucas was right. For someone his age he'd grown up really quickly and was full of good advice. "I guess you're right," Jack admitted looking at the floor. "What? Say that again." "Say what?" Jack asked. "That I was right! R.I.G.H.T." Jack laughed, 'well, he's not that mature' He thought. Anna was beginning to get more and more uncomfortable as time past. She wanted to just walk down the driveway and leave but that would be rude. She also didn't want to interrupt anything. She took a deep breath and stuck her head around the door. "I'm just going to go," She said to Lucas smiling awkwardly until her eyes met Jack's. Lucas turned around surprised to hear a voice from behind him. "O Anna. I'm sorry, I totally forgot you were here." "Anna!" Jack said in astonishment. Even though it had only been a day since he'd seen her so much had happened that it had felt like a lot longer. "What are you doing here?" "I just wanted to talk to you, but um it seems like you're busy so I'm just going to go." "No don't!" Jack quickly shot out. He was still a bit weird about what happened between them last night but also felt bad for her. What she'd done had been because she was really upset and he also wanted to know if she was feeling any better. He didn't really know why, but he did. "It's just you seemed pretty distracted and I don't want to interrupt anything." She said innocently. "Come in," Lucas said, suddenly aware that she was still standing outside the door. Anna shyly walked in and stood close to couch, holding her left hand with her right. "I'm just going to get a glass a of water." Lucas made his way to the kitchen, giving them a little privacy. "So what was it that you wanted to say?" Jack asked as he sat down on the couch and invited Anna to do the same. "Well um, last night, as you know I wasn't that great. Actually that's an understatement," She chuckled. "I was a total mess. Looked like it too." "Aww, you weren't that bad," He laughed. They both smiled. "I just wanted to say sorry. You were obviously upset about something yourself and there was no need to burden you with my problems." "There's no need to apologize. I can't imagine what it must have been like for you to find that out." Anna tried to force a smile. Jack had obviously brought back up a very painful subject. "I'm so sorry, I've just gone and stuck my foot in my mouth. I didn't mean to bring it back up." "No that's alright. I guess I'll have to deal with it sooner or later." "Well I'm here if you need to talk about it or anything." "Thanks. It really means a lot." She smiled. Martha walked out of Jack's bedroom to see Jack and some girl sitting on the couch smiling at each other. Martha hadn't even been gone for five minutes and already there was another girl there. The fact that she was a very attractive blonde wasn't helping. She couldn't help but feel jealous. She looked slightly familiar. When she saw her face though she didn't recognize it, she'd never seen her before. It took almost everything Martha had to push down her niggling insecurities and walk over to the couch. She was slightly put off that they hadn't even noticed she was in the room yet because they were so focused on talking. As she made her way closer, ready to introduce herself, she couldn't help but hear what they were saying. "Last night when we kissed...." Anna started but stopped and turned silent when she became aware of Martha's presence. Jack was now uncomfortably conscious that Martha had heard every word.
SaRaH_16692_ Posted July 30, 2006 Report Posted July 30, 2006 i want to start off by saying 'I don't like Anna' i hope Martha doesn't take it the wrong way. Also i can't wait till Martha tells Jack that she has boken up with Corey, i don't no why it just amuses me Can't wait for the next update
xsianx Posted July 30, 2006 Report Posted July 30, 2006 Aww Poor Martha! Go away Anna!!! Great update looking forward to more.
shawtyy Posted July 30, 2006 Report Posted July 30, 2006 Poor Martha, hope she doesn't just run off. She should listen to the explanation.
-Annie- Posted July 30, 2006 Report Posted July 30, 2006 Poor Martha! Stupid Anna...grrr Great chapter! Can't wait for more.
Jacksthehottest Posted July 30, 2006 Report Posted July 30, 2006 awww poor Martha, this is great please update soon i can't wait to read more
puja Posted July 30, 2006 Report Posted July 30, 2006 That was great! I'm not liking that Anna...please update soon!
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