puja Posted August 20, 2006 Report Posted August 20, 2006 YAY! Thanks for updating! Jack should forget about his stupid male ego and just go apologies!! When is he going to learn?! Can't wait for the next update
bay girl Posted August 21, 2006 Report Posted August 21, 2006 Jack you dumbass. Go and apologise right now, before i kick you in the face. Great update. Hope to read more soon.
-Annie- Posted August 21, 2006 Report Posted August 21, 2006 Krystal - Don't let Nicole threaten or bully you. It is very wrong. Just do it back to her and she'll behave! Great chapter! I'm loving this fic.
Nicom Posted August 21, 2006 Report Posted August 21, 2006 Krystal - Don't let Nicole threaten or bully you. It is very wrong. Just do it back to her and she'll behave! Great chapter! I'm loving this fic. If you spent your time actually doing what is asked and commented on the fic, more people would like you.
Jamey-Maria Posted August 22, 2006 Report Posted August 22, 2006 Sorry yet another boring chapter. It will pick up soon though i promise Chapter Twenty-five "Like I said before you need to rest and all this stress isn't good for you. It's not good for a normal person let alone a recovering car accident victim," Flynn said. "How about I make a deal with you? If you promise to rest up i'll let you go this afternoon." Tony's eyes lit up. "The test results came back clear so there's no reason why we should keep you here apart from making sure you stay in bed and rest. If you promise to do that at home then you can go." "Great." Tony practicall sang, grinning like a child. "I promise I'll take good care of him," Beth assured Flynn. "I'll just go and fill out the paper work shall I?" He asked not needing an answer. ******************************************** "AHHHH," Colleen screamed as she hobbled into the diner, scaring half the customers to death. "What's wrong?!" Irene screamed running out from behind the counter as fast as she could, alarmed by the thought that Colleen might have been hurt. "There's a murderer. A MURDERER! She repeated herself louder and turned to face her growing audience "It's terrible!" She continued. We've been walking around oblivious and with our doors unlocked when there's a cold blooded killer out there." She was in hysterics now and costumers had started to get up. "Whatever are we going to do?!" She cried and raising her arms in a frenzy. "Shut up!" Irene snarled, dragging her by the arm into the kitchen. "Didn't you hear me? I said there's a murderer," she said getting louder. "I heared you!," Irene screamed back. She was so mad at her she was having the most un-holy thoughts about gagging her. "You can't just come waltzing in here and yelling like a maniac Colleen." "Bu-" "No matter what the circumstance. Now take a deep breath and tell me what's going on." *************************************************** Martha was sat with her head in her hands. She was stil in her p.j's sitting cross legged on her bed. She hadn't left the house in two days, she couldn't. Her cheeks were tear stained and her eyes were deep red. She couldn't help but cry everytime she thought of Jack. 'There are names for girls like you' The words swirled around in her head until they landed heavily on her heart. Her entire life, no matter what it had thrown her way she was always able to get through things. She was always able to pick herself up and move on because she based her life around her morals and self respect. But with that one sentence that was said in the heat of the moment, Jack had taken that away from her. Any other person and she could have brushed it off, but coming from Jack's mouth made all the more hurtful. There was no use in trying to pretend that it ment nothing or that she didn't love him because she knew she did. Salty tears formed in her eyes and she brought the pillow up to her face, sobbing into it. ********************************************** "Can I go in?" Tasha asked Alf, looking down at him from where he was sitting at a table in the Diner. "Sure love the door's open. LikeIi said on the phone though she's been upset about something for days. I just want to get her out of bed and talking about it, if not to me then to someone." "I'll do my best." Tasha smiled and walked up the stairs to the apartment. ************************************************ "Mac, are you there?" Tasha asked softly, gently opening the door. Martha looked up from where she had her head pressed against the pillow, letting it absorb her tears to see Tash. "Mac what's wrong?" She made her way to Martha's bed and sat beside her putting her arms around her best freind as she continued to cry ino her shoulder. "It's such a mess Tash." "Shhh. It's o.k" She soothed hugging her tighter. ************************************************* "God save us." Irene cooed. "When did all this happen?" "Apparently two days ago. Madge Willkinsin's neice's sister lives next door to him. Poor thing went around this morning to tell them to move the bins and swa a black car with with blood on it. She called the police and when they raided the house they found a little book with all these names and 'jobs' in it. Apparently he was a hit man!"
miss HAA Posted August 22, 2006 Report Posted August 22, 2006 Please post some more soon that was a great chapter
xsianx Posted August 22, 2006 Report Posted August 22, 2006 Fantastic chapter. Poor Martha, Damn Jack. Well done can't wait for the next chapter
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